My personality type is『Miracles』
2018-04-19 Se unió Russia
Yes XD
I already had a disadvantage, being thrown into this place much later than everybody else in this year. However, I knew in my heart of hearts that cultivating the same way as everybody does will cripple my power in the future.
Eastern · Garessta
nope, just the pieces were really small like quantum-level small XD
My heart was broken into more pieces than there were stars in the sky, but my body and soul kept fighting.
Eastern · Garessta
always have been @_@ i'm really tempted to post more chapters, tbh, but i need to make good stash first to ensure stable updates in the future
Best defense is a good offense
Eastern · Garessta
Duh.
Info sheet (everything you wanted to know but forgot)
Eastern · Garessta
You utter fool, the author's info sheet is forty pages longer! This is but the top of the iceberg!
Info sheet (everything you wanted to know but forgot)
Eastern · Garessta
what a nice story... this is the gift for ME!
ch 23 Ch 22: From My Boyfriend
Teen · Thalia_Ilace
nah it was Tao clan's army of the Crystal Phoenix Sect. same as Lin clan is a part of the Purple Dragon Sect.
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Eastern · Garessta
to be honest, you aren't a cultivator
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Eastern · Garessta
...Maybe less sense. But still makes some sense! Me: *spends hours upon hours editing and rewriting stuff to improve plot and fix mistakes* Also me: *adds new mistakes and typos as she goes* Ah... I will fix that. Thank you.
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Eastern · Garessta
T_______________T
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Eastern · Garessta
thanks... TwT *edits stuff then fails at editing anyway*
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Eastern · Garessta
whose?
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Eastern · Garessta
>:3 treat waits for you ahead, then, i suppose
"After all that show, you only make two petals, Disciple? How pathetic. I hope you become an inner disciple just so you could stand on the battlefield and show this to the enemies of Purple Dragon Sect. They will all die with laughter. Next!"
Eastern · Garessta
however, these qi stones did come from somewhere, unow.
I had no confirmation, and cultivating on your own is extremely hard for an average dirt-digger. Without a natural source of Qi, like Qi stones, it was impossible to move to the middle stage of Qi shaping, because until then, you couldn't see ambient Qi.
Eastern · Garessta
yeah? hm *recalls cultivation novels she read* huh, these ARE kinda rare. usually it's just one or few overpowered guys coming to enemy sect and killing everyone lame.
"After all that show, you only make two petals, Disciple? How pathetic. I hope you become an inner disciple just so you could stand on the battlefield and show this to the enemies of Purple Dragon Sect. They will all die with laughter. Next!"
Eastern · Garessta
it's called "mental gymnastics"
That mindset was poison that crumbled communities. I wasn't a hero, but only total scum could watch something like this happen and feel nothing. Besides... If Fu Zhou became a strong cultivator in the future, I might call back on the favor I was giving her today.
Eastern · Garessta
not the worst idea, but nah besides, if there was a chaos element, shouldn't there be an order element? who knows, maybe the secret element is air, lmao
"And the 13th element of the universe is lost to time… But it's doubtlessly unfathomably powerful. You, however, must first master the elements of nature!"
Eastern · Garessta
grammar: 3 stars. spaces in weird places, typos, mistakes, sudden switches from past tense to present tense and whatnot. use grammarly or something. plot: 2 stars. the logic fails it. even a simple "bullied guy becomes strong" origin story is falling apart because... a bullied guy snaps, and because of that, goes on a walk? what is this, a rimworld moment? characters: 2 stars. The lack of plot logic seeps into characters. and the system is annoying. does it HAVE to insult the MC, whom the readers project themselves on? and MC himself. he wants to be stronger, but we only know that coz that's what he wants from the system. why he wants to be stronger? what are his problems? world: 3 stars. painfully average on the base level, with some things that are just... badly explained. like superpowers, or systems, which are apparently common????
THE WEAKEST SYSTEM IN HISTORY
Fantasy · UniverseM007