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Hi fellow Author/Reader! This story is great so far! There are a lot of elements that you put into the story to evolve it further! Chapters are addicting and easy to get through! Updates are also rolling in fast! Nice!
This is a beautiful story that pulls on your heartstrings! The writing style is almost flawless and the Author's imagination is as vast as the sea. This novel is most definitely going places, and I'll be following it till the end!
the plot is interesting. i love the the title and i think this book is promising can't wait to read it more!! keep it up the goodwork author!!
Well done in terms of writing skills and unique premise that this story has to offer. It has a vivid description of what the author wants to portray in every scene. It has an interesting plot that will make u think about the direction of how it will goes as it continues to unravel the story. And I'm looking forward to your journey in writing!
The imagination and how the writers have poured his wide scenery into the story the characters were good the storyline was hooking but there were errors spelling mistakes, punctuation and grammatical errors if the author can fix these mistakes the novel is dope. Good work author
This is really well written. I love the mc to bits and I want to punch anyone who hurts him! Thank you for using autism in a piece like this. I feel it is super important and a side of it people don't often see.
Very interesting! The premise is quite unique and the writing style is captivating. My only gripe would be the fickleness of the updates. Will definitely be reading more of this in the future
Your work is phenomenal mate! This is the first time I've read a novel related to autism here and trust me you did your job very well. The best thing I liked about this work is your vocabulary and grammar. I could imagine all of the scenes happening clearly. Since this is written in present tense it makes things much more easier to understand and imagine. Keep going on mate!! ✨
A great read and definitely a very unique writing style. Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe. The author stays true to their MC. Every sentence, every scene is steeped with a distinct tension and atmosphere. The novel is very immersive. Updates are stable and character are very well portrayed. The story hits the ground running. The world building is distinctive too, where you can feel the futuristic setting. Thank you so much author. Please keep up the great work. I look forward to reading it.
Very addicting! 😊 made me abit teary. 😅 i also found a little correctable words, The story is a bit emotional for me, but a the same it excite me what will he awakened from that kind of reality he lives in. Looking forward to this..
Loving the story. Noe has a way of capturing your attention. With everything he’s gone through I have the urge to hug him, but will be happy to hand him a pencil and paper since a hug may be too much. World building, writing, characters and storyline are all on point. Having a MC who is autistic is top tier in the way it gives you insight into what it means to be autistic. We need more books like this! Keep up the good work.
This story is unlike anything I've read before. I usually enjoy reading romance novels more so this is my first time trying this genre. I'm really glad I did. Just the prelude alone was enough to grip me. And then I found myself sympathising with the main character. I felt his pain with each chapter I read. I love this story! Keep it up author!
This novel is great and unique to read, the plot is different to other stories I've come across in this platform. Continue writing this interesting plot of yours, I can't wait to see more!
I am not ashamed to say that this book has brought me to tears and I have fallen in love with your style of writing. Your grammar is flawless and your story is just captivating. I am reading this book to the very end so please do me a favor and continue updating🤗
Beautifully written story! Language used is diverse and descriptive. Every chapter brings forth a new question that leaves me hanging to find out more. Would love to see more of Noe's development and personal thoughts!
Great book, underrated, good potential, awesome grammar, unique, great writing quality, and an awesome book so far with professional writing. What more to hope for.
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Just the prelude alone was enough to pique my interest and automatically add the book to my library. This is an early review but I will be back as I progress with the reading. I'm also learning as I read. Keep up the good work author. Your writing style is captivating.
I have never read anything like this. Autistic protagonist in an post-apocalyptic school for trouble children. This is an unique, original, and refreshing read. The author keeps you on your toes. Even the old readers can't predict how this story will go. The mysterious atmosphere really makes me curious of how things will play out. There is vivid scenes that draws me in, and make me feel like I'm there. The pacing is great. The clarification on words at the end of the chapters are great. It helps the readers understand what is going on. I'm having a great time! Keep up the great work!
A really well written novel. Writer had done a really great job with characters. Story keeps you hooked from the first few chapters itself. And I am loving the way story is moving forward, won't give much spoilers but keep up the good work!
I love it! The novel was a great read to me. It is well written out, the world and the characters were interesting, the story flow was smooth too! I would love to see more of the story, it has so much potential in it! Would definitely recommend this, hope to see more of the story and may it bloom! Good work author, keep it up!! [img=recommend]
This is a first for me, I’vee never read such a captivating experience on such a tough topic. The way the Mc views things paints such a deactiptive picture of his own struggles that I couldn’t help but be pulled in. For this topic I can’t believe how well written this work I. The seemless transition between actualIty and the mc view work well in a harmonious manne…. 👌🏿🤙🏿
It reminds me of a kind of water world game I've played. As for the story and the other aspects are well thought of. It's a good job you've done there.
Woah!! this is so good... it's my first time reading a book with the MC being autistic. I love your writing style. The flow of the story is smooth with no grammar errors. With time, this book would bloom Good Work, Author!!
Yeah, the book cover is pretty unique and can engage more readers. No problem with the grammar because there are only a few mistakes. Overall the story had so much potential.
I really did enjoy the novel so far! First and foremost, the representation of autism is fantastic. The author also went out of their way to provide definitions to clarify anything that the reader may not be familiar with. The writing is fantastically done. Many webnovels have the issue of grammatical errors, but I have seen none with this one so far! The descriptions and authors voice are beautifully done. I woukd reccomend this 10/10!
I immedietly hook in by the premise of the story and can't help but wonder what is going to happen next. The wording is excellent and i'm impress by the author ability to make me understand the context without having to explain too much. This novel is very enjoyable and it is refreshing to see such fresh premise. Keep on the good work! this will be in my libary for sure![img=recommend]
Oh, how I couldn't get enough of this story! The plot, the characters, the world building, and the quality! Everything was just perfect! I gotta give it to you, author, you've done a great job!
Overall - This is a captivating novel to read. If you want to read a book full of intrigue, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - Classic third person point of view. The author shows the expressions and feelings of the characters in a fantastic way. The reader's are able to experience the ways of the characters in a great way. Story - It's about Noe, an autistic child who was thrown into a chaotic world of hatred and eventually sided with evil, Hard to put down. It'll make the reader's yearn for more. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The main characters of Noe is well designed and written for his role. His development show the great work of the author. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author.
Such an intriguing story! Although I was skeptic at the very beginning, sooner I liked the mistery, the sense of unknown and the suspence the author builds up. Really recommended!
This is actually very different to other books on this platform for which I am very grateful. If anyone happens across this review... DO READ THIS BOOK. The author has a way with words that paint an emotion which is very difficult to do as an author myself. Great job author
Hi fellow Author/Reader! This story is great so far! There are a lot of elements that you put into the story to evolve it further! Chapters are addicting and easy to get through! Updates are also rolling in fast! Nice!
This is a beautiful story that pulls on your heartstrings! The writing style is almost flawless and the Author's imagination is as vast as the sea. This novel is most definitely going places, and I'll be following it till the end!
the plot is interesting. i love the the title and i think this book is promising can't wait to read it more!! keep it up the goodwork author!!
Well done in terms of writing skills and unique premise that this story has to offer. It has a vivid description of what the author wants to portray in every scene. It has an interesting plot that will make u think about the direction of how it will goes as it continues to unravel the story. And I'm looking forward to your journey in writing!
The imagination and how the writers have poured his wide scenery into the story the characters were good the storyline was hooking but there were errors spelling mistakes, punctuation and grammatical errors if the author can fix these mistakes the novel is dope. Good work author
This is really well written. I love the mc to bits and I want to punch anyone who hurts him! Thank you for using autism in a piece like this. I feel it is super important and a side of it people don't often see.
Very interesting! The premise is quite unique and the writing style is captivating. My only gripe would be the fickleness of the updates. Will definitely be reading more of this in the future
Your work is phenomenal mate! This is the first time I've read a novel related to autism here and trust me you did your job very well. The best thing I liked about this work is your vocabulary and grammar. I could imagine all of the scenes happening clearly. Since this is written in present tense it makes things much more easier to understand and imagine. Keep going on mate!! ✨
A great read and definitely a very unique writing style. Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe. The author stays true to their MC. Every sentence, every scene is steeped with a distinct tension and atmosphere. The novel is very immersive. Updates are stable and character are very well portrayed. The story hits the ground running. The world building is distinctive too, where you can feel the futuristic setting. Thank you so much author. Please keep up the great work. I look forward to reading it.
Very addicting! 😊 made me abit teary. 😅 i also found a little correctable words, The story is a bit emotional for me, but a the same it excite me what will he awakened from that kind of reality he lives in. Looking forward to this..
Loving the story. Noe has a way of capturing your attention. With everything he’s gone through I have the urge to hug him, but will be happy to hand him a pencil and paper since a hug may be too much. World building, writing, characters and storyline are all on point. Having a MC who is autistic is top tier in the way it gives you insight into what it means to be autistic. We need more books like this! Keep up the good work.
This story is unlike anything I've read before. I usually enjoy reading romance novels more so this is my first time trying this genre. I'm really glad I did. Just the prelude alone was enough to grip me. And then I found myself sympathising with the main character. I felt his pain with each chapter I read. I love this story! Keep it up author!
This novel is great and unique to read, the plot is different to other stories I've come across in this platform. Continue writing this interesting plot of yours, I can't wait to see more!
I am not ashamed to say that this book has brought me to tears and I have fallen in love with your style of writing. Your grammar is flawless and your story is just captivating. I am reading this book to the very end so please do me a favor and continue updating🤗
Beautifully written story! Language used is diverse and descriptive. Every chapter brings forth a new question that leaves me hanging to find out more. Would love to see more of Noe's development and personal thoughts!
Great book, underrated, good potential, awesome grammar, unique, great writing quality, and an awesome book so far with professional writing. What more to hope for.
Revelar spoiler Just the prelude alone was enough to pique my interest and automatically add the book to my library. This is an early review but I will be back as I progress with the reading. I'm also learning as I read. Keep up the good work author. Your writing style is captivating.
I have never read anything like this. Autistic protagonist in an post-apocalyptic school for trouble children. This is an unique, original, and refreshing read. The author keeps you on your toes. Even the old readers can't predict how this story will go. The mysterious atmosphere really makes me curious of how things will play out. There is vivid scenes that draws me in, and make me feel like I'm there. The pacing is great. The clarification on words at the end of the chapters are great. It helps the readers understand what is going on. I'm having a great time! Keep up the great work!
A really well written novel. Writer had done a really great job with characters. Story keeps you hooked from the first few chapters itself. And I am loving the way story is moving forward, won't give much spoilers but keep up the good work!
I love it! The novel was a great read to me. It is well written out, the world and the characters were interesting, the story flow was smooth too! I would love to see more of the story, it has so much potential in it! Would definitely recommend this, hope to see more of the story and may it bloom! Good work author, keep it up!! [img=recommend]
This is a first for me, I’vee never read such a captivating experience on such a tough topic. The way the Mc views things paints such a deactiptive picture of his own struggles that I couldn’t help but be pulled in. For this topic I can’t believe how well written this work I. The seemless transition between actualIty and the mc view work well in a harmonious manne…. 👌🏿🤙🏿
It reminds me of a kind of water world game I've played. As for the story and the other aspects are well thought of. It's a good job you've done there.
Woah!! this is so good... it's my first time reading a book with the MC being autistic. I love your writing style. The flow of the story is smooth with no grammar errors. With time, this book would bloom Good Work, Author!!
Yeah, the book cover is pretty unique and can engage more readers. No problem with the grammar because there are only a few mistakes. Overall the story had so much potential.
I really did enjoy the novel so far! First and foremost, the representation of autism is fantastic. The author also went out of their way to provide definitions to clarify anything that the reader may not be familiar with. The writing is fantastically done. Many webnovels have the issue of grammatical errors, but I have seen none with this one so far! The descriptions and authors voice are beautifully done. I woukd reccomend this 10/10!
I immedietly hook in by the premise of the story and can't help but wonder what is going to happen next. The wording is excellent and i'm impress by the author ability to make me understand the context without having to explain too much. This novel is very enjoyable and it is refreshing to see such fresh premise. Keep on the good work! this will be in my libary for sure![img=recommend]
Oh, how I couldn't get enough of this story! The plot, the characters, the world building, and the quality! Everything was just perfect! I gotta give it to you, author, you've done a great job!
Overall - This is a captivating novel to read. If you want to read a book full of intrigue, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - Classic third person point of view. The author shows the expressions and feelings of the characters in a fantastic way. The reader's are able to experience the ways of the characters in a great way. Story - It's about Noe, an autistic child who was thrown into a chaotic world of hatred and eventually sided with evil, Hard to put down. It'll make the reader's yearn for more. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The main characters of Noe is well designed and written for his role. His development show the great work of the author. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author.
Such an intriguing story! Although I was skeptic at the very beginning, sooner I liked the mistery, the sense of unknown and the suspence the author builds up. Really recommended!
This is actually very different to other books on this platform for which I am very grateful. If anyone happens across this review... DO READ THIS BOOK. The author has a way with words that paint an emotion which is very difficult to do as an author myself. Great job author