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The writing is amazing, but the main character, why is he so passive? It’s frustrating to read. His mother almost kills him. And he’s not angry? Beta cuck simp behavior. While the writing is amazing, there’s nothing that’s hooking me onto the story to keep reading. You go into detail about everything, many of which is pointless. You need to fix your pacing issue. Especially because this is a fanfic, not an original. The only thing I have liked so far is the he(?) part in the beginning. That was really interesting.
the only saving grace for this novel is its somewhat ok grammar and writing quality , other than that every other aspect is either terribly bad or agonizingly boring and cliche this novel is closer to a Chinese xianxia than a dxd fanfic where you have the mc hoing on pointless side quests in order to gain power only to come out weaker than he was , not to mention the mc is a 6 y/o child for most of it . overall it was a huge waste of time .
I'm not at the the 50's or 100's chapters yet but i must say that I love how the word count on each chapter I read so far are as long as my favorite novels, like toaru majutsu no index or I got a cheat ability in another world, and became extraordinary in the real world
the story is fine, maybe just add a "tradegy tag"...................................................................................................................
Easily one of, if not the best DxD fanfics I've come across. The author plays with the canon and brings characters from other fandoms into the story in ways that actually make sense by adapting their powers and such to fit the existing power system of this world, and changing their race (species) to fit as well, but in a way that doesn't betray the core of the existing character. The MC is very well written, and isn't just OP for the sake of being OP. He struggles, he has to work and earn his powerups and even has drawbacks and penalties for overusing his abilities. Looking forward to reading more.
Well first of all the wtiting quality is quite good and there are rarely any grammar mistakes and updating stability is okay aswell. But that is really where the good news stop. The MC used to be an adult yet as many other fics do, the reincarnated Mc acts more like a child than a fully grown up man, which is the reason I detest reborn Mc’s that start as babies/kids. Now this is just my personal opinion so to those who like these kind of scenarios, I’m sure this will be a huge plus for you. Then we come to my biggest problem with the fanfic; this does not feel like a DxD verse, this is more Xianxia fantasy than anything else. I can get that each fanfic will have a personal touch from the author but when you go so far as to almost completely changing the genre, then maybe you should take a moment to rethink your choice of work.
I have no words, the story is incredible, the characters are incredible, the developments are incredible, and the relationships are incredible. The story is a 10/10. Thanks for doing it :)
so the a question here is is he the type that will becomes someones slave or so called peerage joining havent raid yet so the rating is just random
Write up is quite good from a grammar and literary skill point of view. However character background is weak af…. Son of a servant to the youkai. Not an enjoyable read for those who hope for an op mc. Youkai backgrou is one of the weakest in the entire dxd verse….not to mention he is a cat subspecies.
character design is good and world background is so so. but the story is baad. This has so much tragedy that i dont get why the comedy tag is attached here. The story is quite readable. But i started skipping the moment he got kidnapped. i mean after he got reincarnated * he got into a life and death situation in underworld. * His mom left to do some things without thinking to much about her son. * While looking for his mom, he got mixed up with bellial incident. * next moment he got kidnapped. This looks like xianxia to me .
Honestly, there isn’t much to say, other than this is one of the better, if the best, DXD fics I have read. Would totally recommend this to anyone who would give it a try.
This fanfic is good, but Mc is naive and stupid Harem Protagonist. Still pretty good fanfic tho [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it good....I'm just upset that I can't give power stones....that it rlly. updating stability is reasonable considering its a good story, but everything else is fine, world background can never go wrong, the only way it can ever go wrong is if there are more than two worlds combined in a horrible way, so everything is fine, MC is perfect as a 'human' character
The story and plot itself isn't bad, but not great either. What has me really frustrated is the mc himself. He is naive, stupid and even after all that he has experienced he is like your typical shounen protagonist.
Una de mis novelas favoritas y también una de las mejores novelas de DxD que hay en webnovel Excelente gramática, excelente MC, excelentes personajes secundarios. Aunque tarda en sacar capítulos, son muy largos y eso lo compensa Mi única queja sería que hay muchos personajes que yo desconozco si son OC o son de otras series como Touho, fate o genshin. Haria falta como un ¿glosario? De todos modos Excelente novela 10/10
Easily one of the best dxd fanfics I've read so far. And I am someone who has read my fair share of fanfics. Seriously, great job done so far.
One of those good fanfics about DxD that features a progression from weak to strong, unlike other fanfics of DxD that automatically gives the Mc some OP gifts and having some similarities to cocky Mc's that think he can do whatever he wants. Shame that the updates are slow but at least the chapters are not so short so overall author
It is one of the best fanfiction in this apps or site the story progress is good and the pacing is also good the characters development is already in the best light novels category in my opinion is it on par maybe even surpassed the official novel and the mc is an interesting and amusing characters i hope this novel will 1000k chapters and the update will increase futher also the chapters is readable with good grammar and the chapter content is long which is Good
Webnovel still sucks for not letting me give power-stones!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I gotta give another five-star for maid power..................................
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This is rlly unique since the si is neither a dragon, a devil nor an angel so 5 stars for me
The writing is amazing, but the main character, why is he so passive? It’s frustrating to read. His mother almost kills him. And he’s not angry? Beta cuck simp behavior. While the writing is amazing, there’s nothing that’s hooking me onto the story to keep reading. You go into detail about everything, many of which is pointless. You need to fix your pacing issue. Especially because this is a fanfic, not an original. The only thing I have liked so far is the he(?) part in the beginning. That was really interesting.
the only saving grace for this novel is its somewhat ok grammar and writing quality , other than that every other aspect is either terribly bad or agonizingly boring and cliche this novel is closer to a Chinese xianxia than a dxd fanfic where you have the mc hoing on pointless side quests in order to gain power only to come out weaker than he was , not to mention the mc is a 6 y/o child for most of it . overall it was a huge waste of time .
I'm not at the the 50's or 100's chapters yet but i must say that I love how the word count on each chapter I read so far are as long as my favorite novels, like toaru majutsu no index or I got a cheat ability in another world, and became extraordinary in the real world
the story is fine, maybe just add a "tradegy tag"...................................................................................................................
Easily one of, if not the best DxD fanfics I've come across. The author plays with the canon and brings characters from other fandoms into the story in ways that actually make sense by adapting their powers and such to fit the existing power system of this world, and changing their race (species) to fit as well, but in a way that doesn't betray the core of the existing character. The MC is very well written, and isn't just OP for the sake of being OP. He struggles, he has to work and earn his powerups and even has drawbacks and penalties for overusing his abilities. Looking forward to reading more.
Well first of all the wtiting quality is quite good and there are rarely any grammar mistakes and updating stability is okay aswell. But that is really where the good news stop. The MC used to be an adult yet as many other fics do, the reincarnated Mc acts more like a child than a fully grown up man, which is the reason I detest reborn Mc’s that start as babies/kids. Now this is just my personal opinion so to those who like these kind of scenarios, I’m sure this will be a huge plus for you. Then we come to my biggest problem with the fanfic; this does not feel like a DxD verse, this is more Xianxia fantasy than anything else. I can get that each fanfic will have a personal touch from the author but when you go so far as to almost completely changing the genre, then maybe you should take a moment to rethink your choice of work.
I have no words, the story is incredible, the characters are incredible, the developments are incredible, and the relationships are incredible. The story is a 10/10. Thanks for doing it :)
so the a question here is is he the type that will becomes someones slave or so called peerage joining havent raid yet so the rating is just random
Write up is quite good from a grammar and literary skill point of view. However character background is weak af…. Son of a servant to the youkai. Not an enjoyable read for those who hope for an op mc. Youkai backgrou is one of the weakest in the entire dxd verse….not to mention he is a cat subspecies.
character design is good and world background is so so. but the story is baad. This has so much tragedy that i dont get why the comedy tag is attached here. The story is quite readable. But i started skipping the moment he got kidnapped. i mean after he got reincarnated * he got into a life and death situation in underworld. * His mom left to do some things without thinking to much about her son. * While looking for his mom, he got mixed up with bellial incident. * next moment he got kidnapped. This looks like xianxia to me .
Honestly, there isn’t much to say, other than this is one of the better, if the best, DXD fics I have read. Would totally recommend this to anyone who would give it a try.
This fanfic is good, but Mc is naive and stupid Harem Protagonist. Still pretty good fanfic tho [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it good....I'm just upset that I can't give power stones....that it rlly. updating stability is reasonable considering its a good story, but everything else is fine, world background can never go wrong, the only way it can ever go wrong is if there are more than two worlds combined in a horrible way, so everything is fine, MC is perfect as a 'human' character
The story and plot itself isn't bad, but not great either. What has me really frustrated is the mc himself. He is naive, stupid and even after all that he has experienced he is like your typical shounen protagonist.
Una de mis novelas favoritas y también una de las mejores novelas de DxD que hay en webnovel Excelente gramática, excelente MC, excelentes personajes secundarios. Aunque tarda en sacar capítulos, son muy largos y eso lo compensa Mi única queja sería que hay muchos personajes que yo desconozco si son OC o son de otras series como Touho, fate o genshin. Haria falta como un ¿glosario? De todos modos Excelente novela 10/10
Easily one of the best dxd fanfics I've read so far. And I am someone who has read my fair share of fanfics. Seriously, great job done so far.
One of those good fanfics about DxD that features a progression from weak to strong, unlike other fanfics of DxD that automatically gives the Mc some OP gifts and having some similarities to cocky Mc's that think he can do whatever he wants. Shame that the updates are slow but at least the chapters are not so short so overall author
It is one of the best fanfiction in this apps or site the story progress is good and the pacing is also good the characters development is already in the best light novels category in my opinion is it on par maybe even surpassed the official novel and the mc is an interesting and amusing characters i hope this novel will 1000k chapters and the update will increase futher also the chapters is readable with good grammar and the chapter content is long which is Good
Webnovel still sucks for not letting me give power-stones!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I gotta give another five-star for maid power..................................
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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This is rlly unique since the si is neither a dragon, a devil nor an angel so 5 stars for me