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the description is rather common so most wouldn't find this fic interesting at first, but I'll be making another overview so yall know what you're heading into. no spoilers (not much) atleast. so the main is an art student reborn in naruto world, nothing much at first, the system allows him to gain points from letting people read his naruto manga, the stronger the person, the more points he gets, and so that's the part that makes him the ( OP?) protagonist. BUT here's the catch, this fanfic is based in the time wayy before naruto was born, the main gets to interact with people like the sannins even orochimaru before he turned, ya know, pedophile, and the uzumaki clan before they got eradicated. thanks to the settings, we get to see many of the author's OC making this unique in it's own way, and since naruto and others in the canon didn't exist yet, no one expects the MC's manga to be somekind of predictions. you can't see where this is going, this, my fellow reader, is an unpredictable fanfic, like time travelling and butterfly effects type of unpredictability along with "restaurant in another world" and "black tech internet cafe" vibe. so far this is quite an interesting and relaxing read. there's hardly any grammatical mistakes. MC's the lazy type and his chemistry with other character is surprisingly good.
Starts out very good but later it becomes obvious that this was written by a very cringe Chinese person. Just by reading the title, readers must have thought to themselves the obvious questions about what people the Naruto universe will think and do when someone publishes manga that contains information about clan secrets, hidden techniques and weaknesses. Or just ourtight explains how to lean powerful Jutsu like the rasengan. Well, sadly the Author has no sound answer to any of those questions. People just don't care or it simply isn't that important. Only in the case of the Rasengan, there suddenly needs to be censorship. Uchiha secrets being published is perfectly fine.
I had a lot of fun reading this although the warning was abrupt, it managed to keep my attention the whole way through so 5 stars. There should have been at least a little more romance tho.
I stopped from the moment mc killed uz umaki civilians and children without any remorse Sorry,but can't read this shit
Following the trope of "Characters read the books" I found this jewel of Character read the comics, congratulations for doing such a great work
Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal! ¡Crear el manga de Naruto en Naruto World se convertirá en mi objetivo final! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Translation fell off in later chapters. Names were changed to chinese counterpart.
the translation was okay, a lot of wrong names and grammar errors. Story is quite simple, vanilla and easy to read. The enjoyable parts were mostly reactions, this is more of a react novel than a story-centric fanfic.
Generalmente, una vez que termino de ver un anime que me gustó y me hizo pensar en la vida, siempre deja un vacío inexplicable. Sentí lo mismo al final de éste FanFic. Muy buen Fanfic.
I just completed the story. The plot of the book was very captivating and interesting, I was disappointed on how you ended the story tho,you should have expanded more about the ending.Even tho this is a good story
I wish there was more of an epilogue. Honestly it was a warm read, like no one you care about dies. Seriously though a timeskip to 10 years later would be great.
Boa novel, primeira com esse estilo de escrita e narrativa que li, e achei a premissa inicial da história bem interessante, ver como os personagens reagiam ao "futuro" era a melhor parte da novel para mim. Fora algumas partes "massantes" e a pressa no final para terminar a história... a novel foi bem interessante de se ler. Meus agradecimentos ao autor.
A good fanfic this is. Its a relief romance was not pushed too much as it will only ruin the story. Overall, its worth reading.
I love it, but can you fix the title? It should be something like this - "Creating The Naruto Manga in The World of Naruto Has Become My Goal!"
Tbh, this novel is good. But, it is too weird when you read it because the grammar and wording are not good enough. Besides that, the names of the original characters make it unsightly to read considering that the characters in the Naruto anime use Japanese names, although I don't know if it were mistakes from the translator or what.
Top quality fan-fiction. Absolutely loved it. But, the ending is rushed and that degraded it a bit. Cannot blame anyone though, I'm grateful that the author didn't drop the novel without giving it an ending when there was lack of support from the readers. It's a good novel.
The Mc is such a lazy bum for no reason ant all and still becomes broken. Considering he was was from the 21st century and he was a fan of Naruto u would think he would abuse everything he could but he literally just aims for shadow clone Hutus first with his system and then lazies around like a clown ignoring the incoming war….like tf?
I like it so far (chapter 79). It's unique compared to other fics, but not by much. The author has interesting ideas and concepts and can write them out. Its fluid, which makes it easy to read. Here are the main issues: 1) The author sometimes mixes Chinese cultivation and Naruto progression. 2) The writing self-contradicts itself from one point to another later on in the story. I do believe the author forgets sometimes what they wrote. 3) There are minor details that the author uses in Chinese format. For example, there is confusion about the currencies of taels and ryo. Another example would be yin and yang, which are different in Naruto and Chinese cultivation. 4) The author should try to expand their vocabulary and proofread. 5) There is also a tendency to repeat facts that the readers are already aware of. Overusing words and repeating phrases, multiple times in a given chapter gets old fast. 6) I'm not exactly sure about this, but there might be pedophilia from the MC. The author is pulling a Mushoku Tensei, which I don't like at all. It's creepy and gross, especially when we know he was an adult before transmigrating. The author also views the sister of MC as just a loli, and not using her name. Overall, it's not bad. The writing gets better over time.
I found the story to be a fairly interesting concept, but it started to get pretty boring after a while. The story covers a person who gets stronger by having people enjoy their comics. They write several comics, not just naruto. This all takes place many years before naruto, resulting in the story altering the course of history. Frankly, me finding it boring after a while is LARGELY just a difference in tastes. It is a really good idea. I personally rate it a 3 stars (where 2.5 is average), but I think if I had different tastes I might would give it 4 stars. Therefore, I am averaging it out to 3.5 stars.
Just GREAT. I Recommend this book to all readers out there. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. ... . .. ......... .. .
That was an amazing journey!. Though dissapointed at the rushed ending with no romance .....................................................
not going anywhere its like mc draws naruto manga in naruto world boring!!!! bad sentence formation / writing style tried to find romance but its hard in messy jumbled chpters[img=faceslap]
Revelar spoiler
I say, this is my best slice-of-life naruto fanfic that i read. A simple Advice to those who wants to read this fic, Ignore the dumb comments in the early chaps and there you can now enjoy this fic
Stop calling a 6 year loli, first of all that term is used for a 13 year. second it sounds disgusting. And down right pedophillic.
I don't like the lazy guy, he's in naruto's world where you can get killed if he's careless and he's lazy, he only thinks about making comics, I know that comics give you points and all that but he hasn't trained in anything and I'm on chapter 70.
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the description is rather common so most wouldn't find this fic interesting at first, but I'll be making another overview so yall know what you're heading into. no spoilers (not much) atleast. so the main is an art student reborn in naruto world, nothing much at first, the system allows him to gain points from letting people read his naruto manga, the stronger the person, the more points he gets, and so that's the part that makes him the ( OP?) protagonist. BUT here's the catch, this fanfic is based in the time wayy before naruto was born, the main gets to interact with people like the sannins even orochimaru before he turned, ya know, pedophile, and the uzumaki clan before they got eradicated. thanks to the settings, we get to see many of the author's OC making this unique in it's own way, and since naruto and others in the canon didn't exist yet, no one expects the MC's manga to be somekind of predictions. you can't see where this is going, this, my fellow reader, is an unpredictable fanfic, like time travelling and butterfly effects type of unpredictability along with "restaurant in another world" and "black tech internet cafe" vibe. so far this is quite an interesting and relaxing read. there's hardly any grammatical mistakes. MC's the lazy type and his chemistry with other character is surprisingly good.
Starts out very good but later it becomes obvious that this was written by a very cringe Chinese person. Just by reading the title, readers must have thought to themselves the obvious questions about what people the Naruto universe will think and do when someone publishes manga that contains information about clan secrets, hidden techniques and weaknesses. Or just ourtight explains how to lean powerful Jutsu like the rasengan. Well, sadly the Author has no sound answer to any of those questions. People just don't care or it simply isn't that important. Only in the case of the Rasengan, there suddenly needs to be censorship. Uchiha secrets being published is perfectly fine.
I had a lot of fun reading this although the warning was abrupt, it managed to keep my attention the whole way through so 5 stars. There should have been at least a little more romance tho.
I stopped from the moment mc killed uz umaki civilians and children without any remorse Sorry,but can't read this shit
Following the trope of "Characters read the books" I found this jewel of Character read the comics, congratulations for doing such a great work
Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal! ¡Crear el manga de Naruto en Naruto World se convertirá en mi objetivo final! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Translation fell off in later chapters. Names were changed to chinese counterpart.
the translation was okay, a lot of wrong names and grammar errors. Story is quite simple, vanilla and easy to read. The enjoyable parts were mostly reactions, this is more of a react novel than a story-centric fanfic.
Generalmente, una vez que termino de ver un anime que me gustó y me hizo pensar en la vida, siempre deja un vacío inexplicable. Sentí lo mismo al final de éste FanFic. Muy buen Fanfic.
I just completed the story. The plot of the book was very captivating and interesting, I was disappointed on how you ended the story tho,you should have expanded more about the ending.Even tho this is a good story
I wish there was more of an epilogue. Honestly it was a warm read, like no one you care about dies. Seriously though a timeskip to 10 years later would be great.
Boa novel, primeira com esse estilo de escrita e narrativa que li, e achei a premissa inicial da história bem interessante, ver como os personagens reagiam ao "futuro" era a melhor parte da novel para mim. Fora algumas partes "massantes" e a pressa no final para terminar a história... a novel foi bem interessante de se ler. Meus agradecimentos ao autor.
A good fanfic this is. Its a relief romance was not pushed too much as it will only ruin the story. Overall, its worth reading.
I love it, but can you fix the title? It should be something like this - "Creating The Naruto Manga in The World of Naruto Has Become My Goal!"
Tbh, this novel is good. But, it is too weird when you read it because the grammar and wording are not good enough. Besides that, the names of the original characters make it unsightly to read considering that the characters in the Naruto anime use Japanese names, although I don't know if it were mistakes from the translator or what.
Top quality fan-fiction. Absolutely loved it. But, the ending is rushed and that degraded it a bit. Cannot blame anyone though, I'm grateful that the author didn't drop the novel without giving it an ending when there was lack of support from the readers. It's a good novel.
The Mc is such a lazy bum for no reason ant all and still becomes broken. Considering he was was from the 21st century and he was a fan of Naruto u would think he would abuse everything he could but he literally just aims for shadow clone Hutus first with his system and then lazies around like a clown ignoring the incoming war….like tf?
I like it so far (chapter 79). It's unique compared to other fics, but not by much. The author has interesting ideas and concepts and can write them out. Its fluid, which makes it easy to read. Here are the main issues: 1) The author sometimes mixes Chinese cultivation and Naruto progression. 2) The writing self-contradicts itself from one point to another later on in the story. I do believe the author forgets sometimes what they wrote. 3) There are minor details that the author uses in Chinese format. For example, there is confusion about the currencies of taels and ryo. Another example would be yin and yang, which are different in Naruto and Chinese cultivation. 4) The author should try to expand their vocabulary and proofread. 5) There is also a tendency to repeat facts that the readers are already aware of. Overusing words and repeating phrases, multiple times in a given chapter gets old fast. 6) I'm not exactly sure about this, but there might be pedophilia from the MC. The author is pulling a Mushoku Tensei, which I don't like at all. It's creepy and gross, especially when we know he was an adult before transmigrating. The author also views the sister of MC as just a loli, and not using her name. Overall, it's not bad. The writing gets better over time.
I found the story to be a fairly interesting concept, but it started to get pretty boring after a while. The story covers a person who gets stronger by having people enjoy their comics. They write several comics, not just naruto. This all takes place many years before naruto, resulting in the story altering the course of history. Frankly, me finding it boring after a while is LARGELY just a difference in tastes. It is a really good idea. I personally rate it a 3 stars (where 2.5 is average), but I think if I had different tastes I might would give it 4 stars. Therefore, I am averaging it out to 3.5 stars.
Just GREAT. I Recommend this book to all readers out there. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. ... . .. ......... .. .
That was an amazing journey!. Though dissapointed at the rushed ending with no romance .....................................................
not going anywhere its like mc draws naruto manga in naruto world boring!!!! bad sentence formation / writing style tried to find romance but its hard in messy jumbled chpters[img=faceslap]
Revelar spoiler I say, this is my best slice-of-life naruto fanfic that i read. A simple Advice to those who wants to read this fic, Ignore the dumb comments in the early chaps and there you can now enjoy this fic
Stop calling a 6 year loli, first of all that term is used for a 13 year. second it sounds disgusting. And down right pedophillic.
I don't like the lazy guy, he's in naruto's world where you can get killed if he's careless and he's lazy, he only thinks about making comics, I know that comics give you points and all that but he hasn't trained in anything and I'm on chapter 70.
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