Pansy Parkinson - doing it right this time -

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Lime_Juice

I like female mcs because they arent usually harem mcs which in not a huge fan of. The character pansy is one of my like favorite non main character and I love what your doing. Please make more so I can enjoy this >-<. I like butterfly effect but too drastic of changes from super out of the way choices is 2 much 4 me. idk if I read it all correctly might of got confused but I still love it so ye u=u. I hope this character stays in the realm of possibility with her own flaws and not a perfect being. Your doing a great job and whatever you do with this story I'll read along. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]. (following main story or like own adventure or both?)

LV 12

Sevennamed

It took until chapter 4 before it was revealed that the main character is a girl. Personally I'm not going to continue reading as I'm not interested in Reading a romance from a girl's perspective with a guy. Nothing wrong with the store though.

LV 4

Fertu

Honestly, a very strange and illogical novel. It started out not bad, a bit of a slow burn for my tastes, but okay. Then it went downhill very fast. MC's sudden erratic behaviour, strange mood swings, not to mention that she acts like she's permamently 6 years old, not almost 30. This "Daddy abandoned me, now I'm depressed" move would work if she was and original character who is actually 6 years old, but she should basically consider him a familiar stranger, since he's always at work and she was almost a grown up in her past life. To understand what their relationship should look like, imagine you have a neighbor at home who comes from work late and with whom you just exchange few polite phrases. That's what their relationship basically should be at best, since he's a bigoted nazi who decides her life for a foreseeable future to her and she's a little brat to him. And why would her father suddenly decide "Okay, it's been 6 years since my wife died, f*ck my daugher, let's mourn!"? Who actually does that? It doesn't work like that - he either should drop her at the beginning and grieve, or don't drop her at all, or what's the point of all those father-daugther bonding scenes? Maybe if there was conflict with a new wife or smth it would be more believable, but it's dramatic nonsense otherwise. And the last, but not the least - what the heck is happening with story pace? It is slowburn with character development at first, and then *BAM* DRAMATIC TIMESKIP!! Story seems not very well thought out honestly, like every chapter and plot development depend on author's current mood during writing and there's no general plan at all.

LV 10

OhhhhNooo

Just came across this by accident and all i can say is that you’ve made my week. To think that this passed me. I’ll be back after i read somemore and give it the rating it deserves.[img=faceslap][img=update]

LV 4

Mlnt

Loving the story so far, just hope it doesn't start bashing Dumbledore or make the house elves to OP. It happens in to many Harry potter fanfics!

LV 11

Akahime

think this fic is one of the best and one of my favorites, but it has a big problem. It takes a long time to release chapters and, honestly, they are very short. I know this is a fic, the author does not need to follow and keep releasing chapters every day or on a specific schedule, but it is very annoying to wait 1 week or even longer for 1 chapter with less than 500 words.

LV 2

Vinicius_Severino

is this a yuri? if he was a guy before, then it doesn't make sense for him to have a male partner (unless he was gay) google translator.....

LV 4

Thomas_Larsen_0553

Just came across this by accident and all i can say is that you’ve made my week. To think that this passed me. I’ll be back after i read somemore and give it the rating it deserves.[img=faceslap][img=update]

LV 4

MCG_Necromancer

Even when it only has 61 chapters, the story made me smile. Wonder if the Author were still active in Wattpad? I don't have an account on scribblehub sadly....

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Autor, Add+ tag: #mc female #female main character #self insert #reincarnation #transmigration #villain [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Pretty interesting fic.......................................................................................................................m.........

LV 2

TheCoruscatingPen

i like it pls do more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 13

YOLO36

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LV 3

Yui_Kitsuki

it's ok the only reason my rating is somewhat low is because of grammar mistakes, super slow update and not really a fan of what's going on it just not to my liking it's not that it's bad aslo im hoping for the love interest be draco

LV 2

Luci90

Estou amando esta historia até agora . Aguardo novas atualizações😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

LV 12

LeyMerSen

Nope, not liking it, i dunno for others though. Hsbsussbsbsgsgsgsshsbsbbssssss:sbbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbsbssbshshfg Ubuntu rfid tnx ending thing envu yummy glitch tm 3

LV 4

BeautifulBastard

not bad but the drama is leaving me a little unmotivated to continue reading I hope that now that she is at hogwarts it improves a little. ..