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Escribe una reseñaOk, this is hands down the best novel I've read on here so far. The writing is superb, characters complex and layered, setting original and detailed and the story itself well paced and exciting. Basically flawless. Read it!
It's awesome! I like this story a lot and especially the writing style. I've been searching for stories like this, then finally, I found one. It's right up my alley. The plotline was great, the story's flow was smooth, and it was well written.
the descriptions used are beyond captivating, they transport you fully into the world of the characters. the use of the present tense allows for the reader to move with the story; there is a sense of being a part of the plot. every word is meaningful and conveys something that is truly significant and precisely thought-out. there is a kind of juxtaposition used when contrasting the atmosphere of the school/Noe's feelings towards it with the feeling he gets when begins to discover his powers, it's so powerful and brings out the two extremes all the more effectively. the author is gifted beyond words, i hope that they know that. i've only gotten to the end of chapter 5, but this is one of the best books i have ever read.
read a first few chapters. i must say it is pretty amazing I would love to continue reading the book..... your style of writing is really good. grammar is on point. really impresive
Loved the setting and the topic discussed. To be honest, as an amateur author, I am jealous, eye-opened, embarrassed, and motivated after reading a few chapters. Learned a lot about writing and world-building. The novel is flawless (at least till the chapters I read) and kudos for the emotional weight that you put it in.
This is a *chef's kiss* All I can is as I read the first few chapters, I'm already sold of the descriptive words. It help me to be on the scene. This is one of the great things an author can do: to help the readers imagine what would it be like or what does the character feel like. I don't read any errors from this book which is a 1000/100. Give this a read and support the author, everyone!
At first, I must admit you are a very talented author!🥲🥲 I am feeling jealous 😅😅. Don't misunderstand me. I like this story very much as i found it interesting and unique. However, synopsis was really interesting and plot was really well defined. I hooked up with it. Keep it up dear author! I cheer for your great skill!
Review after 7th chapter. Very well written. It's a unique and interesting plot. The choice of words the writer made are good and were also understandable. The expressions and feelings of the lead are explained vividly. Keep going!!
Wow! This story already has so much potential with its setting and also its main character! I'm glad to see something refreshing and new on the site that isn't just about reincarnation! Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
Wonderful piece of writing. The story develops nicely and the pacing keeps you wanting for more. Noe is an unusual character whose every move and decision reveals a new trait about him. All other characters are well-written and relatable. Overall, an impressive story. Great job!
This is an amazing book. I love the way you write. How you emphasize emotion. One of characteristic of good wRiter was to involve the emotion of the readers. good job. I’m kinda confused sometimes with the explanation but it’s not something to be worry.
This book is beautiful! I love the writing style, the characters, the story that transitions into such a gripping tale and the sweet relationship of Noe and Daniel. Please update soon.
This is some great writing style. Everything is displayed with perfect clarity. The environment, the situation, the emotions, there is never a moment that makes you go "i don't get what's happening" It's a great example of saying a lot while using just the right words. Really impressive
It's great that even here at WN there are people who have the courage to raise such a difficult topic as autism. Thirty years ago, it was considered a relatively rare disorder of child development (affecting 4 out of 10,000 children). Recent studies say that in some countries 1 in 88 people has autism... but the awareness of this disease entity is still negligible in many parts of the world. I am glad that you are somehow raising awareness about it through your story. I like the fact that you placed the action of your story in the reality you created yourself. You describe Noah's behavior in an interesting and realistic way, but also try to show what he feels, thinks, etc. Interesting and recommendable book.
I'm only a few chapters in, but this story is a standout. The setting is complex and intriguing, the characters are multilayered and make you care for them, and the writing is exceptional. This author has a fantastic, unique voice that sets their work apart from the rest. Highly recommended!!
To say i am a fan of LGBT stories would be a lie. In fact they are not my cup of tea. ...however, coming here with an open mind i decided to give it a try I have to say, it is quite good. The way the author manages to extract the raw emotions within each chapter is fantastic. As an author you couldnt ask for more with regards to having ur readers becoming emotionally invested in the story. Its what every author wants to achieve and here it is done perfectly! Great job keep up the good work
Emotionally good story. Although the author's writing style is a bit complex, it does not bore you while reading. Also, you don't have any difficulty in reading. The story progresses well, the emotional transitions are well presented, and the research is probably well done on the subject he wrote. I congratulate the author and hope he continues.
I don't think I've ever cried like that on a book. The idea of the story and the way the author portrays it is mind blowing. Great Job author and please keep on updating!
This novel...has so much to give you an EMOTIONAL ROLLER COASTER ride from the start-up to the incoming chapters. The author is good at narrating what needs to be portrayed in each scene of the story that made you want to read what will happen next. The characters are all great and they have a distinct persona that sets them apart. Kudos to the author! I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
I have never read this type of work before. Not on a webnovel atleast. Mindblowing. Excellent. Different from all the works i have read so far. If you will read the novel, you will know what i am talking about. The novel is well written, plot is interesting and the premise it offers is unique. Great job author, keep it up. Waiting for more chapters.
An amazing read. Great storyline, incredible writing style, unique MC, and a well-built post-apocalyptic world. The author takes you through a heart-rending emotional experience that is realistic and relatable. Author, you have incredible talent, and guts of steel to address real issues. That is rare and highly commendable💕 Great job.[img=recommend]
The way the author writes every chapter makes me as a reader continue reading more and more. How well written it is to constantly keep a reader engaged in every chapter! All I can say is good job author-san!!!
This story gave me goosebumps for how intense it is! It's the kind of experience readers want to feel - completely immersed and from the main character's perspective. Great job using present tense to capture the active imagination, and familiarising scene-setting in a school that we can all understand. Keep up the good work!
The plot, writing style, characters, and grammars were all absolutely good! I saw some very few grammatic flaws but despite those the story still is amazing. I think I'll keep on reading and find out what more will happen. A wonderful story. Great Job Author.
This setting is really interesting - l love the realism elements. I find myself sympathising with Noe at every turn and the fact that he is so rejected by the world. There is so much mystery and intrigue and the author writes brilliantly. This novel is like an uncut diamond gradually being moulded into shape! Truly amazing!
It got me on the first chapter and wow, he's not what you're thinking! I won't spoil it so read it definitely. I like the way author describe each of the character. Good luck to author Keep it bro!! Well, It's really a interesting story!!!
It's my 1st time reading a LGBT+ and I don't know many things about it. And what? You are showing the reality of this world. I like that. Keep that going brother! I hope many would come and read this
This story invokes emotions. It's put me on a rollercoaster of emotional turbulence. However, it's still so captivating that I just want to keep reading. Everything is on point. You're a very good writer and keep up the good work author 👍
Linguistics is a science of the art of Language. An art you have done a fantastic job of mastering. I have no words to describe how beautifully the author is able to articulate the English language and with such precision. I have not seen this much flair and potential from a writer in such a long time and it is refreshing to see a new style of writing on Webnovel and an author who speaks so passionately about autism – something I have personally never read about. Congratulations and I wish you all the best for your future works!
Ok, this is hands down the best novel I've read on here so far. The writing is superb, characters complex and layered, setting original and detailed and the story itself well paced and exciting. Basically flawless. Read it!
It's awesome! I like this story a lot and especially the writing style. I've been searching for stories like this, then finally, I found one. It's right up my alley. The plotline was great, the story's flow was smooth, and it was well written.
the descriptions used are beyond captivating, they transport you fully into the world of the characters. the use of the present tense allows for the reader to move with the story; there is a sense of being a part of the plot. every word is meaningful and conveys something that is truly significant and precisely thought-out. there is a kind of juxtaposition used when contrasting the atmosphere of the school/Noe's feelings towards it with the feeling he gets when begins to discover his powers, it's so powerful and brings out the two extremes all the more effectively. the author is gifted beyond words, i hope that they know that. i've only gotten to the end of chapter 5, but this is one of the best books i have ever read.
read a first few chapters. i must say it is pretty amazing I would love to continue reading the book..... your style of writing is really good. grammar is on point. really impresive
Loved the setting and the topic discussed. To be honest, as an amateur author, I am jealous, eye-opened, embarrassed, and motivated after reading a few chapters. Learned a lot about writing and world-building. The novel is flawless (at least till the chapters I read) and kudos for the emotional weight that you put it in.
This is a *chef's kiss* All I can is as I read the first few chapters, I'm already sold of the descriptive words. It help me to be on the scene. This is one of the great things an author can do: to help the readers imagine what would it be like or what does the character feel like. I don't read any errors from this book which is a 1000/100. Give this a read and support the author, everyone!
At first, I must admit you are a very talented author!🥲🥲 I am feeling jealous 😅😅. Don't misunderstand me. I like this story very much as i found it interesting and unique. However, synopsis was really interesting and plot was really well defined. I hooked up with it. Keep it up dear author! I cheer for your great skill!
Review after 7th chapter. Very well written. It's a unique and interesting plot. The choice of words the writer made are good and were also understandable. The expressions and feelings of the lead are explained vividly. Keep going!!
Wow! This story already has so much potential with its setting and also its main character! I'm glad to see something refreshing and new on the site that isn't just about reincarnation! Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
Wonderful piece of writing. The story develops nicely and the pacing keeps you wanting for more. Noe is an unusual character whose every move and decision reveals a new trait about him. All other characters are well-written and relatable. Overall, an impressive story. Great job!
This is an amazing book. I love the way you write. How you emphasize emotion. One of characteristic of good wRiter was to involve the emotion of the readers. good job. I’m kinda confused sometimes with the explanation but it’s not something to be worry.
This book is beautiful! I love the writing style, the characters, the story that transitions into such a gripping tale and the sweet relationship of Noe and Daniel. Please update soon.
This is some great writing style. Everything is displayed with perfect clarity. The environment, the situation, the emotions, there is never a moment that makes you go "i don't get what's happening" It's a great example of saying a lot while using just the right words. Really impressive
It's great that even here at WN there are people who have the courage to raise such a difficult topic as autism. Thirty years ago, it was considered a relatively rare disorder of child development (affecting 4 out of 10,000 children). Recent studies say that in some countries 1 in 88 people has autism... but the awareness of this disease entity is still negligible in many parts of the world. I am glad that you are somehow raising awareness about it through your story. I like the fact that you placed the action of your story in the reality you created yourself. You describe Noah's behavior in an interesting and realistic way, but also try to show what he feels, thinks, etc. Interesting and recommendable book.
I'm only a few chapters in, but this story is a standout. The setting is complex and intriguing, the characters are multilayered and make you care for them, and the writing is exceptional. This author has a fantastic, unique voice that sets their work apart from the rest. Highly recommended!!
To say i am a fan of LGBT stories would be a lie. In fact they are not my cup of tea. ...however, coming here with an open mind i decided to give it a try I have to say, it is quite good. The way the author manages to extract the raw emotions within each chapter is fantastic. As an author you couldnt ask for more with regards to having ur readers becoming emotionally invested in the story. Its what every author wants to achieve and here it is done perfectly! Great job keep up the good work
Emotionally good story. Although the author's writing style is a bit complex, it does not bore you while reading. Also, you don't have any difficulty in reading. The story progresses well, the emotional transitions are well presented, and the research is probably well done on the subject he wrote. I congratulate the author and hope he continues.
I don't think I've ever cried like that on a book. The idea of the story and the way the author portrays it is mind blowing. Great Job author and please keep on updating!
This novel...has so much to give you an EMOTIONAL ROLLER COASTER ride from the start-up to the incoming chapters. The author is good at narrating what needs to be portrayed in each scene of the story that made you want to read what will happen next. The characters are all great and they have a distinct persona that sets them apart. Kudos to the author! I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
I have never read this type of work before. Not on a webnovel atleast. Mindblowing. Excellent. Different from all the works i have read so far. If you will read the novel, you will know what i am talking about. The novel is well written, plot is interesting and the premise it offers is unique. Great job author, keep it up. Waiting for more chapters.
An amazing read. Great storyline, incredible writing style, unique MC, and a well-built post-apocalyptic world. The author takes you through a heart-rending emotional experience that is realistic and relatable. Author, you have incredible talent, and guts of steel to address real issues. That is rare and highly commendable💕 Great job.[img=recommend]
The way the author writes every chapter makes me as a reader continue reading more and more. How well written it is to constantly keep a reader engaged in every chapter! All I can say is good job author-san!!!
This story gave me goosebumps for how intense it is! It's the kind of experience readers want to feel - completely immersed and from the main character's perspective. Great job using present tense to capture the active imagination, and familiarising scene-setting in a school that we can all understand. Keep up the good work!
The plot, writing style, characters, and grammars were all absolutely good! I saw some very few grammatic flaws but despite those the story still is amazing. I think I'll keep on reading and find out what more will happen. A wonderful story. Great Job Author.
This setting is really interesting - l love the realism elements. I find myself sympathising with Noe at every turn and the fact that he is so rejected by the world. There is so much mystery and intrigue and the author writes brilliantly. This novel is like an uncut diamond gradually being moulded into shape! Truly amazing!
It got me on the first chapter and wow, he's not what you're thinking! I won't spoil it so read it definitely. I like the way author describe each of the character. Good luck to author Keep it bro!! Well, It's really a interesting story!!!
It's my 1st time reading a LGBT+ and I don't know many things about it. And what? You are showing the reality of this world. I like that. Keep that going brother! I hope many would come and read this
This story invokes emotions. It's put me on a rollercoaster of emotional turbulence. However, it's still so captivating that I just want to keep reading. Everything is on point. You're a very good writer and keep up the good work author 👍
Linguistics is a science of the art of Language. An art you have done a fantastic job of mastering. I have no words to describe how beautifully the author is able to articulate the English language and with such precision. I have not seen this much flair and potential from a writer in such a long time and it is refreshing to see a new style of writing on Webnovel and an author who speaks so passionately about autism – something I have personally never read about. Congratulations and I wish you all the best for your future works!