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I'm surprised at the low ratings people are giving this fanfic,some people are complaining about he's God complex when it makes sense,you have one of the best quirks in the world and you know it,you've also been raised by villain parents who are not in the least humble,when you've been the best at everything and are still the best at everything,you tend to not be humble,others are talking about how he hasn't changed and there's no character development,Law from an early age worked extremely hard and acquired all he has,in he's view when he started at UA,all the students were horrible and didn't use their quirks right,most of the students haven't done anything to change that view,so why would Law be influenced by them??I think this is an amazing story with amazing writing,one of the best I've read
honestly, it's one of the best books I've read on this app, and it's free. im beyond words on how amazing the story is and how much it makes me want to keep reading. I can't wait for the next chapters author keep the crazy good work up 🥳🥳
Una obra que para los lectores evidencia matices de mejora en cuanto a la técnica narrativa, más aún para aquellos que tienen la oportunidad de leer numerosos capítulos consecutivamente. Es una trabajo en general disfrutable, programado y gratamente ejecutado, se espera un desenlace acorde con la dirección percibible de la obra, y más aún alguna novela original por parte del autor. Novela casual recomendada.
I don't know if I've already made a review or not but here it is :) I must say that this is probably one of the FF with the best grammar and consistent updates, so I highly recommend it. Also, the story is entertaining and logical with a lot of sense, although if the author sees this, I tell them that I eagerly await the original story they plan make.
I did my 2023 review thing and this was the fanfic I read the most, Good fanfiction[img=update]
it far exceeded my expectations. I'm not saying it's perfect, as the protagonist's personality isn't the best, but the overall interactions feel more real.
Top tier MHA FF here, great original characters, well done on characterizing existing characters. MC is an overpowered but isn't super overpowered, author keeps it reasonable. MC is a jerk most of the time and at times it is over the top and or cringe, this would be my only complaint if I was nitpicking. Otherwise even though the story contains a lot of the similar plot points as the anime it is pretty unique and deviates a lot.
I can't read other MHA fanfics anymore because of this fanfic. Is very good. Author, take responsibility! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This fanfic is a lot, but not anything for me. I really tried to stick with it, but the mc just stays the insufferable a hole and even if snipits of his personality change a bit . It's just annoying after over a 100 Chapters and sucks the joy out of the reading experience. Still worth a try to see if you like it, just don't expect the mc to change for the better anytime soon. Because of that the story feels also very bland, but the update stablility and writing quality are good. That all from me.
En general me gusta, no llegaría a leer tanto si no me gustara. Vi siempre muchos comentarios en contra del protagonista, veo el por que, pero en lo personal me gusta... Tomando en cuenta a sus padres, la educación que le dieron, las ideas que son su base de ser.... No me parece inadecuado... Es un personaje con mucho ego, podría decirse con egolatría en vez de egoísta (cosas diferentes) pero es cómodo para mi ver la imperfección que lo sigue manteniendo en las linea humana (el propio personaje dice incluso que no es un dios bíblico sino más parecido a uno griego... Los dioses griegos son más mundanos y ni siendo dioses son omnipotentes-omnipresentes-omniscientes).... Además si se mira la etiqueta claramente dice -antiheroe- ... Un héroe clásico suele tener un camino guiado más suave y claro, como cuento de hadas... En cambio un antiheroe pasa por cosas y experimenta cosas que el otro no haría, ambos son un tipo de héroe pero no recorren el mismo camino, yo nunca esperé un All might, ni quiero verlo, tampoco esperaba un egocentrista pero lo acepto (
The writing is good, but there are misused words, prepositions etc from time to time. It's still good. The story development is meh, pretty much a rehash really, but MC save the day most of the time coz' of his quirk. The dialogues are funny at times, but got repetitive fast. MC say the same things most of the time. The Character design is bad, there's no character development or whatever, and most OG main characters are just extras. Jiro & Momo have the exact same will they or won't they scenarios. It has good number of chapters available and each one is quite chunky so that's great. The World Background is like I said, mostly rehash so far. nothing new so I give it a mid score. The first 150 chapters are fun, but after that the said cons are magnified by a lot. I currently at ch 214, I'm reading a lot but nothing of substance. It's like a nothing burger.
Although the reasoning behind how his Quirk come to be and how the Quirk works in this fiction seems a little different from the Cannon but I must say this fanfiction is really good especially in the character department too, sometimes I really don't like the MC but that just makes him feels more real
My favorite MHA fanfic. Horizon, the mc, is one of the best mc. I also realy like how the story slowly diverged from canon but was still making sense. also the writting is really great. I definitely recommand this story.
My top three favourite FanFiction the best thing about this novel for me was the protagonist
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i just need a spoiler to know if i continue reading or not, who is the female lead... idk if it's harem i just want to know who is the love interest of law so i can keep reading
now for starters this is gonna be a dark novel showing the darker side of the MHA verse and the way the MC acts towards villains/criminals is pretty brutal so certainly not for the light hearted but if you can handle that then this novel offers:- good grammar ( some mistakes but those are negligible, like chapters have atleast one or two some don't ) - good story development, not too fast paced or too slow the perfect mix of details while not making you bored of reading-good background for the MC and general world building, the way that the MC operates his attitude and personality actually makes sense and it helps that this isn't one of those reincarnation fanfics and the way that world and the other characters react to the MC is very fluid and the author doesn't stray away from the characters personality especially in romantic relationships with the MC they all seem fluid and normal developments for the story-good update schedule for a fanfic so you don't have to wait to much for cliff endingsThe only downside in my opinion is:-the MC constantly says slurs, there isn't a chapter where he doesn't and the author seemingly doesn't plan to change that, the reason for this us because while I can tolerate the MC's condescending attitude sometimes the slurs and insults just becomes too much to the point where his attitude just seems like Bakugos attitude but on steroids, the fact that the MC can actually back it up is what makes it atleast tolerable so you know the MC is not just spewing nonsense and not even act on it, but other than that this is a really good fanfic to read if you like some more darker stuff with an overpowered MC and certainly deserves a 5 Stars
I'm loving this so far but I've gotta ask before I continue reading this fic... is there romance in this? like proper relationship romance? this will really determine whether I continue reading this fic or not. Please answer anyone.
Well this my own opinion so don't take it seriously well I found the story and the concept interesting at first however as many chapter I read the it's getting boring. The mc personality didn't change neither have a development he still the edgy god complex narcissist he was since the early chap which kinda annoying in the long run also the mc didn't face any trial later on in the story unlike the earlier where he got to fight hawk and got to pick a choice whether to save his mother or kill hawk so that they won't be track down and captured which give you thrill and tension and the feels on how his action could change the narrative and that's the only time where you could found him struggling. The mc power is so op I know it came from one piece atleast let's it make balanced and also interesting by having him fight an enemy that stronger than him that could make him use his brain more rather just doing a simple attack then enemy defeat so that it could give a fight that need tension and also to make it interesting. The story is great tho might not be fit on my taste even tho I found the synopsis interesting however the mc is like anti hero mc that done wrong same with story it have great concept but flawed execution in the later parts. Btw it's my opinion to the people who like it then enjoy
Revelar spoiler
Mc got Nerf, I'm okay with that cuz story is still nice but at least make character development. Mc is very unlikeable
Enjoyable story. Author does a good job with the OP MC premise and making use of canon. Quality wise, minor spelling and punctuation error and sentences are always easy to read.
I'm surprised at the low ratings people are giving this fanfic,some people are complaining about he's God complex when it makes sense,you have one of the best quirks in the world and you know it,you've also been raised by villain parents who are not in the least humble,when you've been the best at everything and are still the best at everything,you tend to not be humble,others are talking about how he hasn't changed and there's no character development,Law from an early age worked extremely hard and acquired all he has,in he's view when he started at UA,all the students were horrible and didn't use their quirks right,most of the students haven't done anything to change that view,so why would Law be influenced by them??I think this is an amazing story with amazing writing,one of the best I've read
honestly, it's one of the best books I've read on this app, and it's free. im beyond words on how amazing the story is and how much it makes me want to keep reading. I can't wait for the next chapters author keep the crazy good work up 🥳🥳
Una obra que para los lectores evidencia matices de mejora en cuanto a la técnica narrativa, más aún para aquellos que tienen la oportunidad de leer numerosos capítulos consecutivamente. Es una trabajo en general disfrutable, programado y gratamente ejecutado, se espera un desenlace acorde con la dirección percibible de la obra, y más aún alguna novela original por parte del autor. Novela casual recomendada.
I don't know if I've already made a review or not but here it is :) I must say that this is probably one of the FF with the best grammar and consistent updates, so I highly recommend it. Also, the story is entertaining and logical with a lot of sense, although if the author sees this, I tell them that I eagerly await the original story they plan make.
I did my 2023 review thing and this was the fanfic I read the most, Good fanfiction[img=update]
it far exceeded my expectations. I'm not saying it's perfect, as the protagonist's personality isn't the best, but the overall interactions feel more real.
Top tier MHA FF here, great original characters, well done on characterizing existing characters. MC is an overpowered but isn't super overpowered, author keeps it reasonable. MC is a jerk most of the time and at times it is over the top and or cringe, this would be my only complaint if I was nitpicking. Otherwise even though the story contains a lot of the similar plot points as the anime it is pretty unique and deviates a lot.
I can't read other MHA fanfics anymore because of this fanfic. Is very good. Author, take responsibility! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This fanfic is a lot, but not anything for me. I really tried to stick with it, but the mc just stays the insufferable a hole and even if snipits of his personality change a bit . It's just annoying after over a 100 Chapters and sucks the joy out of the reading experience. Still worth a try to see if you like it, just don't expect the mc to change for the better anytime soon. Because of that the story feels also very bland, but the update stablility and writing quality are good. That all from me.
En general me gusta, no llegaría a leer tanto si no me gustara. Vi siempre muchos comentarios en contra del protagonista, veo el por que, pero en lo personal me gusta... Tomando en cuenta a sus padres, la educación que le dieron, las ideas que son su base de ser.... No me parece inadecuado... Es un personaje con mucho ego, podría decirse con egolatría en vez de egoísta (cosas diferentes) pero es cómodo para mi ver la imperfección que lo sigue manteniendo en las linea humana (el propio personaje dice incluso que no es un dios bíblico sino más parecido a uno griego... Los dioses griegos son más mundanos y ni siendo dioses son omnipotentes-omnipresentes-omniscientes).... Además si se mira la etiqueta claramente dice -antiheroe- ... Un héroe clásico suele tener un camino guiado más suave y claro, como cuento de hadas... En cambio un antiheroe pasa por cosas y experimenta cosas que el otro no haría, ambos son un tipo de héroe pero no recorren el mismo camino, yo nunca esperé un All might, ni quiero verlo, tampoco esperaba un egocentrista pero lo acepto (
The writing is good, but there are misused words, prepositions etc from time to time. It's still good. The story development is meh, pretty much a rehash really, but MC save the day most of the time coz' of his quirk. The dialogues are funny at times, but got repetitive fast. MC say the same things most of the time. The Character design is bad, there's no character development or whatever, and most OG main characters are just extras. Jiro & Momo have the exact same will they or won't they scenarios. It has good number of chapters available and each one is quite chunky so that's great. The World Background is like I said, mostly rehash so far. nothing new so I give it a mid score. The first 150 chapters are fun, but after that the said cons are magnified by a lot. I currently at ch 214, I'm reading a lot but nothing of substance. It's like a nothing burger.
Although the reasoning behind how his Quirk come to be and how the Quirk works in this fiction seems a little different from the Cannon but I must say this fanfiction is really good especially in the character department too, sometimes I really don't like the MC but that just makes him feels more real
My favorite MHA fanfic. Horizon, the mc, is one of the best mc. I also realy like how the story slowly diverged from canon but was still making sense. also the writting is really great. I definitely recommand this story.
My top three favourite FanFiction the best thing about this novel for me was the protagonist
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i just need a spoiler to know if i continue reading or not, who is the female lead... idk if it's harem i just want to know who is the love interest of law so i can keep reading
now for starters this is gonna be a dark novel showing the darker side of the MHA verse and the way the MC acts towards villains/criminals is pretty brutal so certainly not for the light hearted but if you can handle that then this novel offers:- good grammar ( some mistakes but those are negligible, like chapters have atleast one or two some don't ) - good story development, not too fast paced or too slow the perfect mix of details while not making you bored of reading-good background for the MC and general world building, the way that the MC operates his attitude and personality actually makes sense and it helps that this isn't one of those reincarnation fanfics and the way that world and the other characters react to the MC is very fluid and the author doesn't stray away from the characters personality especially in romantic relationships with the MC they all seem fluid and normal developments for the story-good update schedule for a fanfic so you don't have to wait to much for cliff endingsThe only downside in my opinion is:-the MC constantly says slurs, there isn't a chapter where he doesn't and the author seemingly doesn't plan to change that, the reason for this us because while I can tolerate the MC's condescending attitude sometimes the slurs and insults just becomes too much to the point where his attitude just seems like Bakugos attitude but on steroids, the fact that the MC can actually back it up is what makes it atleast tolerable so you know the MC is not just spewing nonsense and not even act on it, but other than that this is a really good fanfic to read if you like some more darker stuff with an overpowered MC and certainly deserves a 5 Stars
I'm loving this so far but I've gotta ask before I continue reading this fic... is there romance in this? like proper relationship romance? this will really determine whether I continue reading this fic or not. Please answer anyone.
Well this my own opinion so don't take it seriously well I found the story and the concept interesting at first however as many chapter I read the it's getting boring. The mc personality didn't change neither have a development he still the edgy god complex narcissist he was since the early chap which kinda annoying in the long run also the mc didn't face any trial later on in the story unlike the earlier where he got to fight hawk and got to pick a choice whether to save his mother or kill hawk so that they won't be track down and captured which give you thrill and tension and the feels on how his action could change the narrative and that's the only time where you could found him struggling. The mc power is so op I know it came from one piece atleast let's it make balanced and also interesting by having him fight an enemy that stronger than him that could make him use his brain more rather just doing a simple attack then enemy defeat so that it could give a fight that need tension and also to make it interesting. The story is great tho might not be fit on my taste even tho I found the synopsis interesting however the mc is like anti hero mc that done wrong same with story it have great concept but flawed execution in the later parts. Btw it's my opinion to the people who like it then enjoy
Revelar spoiler Mc got Nerf, I'm okay with that cuz story is still nice but at least make character development. Mc is very unlikeable
Enjoyable story. Author does a good job with the OP MC premise and making use of canon. Quality wise, minor spelling and punctuation error and sentences are always easy to read.