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So if you've read my Elementalist In A Dungeon, which is my previous story, then you know what to expect...but this time we start with actually good writing quality XD ---The story is probably gonna be longer than I expect. ---I try my best to keep everyone in character. ---Minimal OCs. ---No Harem. ---No character bashing(Unless it's in character within the story). I know MHA stories have a tendency to do this so just saying this now. ---MC will be causing canon to change so be prepared for that. ---Aside from his Quirk nothing else from the One Piece power systems is in this story. No 6 marine powers or Haki. This is a MHA story and I'm keeping it as such. ---I read and like almost every comment and reply to all that require a response, feel free to engage with me. And worry not I keep things polite :)
Well fleshed-out world, great grammar, a unique story not afraid to diverge from canon, updating stability is not the best though it has improved. MC is as realistic as a MC with a superiority complex can get, Mc is not a hypocrite. Author is working really hard to make a great story. All-in-all a great read. Take notes from this guy if you also want to write.
Esta bien pero me la baja un poco que el protagonista tenga tanto poder en una etapa tan temprana de la historia, no digo que no sea posible derrotarle con suficiente preparación y que afo no se capaz de derrotarlo con esfuerzo pero que te diga en todo momento que es el humano perfecto, un ser comparable a dios, y que nadie le haga la gerra me aleja, y no digo que no esté lo suficientemente justificado, justificado esta pero me gustaría que se hubiera indagado más en como entreno para llegar a ella que simplemente hacer un time skip y contarnos que puede hacer, en general me gustó y siento que hay cierta lógica detrás de las acciones de los personajes y eso me gusta, siento que esta un poco forzado el que nezu lo quiera hacer un héroe apelar de que el protagonista es un obvio psicópata pero bueno, hay cosas que tienen que ser necesarias para que la trama avance.
muy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendomuy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendomuy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendo
Your cliffhanger is too much author, mc's personality feels fresh because he's committed to his ideology, putting his family above all else, people are afraid of the guy because he's not a permanent protector of their country, you also described amazingly well the collective of human thinking "follow the person infront of you", in the end no one knows who initiated the idea.
honestly speaking this fanfic is one of the few that I actually consider really really good and well written characters development and twists I don't think any other fanfic could compare
The best mha fic I’ve read, the character design is amazing. Personally I like the way the author has made his quirk, its really powerful but the author has made some ("nerfs" he’s still never lost a fight btw) even after getting nerfed the mc still trains EXTREMELY hard. After like 15 chapters he’s back to where he was or even stronger then before.
It started alright but man did the MC just completely destroy the story. His personality is just so annoying and is just a complete hypocrit at times at the extreme level.
Ik there is a bunch of reviews about this, but its too bad to ignore. 'Amputate' by definition it 'separates' the object while leaving it still connected. so a dude's blood is still flowing in between even when decapitated. The first major fight, and I mean FIRST, the Author nerfs it into the ground because he panics and realizes that he could one tap ANYBODY with it. it is by all intensive purposes "Air Slash" now. The SECOND MAJOR FIGHT, The Author nefs him even further into the ground by giving him back-lash whenever he uses his quirk. while this one isn't as bad... its profoundly annoying, even more so than the first because he brings it up EVERY CHAPTER. 'Op Protagonist' but the Author is TERRIFIED of him winning even one fight against a major villain. He always has to be exhausted/drained/struggling and the Author MAKES SURE he is.
Read it ,I beg of you . You will not be disappointed by this story ,I promise
This is my second time making a review I deleted my first one since I was being a bit bias with my emotions.Lets be real now.Also author please pin this ima bout to get real descriptive. writing quality:3/5.The story barely has any misspellings but it still does have them.The story also can't really figure out how to have any emotional moments and that's mainly because of the character design...which I'll get into. story development:3/5 the story is going well but it's also weird.His goal is to get his hero license so he can "save" people and now he's getting it at the beginning of his first year so basically...What even was the point of going to the school in the first place.Secondly he was put into the school so he can any emotional connections and I have to say as the author of this story you have failed to build up anything emotional just lewd attraction to the main character.This all just feels weird and un a bad way. character design....1/5. He has no emotions out of his family and he's also schizophrenic but only when he's about to do something bad cause God forbid it affects him negatively.Secondly he has a God complex but don't get it mistaken when I say God complex I don't mean something cool.This is the first story I've read that makes this awful.The maimcharavter is so ignorant and arrogant that the only reason he has friends is because the author made it that way.No one would ever approach or befriend this type of person.Thirdly he's a weirdo..I don't know else ro describe him.Hes like if you raised a baby watching Andrew tate shorts but not any of the actual advice just the sexist and girls belong in the kitchen and all that stuff, That's what he encompasses. he's litteraly the epitome of edgy.Fourthly he's a hypocrite.He talks a whole lot and he can back it up and he's the definition of a bully BUT he's a huge hypocrite.Fifthy The way the author has written this God awful character basically makes everything knull.Their are no connections to be made no emotional bonds their is nothing.He believes he's better than everyone and litteraly puts everyone down which u would think is good but the open disrespect to everyone is just insane.Sixthly he's not interested in any girls in the school except for sexualizing them.You know what he's like another version of that pervert small kid in mha if he got everything he wanted lol..This is litteraly what that character is.No concern for anyone's emotions.No concern for the way he speaks.No concern for nothing.This story is just hard to read and the character is the main reason why. He makes everything bad.I don't know why the author chose to make a maincharacter this awful but dude please don't pick up a pen if this is what's in ur head.The main character is basically the amalgamation of every h3ntai addicts dream, Money,sleep around with girls (none from the school),Bringing people down just cause,Hypocritical.This story is just weird.It would have been good if overtime he lost the ego or at least tried to be nice but this dude is as arrogant as they come. This is all just weird. Updating stability I gave it 2 stars...cause how bad do u have to stop dropping for me to see comments from 2 years ago and this story isn't finish still?.Dayum.You took 2 years to write a main character just as bad??. world background: I don't even know at this point the plot does change obviously,This story is all just weird. The author does agree with me that the main character is awful which kinda confuses me cause why would u make such a distasteful character if u know its bad.Maybe some dudes like reading it but I promise u the ones that do like this Mc are the ones who wish and aspire to be this type of person.I understand wishing to have money but to be the type of person he is, that's a whole other bs. in the end I personally would not recommend this story just off of that character.He almost killed todoroki because he tried to be there for him and mistakingky made some assumption about his family WHO were murderers and hero killers...so yeah.Edgy and corny.I honestly have no idea how this story is 300 chapters long and still going I'm kind of surprised u haven't written a second pov of his attitude being his downfall Or maybe u have after all this author did state he has does a lot of foreshadowing.I just can't stand the character and I would like a second pov of someone who is finally going to stand up to the dude and end him or something be it a random stranger, Deku himself, Todoroki, Everyone in Class 1A. Something just something.Im not about to read 220 more chapters of this arrogant and awful character.UNLESS u can promise me that we will get another pov or something of someone finally having enough of that bs and standing up for everyone.
I read up to chapter 76 and I can say that this work is not for everyone, I found it interesting and ignored his god complex, he is very strong and certain parts of his personality I even like, one example is that improving is simply something natural for him, and whoever doesn't really seek to improve he despises, but still in the end I can no longer ignore his god complex, it's simply frustrating for me to continue reading, I like the work and I really wanted to continue, I'm sad 😢, I thought that I could ignore but not I got it in the end.
you should try its's a good one , ,.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .
I love this story and how author shapes the lore to his ideal form but i just detest this long periods of hiatus , besides that great fanfic
It was great novel, sad to see it get dropped. After months of wating its time to remove it from library, cant keep hoping for something that's never gonna happen.
honestamente, me arrepenti de la última reseña, está historia hasta el momento (150+) es una de las pocas que realmente me tienen entretenido, no es el típico caso de un tipo transmigrado, está historia es Top
As a reader I want to say that this is a story with good writing and decent world building that makes me want to read more. The main character doesn't like anyone, hates everyone, and behaves like a 12 year old going through puberty. Although I am aware that this is a strategy by the author. I am baffled by how many people defend such edgy behavior. Anyway, those aspects aside. It is a good read though not for everyone. Keep up the good spirits, author. [img=recommend]
Honestly, I started this not expecting anything, just anoth mha fanfic to lose time in summer, but I found it very well written that I gave it a chance, and it was the best thing I did. Everything is planned, you find clues in chapter 17 about the arc in chapter 305.
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Love the story, as far as I know, it's interesting and promising. Only problems: 1. there's no proofreading; some words are missing and some grammatical errors are present. 2. there are some nerfs, especially against the first nomu but they are overall bearable
what can i say that hasnt been said before about this novel? it’s awesome, just check it out
Honestly, when I first started reading this I didn't like it much. The mc has a huge ego when not that op and some parts seemed really forced, but eventually, I found it to be quite readable. I like how it has mild flirting/teasing with the girls, but it doesn't focus on it plus some humor. I'm interested to see if he ever likes someone romantically, what happens with his parents, and who he'll be in the end (I hope if he does change it's not because of Nezu).
Revelar spoiler
Will the MC ever get a character development? And will he make up with midnight?
Was great but don’t know why the author put invincible as he kept nerfing the Mc for no reason. Was a shame tbh
There is a lot to be said about this novel. But all I can say is one word. PEAK
realy good book though just fore new readers just to alert them twop things 1. his power is a quirk version of the op-op-no-mi not n exact copy/port of the devil fruit though it is pretty much identical there were some modifications made to add a bite of extra conflict though pretty much 90% of the conflict is not connected to those changes so when they do come up accept the authors explanation and move on and 2. is a bit of a spoiler so anything further is a spoiler so read only if your fine with getting spoiled ________________________________________________________________ after the mc fights all fore one he gets a sorry driven as in it an important part of the story partial nerf nothing ground-breaking but its there and people complained it does not go away until the gigantomachy after that the nerf is gone and he pretty much immediately becomes even stronger then he already was
I was warned multiple times about the god complex and still thought I could just ignore it, boy was I wrong.
Does horizon know that is parent are dead for a long time and if soo in what chapter what it revealed
Biased review from someone who read author's previous works. I especially recommend this author's works because he writes really interesting and compelling characters (not just the MC either).
So if you've read my Elementalist In A Dungeon, which is my previous story, then you know what to expect...but this time we start with actually good writing quality XD ---The story is probably gonna be longer than I expect. ---I try my best to keep everyone in character. ---Minimal OCs. ---No Harem. ---No character bashing(Unless it's in character within the story). I know MHA stories have a tendency to do this so just saying this now. ---MC will be causing canon to change so be prepared for that. ---Aside from his Quirk nothing else from the One Piece power systems is in this story. No 6 marine powers or Haki. This is a MHA story and I'm keeping it as such. ---I read and like almost every comment and reply to all that require a response, feel free to engage with me. And worry not I keep things polite :)
Well fleshed-out world, great grammar, a unique story not afraid to diverge from canon, updating stability is not the best though it has improved. MC is as realistic as a MC with a superiority complex can get, Mc is not a hypocrite. Author is working really hard to make a great story. All-in-all a great read. Take notes from this guy if you also want to write.
Esta bien pero me la baja un poco que el protagonista tenga tanto poder en una etapa tan temprana de la historia, no digo que no sea posible derrotarle con suficiente preparación y que afo no se capaz de derrotarlo con esfuerzo pero que te diga en todo momento que es el humano perfecto, un ser comparable a dios, y que nadie le haga la gerra me aleja, y no digo que no esté lo suficientemente justificado, justificado esta pero me gustaría que se hubiera indagado más en como entreno para llegar a ella que simplemente hacer un time skip y contarnos que puede hacer, en general me gustó y siento que hay cierta lógica detrás de las acciones de los personajes y eso me gusta, siento que esta un poco forzado el que nezu lo quiera hacer un héroe apelar de que el protagonista es un obvio psicópata pero bueno, hay cosas que tienen que ser necesarias para que la trama avance.
muy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendomuy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendomuy bueno, recomiendo muy bueno, recomiendo
Your cliffhanger is too much author, mc's personality feels fresh because he's committed to his ideology, putting his family above all else, people are afraid of the guy because he's not a permanent protector of their country, you also described amazingly well the collective of human thinking "follow the person infront of you", in the end no one knows who initiated the idea.
honestly speaking this fanfic is one of the few that I actually consider really really good and well written characters development and twists I don't think any other fanfic could compare
The best mha fic I’ve read, the character design is amazing. Personally I like the way the author has made his quirk, its really powerful but the author has made some ("nerfs" he’s still never lost a fight btw) even after getting nerfed the mc still trains EXTREMELY hard. After like 15 chapters he’s back to where he was or even stronger then before.
It started alright but man did the MC just completely destroy the story. His personality is just so annoying and is just a complete hypocrit at times at the extreme level.
Ik there is a bunch of reviews about this, but its too bad to ignore. 'Amputate' by definition it 'separates' the object while leaving it still connected. so a dude's blood is still flowing in between even when decapitated. The first major fight, and I mean FIRST, the Author nerfs it into the ground because he panics and realizes that he could one tap ANYBODY with it. it is by all intensive purposes "Air Slash" now. The SECOND MAJOR FIGHT, The Author nefs him even further into the ground by giving him back-lash whenever he uses his quirk. while this one isn't as bad... its profoundly annoying, even more so than the first because he brings it up EVERY CHAPTER. 'Op Protagonist' but the Author is TERRIFIED of him winning even one fight against a major villain. He always has to be exhausted/drained/struggling and the Author MAKES SURE he is.
Read it ,I beg of you . You will not be disappointed by this story ,I promise
This is my second time making a review I deleted my first one since I was being a bit bias with my emotions.Lets be real now.Also author please pin this ima bout to get real descriptive. writing quality:3/5.The story barely has any misspellings but it still does have them.The story also can't really figure out how to have any emotional moments and that's mainly because of the character design...which I'll get into. story development:3/5 the story is going well but it's also weird.His goal is to get his hero license so he can "save" people and now he's getting it at the beginning of his first year so basically...What even was the point of going to the school in the first place.Secondly he was put into the school so he can any emotional connections and I have to say as the author of this story you have failed to build up anything emotional just lewd attraction to the main character.This all just feels weird and un a bad way. character design....1/5. He has no emotions out of his family and he's also schizophrenic but only when he's about to do something bad cause God forbid it affects him negatively.Secondly he has a God complex but don't get it mistaken when I say God complex I don't mean something cool.This is the first story I've read that makes this awful.The maimcharavter is so ignorant and arrogant that the only reason he has friends is because the author made it that way.No one would ever approach or befriend this type of person.Thirdly he's a weirdo..I don't know else ro describe him.Hes like if you raised a baby watching Andrew tate shorts but not any of the actual advice just the sexist and girls belong in the kitchen and all that stuff, That's what he encompasses. he's litteraly the epitome of edgy.Fourthly he's a hypocrite.He talks a whole lot and he can back it up and he's the definition of a bully BUT he's a huge hypocrite.Fifthy The way the author has written this God awful character basically makes everything knull.Their are no connections to be made no emotional bonds their is nothing.He believes he's better than everyone and litteraly puts everyone down which u would think is good but the open disrespect to everyone is just insane.Sixthly he's not interested in any girls in the school except for sexualizing them.You know what he's like another version of that pervert small kid in mha if he got everything he wanted lol..This is litteraly what that character is.No concern for anyone's emotions.No concern for the way he speaks.No concern for nothing.This story is just hard to read and the character is the main reason why. He makes everything bad.I don't know why the author chose to make a maincharacter this awful but dude please don't pick up a pen if this is what's in ur head.The main character is basically the amalgamation of every h3ntai addicts dream, Money,sleep around with girls (none from the school),Bringing people down just cause,Hypocritical.This story is just weird.It would have been good if overtime he lost the ego or at least tried to be nice but this dude is as arrogant as they come. This is all just weird. Updating stability I gave it 2 stars...cause how bad do u have to stop dropping for me to see comments from 2 years ago and this story isn't finish still?.Dayum.You took 2 years to write a main character just as bad??. world background: I don't even know at this point the plot does change obviously,This story is all just weird. The author does agree with me that the main character is awful which kinda confuses me cause why would u make such a distasteful character if u know its bad.Maybe some dudes like reading it but I promise u the ones that do like this Mc are the ones who wish and aspire to be this type of person.I understand wishing to have money but to be the type of person he is, that's a whole other bs. in the end I personally would not recommend this story just off of that character.He almost killed todoroki because he tried to be there for him and mistakingky made some assumption about his family WHO were murderers and hero killers...so yeah.Edgy and corny.I honestly have no idea how this story is 300 chapters long and still going I'm kind of surprised u haven't written a second pov of his attitude being his downfall Or maybe u have after all this author did state he has does a lot of foreshadowing.I just can't stand the character and I would like a second pov of someone who is finally going to stand up to the dude and end him or something be it a random stranger, Deku himself, Todoroki, Everyone in Class 1A. Something just something.Im not about to read 220 more chapters of this arrogant and awful character.UNLESS u can promise me that we will get another pov or something of someone finally having enough of that bs and standing up for everyone.
I read up to chapter 76 and I can say that this work is not for everyone, I found it interesting and ignored his god complex, he is very strong and certain parts of his personality I even like, one example is that improving is simply something natural for him, and whoever doesn't really seek to improve he despises, but still in the end I can no longer ignore his god complex, it's simply frustrating for me to continue reading, I like the work and I really wanted to continue, I'm sad 😢, I thought that I could ignore but not I got it in the end.
you should try its's a good one , ,.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .
I love this story and how author shapes the lore to his ideal form but i just detest this long periods of hiatus , besides that great fanfic
It was great novel, sad to see it get dropped. After months of wating its time to remove it from library, cant keep hoping for something that's never gonna happen.
honestamente, me arrepenti de la última reseña, está historia hasta el momento (150+) es una de las pocas que realmente me tienen entretenido, no es el típico caso de un tipo transmigrado, está historia es Top
As a reader I want to say that this is a story with good writing and decent world building that makes me want to read more. The main character doesn't like anyone, hates everyone, and behaves like a 12 year old going through puberty. Although I am aware that this is a strategy by the author. I am baffled by how many people defend such edgy behavior. Anyway, those aspects aside. It is a good read though not for everyone. Keep up the good spirits, author. [img=recommend]
Honestly, I started this not expecting anything, just anoth mha fanfic to lose time in summer, but I found it very well written that I gave it a chance, and it was the best thing I did. Everything is planned, you find clues in chapter 17 about the arc in chapter 305.
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Love the story, as far as I know, it's interesting and promising. Only problems: 1. there's no proofreading; some words are missing and some grammatical errors are present. 2. there are some nerfs, especially against the first nomu but they are overall bearable
what can i say that hasnt been said before about this novel? it’s awesome, just check it out
Honestly, when I first started reading this I didn't like it much. The mc has a huge ego when not that op and some parts seemed really forced, but eventually, I found it to be quite readable. I like how it has mild flirting/teasing with the girls, but it doesn't focus on it plus some humor. I'm interested to see if he ever likes someone romantically, what happens with his parents, and who he'll be in the end (I hope if he does change it's not because of Nezu).
Revelar spoiler Will the MC ever get a character development? And will he make up with midnight?
Was great but don’t know why the author put invincible as he kept nerfing the Mc for no reason. Was a shame tbh
There is a lot to be said about this novel. But all I can say is one word. PEAK
realy good book though just fore new readers just to alert them twop things 1. his power is a quirk version of the op-op-no-mi not n exact copy/port of the devil fruit though it is pretty much identical there were some modifications made to add a bite of extra conflict though pretty much 90% of the conflict is not connected to those changes so when they do come up accept the authors explanation and move on and 2. is a bit of a spoiler so anything further is a spoiler so read only if your fine with getting spoiled ________________________________________________________________ after the mc fights all fore one he gets a sorry driven as in it an important part of the story partial nerf nothing ground-breaking but its there and people complained it does not go away until the gigantomachy after that the nerf is gone and he pretty much immediately becomes even stronger then he already was
I was warned multiple times about the god complex and still thought I could just ignore it, boy was I wrong.
Does horizon know that is parent are dead for a long time and if soo in what chapter what it revealed
Biased review from someone who read author's previous works. I especially recommend this author's works because he writes really interesting and compelling characters (not just the MC either).