One Piece: King of Desire

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Bobodolo

Just an idea stuck in my head. I don't know if anyone will want to read it so I just posted it. This story won't be very good but its nice practice for the other Fanfics I wana write.

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nethatar

5/5 Writing quality: It's good, it's readable, much better than other writers. 5/5 Stability of updates: It's been daily so far, but I prefer quality over quantity. 4/5 Story development: The story so far is in the early stages but I do like what you are planning to do. 4/5 Character development: Once again, the story is in the early stages, but hopefully you can develop the MC and his crew well so we can know their personality's. 4/5 World Background: This story takes place in one piece so it's not completely original, but I do like what you are doing, the fruit works pretty well for this world. -- I'm gonna guess this story is mainly for r-18, but hopefully you can also build the plot well, the fruit is pretty original, I can't remember a fruit like this being used, but if it has, it probably wasn't even used in one piece, so this original, most readers prefer quality over quantity, so instead of always updating daily, why not every 2 days (it could be daily if you think of something good) and make the story better plotwise. Don't feel obligated to always listen to a person's comment, especially if they want you to change the story (to a big degree especially). If you don't feel well, don't feel obligated to always make a chapter. Good Luck!

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LaurentCross

Amazing need more chapters for a actual detailed review but neverthless I can’t wait for more keep up the great work !!!!!🙏🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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GuDoaistMeosta

Please don't drop! their is a criminal lack of Incubus fics on this platform....................................................................

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Shiliew

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Shino_Franz

I don't know why its hard to find, but one of my top 10 One Piece fan fiction... I just hope the author would not dropped this.. This novel deserve to be known

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Weezyf

What should i say? This story was my favourite until he genderbent his whole harem into men.. **** he used an excuse that men are stronger so wtf now.. also barely any R18 chapters so if youve come for that forget it

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Zerr

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

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MohamedRost

more more more more moremoremore more moremoremoremore more moremoremoremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremoremore more moremoremoremore more moremoremoremore more more more more more more more more more more moremoremoremore

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TheYoungMan

more more more more moremoremore more moremoremoremore more moremoremoremore more more more more more more more more more more moremoremoremore

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BrownOptometrist

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

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Nafsu_geass28

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

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Fk_Fk

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood