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Good content, Love it! Keep your great works. Your future is shining! And your imagination level is great! As I am a writer too I can learn some policy of writing from you because I love the way you wrote the dialogues
came for a review swap but ended up reading more than i planned haha! thank you for this wonderful read dear author! the characters are so loveable and i can't wait to read what would come next!
Great story! I really enjoy how to background of the world serves to augment the characters, it is really refreshing. This book has a lot of potential, can't wait for more!
I like this story, even though its imperfect. It shows a lot of promise. The way author puts details into the world around the characters makes it all the more engaging.
Let the new readers experience what I experienced in this novel. Guys, check this novel out and you will not regret it! More power to the author's writings and more inspirations to come. May it be blessed with more readers! Overall a good read for me so it is a high five! 🙏
I like the story telling and it's very good written. I noticed that the writer seems to be a native English speaker so her writing is great and fresh, as I found little to no grammar mistake. There was detail that made you feel the emotions of characters, including that the characters felt just like real people and the way they talked and communicated was all relatable and interesting. I like female lead, Brinna's character design. The premise is good, intriguing synopsis coupled with good cover and good first chapter is all you need to have to catch the readers attention. If anything and it could be personal, I rated the male lead with one star. His character design and the way he's introduced is a big no for me. First, he seems to be shallow, spoiled and easy person as he wanted to play with women he didn't even meet in person. Second, he's creepy and disrespectful, unprofessional and stalker, he's a CEO of a certain hotel, yet he kept stalking at the women who slept in his hotel through the CCTV, it's unprofessional. I know he's a player but at least he should've a bit of respect and class. Overall it's good reading experience and I see the potential as your writing is really good. Don't mind me about what I thought about the male lead, I just want to point out his character from my viewpoint. Well, good luck.
The first one to review! Yay! The story had a smooth beginning? I loved how Bri was so sassy and didn't follow the typical attitude that you expect from a rich heiress! She's so down to earth and I bet the playboy Jason would fall for her charms soon!😉 Author, keep up the good work![img=recommend] Excited to see how the story proceeds![img=update]
Not sure whether this story is marked teen, but it's definitely in teen category, with how the emotions and story build up of the story goes. Author writes pretty well, setting is nice .. However, she misses out on some common norms. Double Quotes always start on a new line, no matter how small. This is not a big deal, because on webnovel, you can edit and update... there are stray punctuation marks, such as double quotes, full stops, and occassional typos. obviously, these are minor, but at some point you need to review and fix. All in all, it's a good read. Try it, It just might be your cup of tea.
Good content, Love it! Keep your great works. Your future is shining! And your imagination level is great! As I am a writer too I can learn some policy of writing from you because I love the way you wrote the dialogues
came for a review swap but ended up reading more than i planned haha! thank you for this wonderful read dear author! the characters are so loveable and i can't wait to read what would come next!
Great story! I really enjoy how to background of the world serves to augment the characters, it is really refreshing. This book has a lot of potential, can't wait for more!
I like this story, even though its imperfect. It shows a lot of promise. The way author puts details into the world around the characters makes it all the more engaging.
Let the new readers experience what I experienced in this novel. Guys, check this novel out and you will not regret it! More power to the author's writings and more inspirations to come. May it be blessed with more readers! Overall a good read for me so it is a high five! 🙏
I like the story telling and it's very good written. I noticed that the writer seems to be a native English speaker so her writing is great and fresh, as I found little to no grammar mistake. There was detail that made you feel the emotions of characters, including that the characters felt just like real people and the way they talked and communicated was all relatable and interesting. I like female lead, Brinna's character design. The premise is good, intriguing synopsis coupled with good cover and good first chapter is all you need to have to catch the readers attention. If anything and it could be personal, I rated the male lead with one star. His character design and the way he's introduced is a big no for me. First, he seems to be shallow, spoiled and easy person as he wanted to play with women he didn't even meet in person. Second, he's creepy and disrespectful, unprofessional and stalker, he's a CEO of a certain hotel, yet he kept stalking at the women who slept in his hotel through the CCTV, it's unprofessional. I know he's a player but at least he should've a bit of respect and class. Overall it's good reading experience and I see the potential as your writing is really good. Don't mind me about what I thought about the male lead, I just want to point out his character from my viewpoint. Well, good luck.
The first one to review! Yay! The story had a smooth beginning? I loved how Bri was so sassy and didn't follow the typical attitude that you expect from a rich heiress! She's so down to earth and I bet the playboy Jason would fall for her charms soon!😉 Author, keep up the good work![img=recommend] Excited to see how the story proceeds![img=update]
Not sure whether this story is marked teen, but it's definitely in teen category, with how the emotions and story build up of the story goes. Author writes pretty well, setting is nice .. However, she misses out on some common norms. Double Quotes always start on a new line, no matter how small. This is not a big deal, because on webnovel, you can edit and update... there are stray punctuation marks, such as double quotes, full stops, and occassional typos. obviously, these are minor, but at some point you need to review and fix. All in all, it's a good read. Try it, It just might be your cup of tea.