Not A Chapter
Okay, so I've been struggling hard to finish the next chapter. I think a lot of my difficulty has to do with my early decision to have Hinata come with him, and some character decisions I made. I rushed past part 1 too quickly because I knew where I wanted to get to and got too excited to actually get there. Even if I managed to finish this next chapter, it would be hard to continue updating this story in a satisfactory manner, so I've got a couple of ideas.
1. Rewrite this story. If you follow my Marvel's Osmosian story, that story is a lot better than the original since I've gotten a lot more experienced as a writer. A rewrite of this story would give me the chance to flush out character interactions more and develop the story better. I may or may not switch the powerset he gets from the beginning to something that would allow more growth.
2. A story about a SI reincarnated as an experiment of Orochimaru's to clone Tobirama Senju. I think having a story that has a character that isn't focused in Konoha would give a lot more room to move away from canon since there's so much to explore outside of it.
3. An SI with the body of Kurapika in Naruto. I have a plan to allow him to keep up with the upper tiers of the Narutoverse despite Nen being a weaker power system. Nen has a lot of room to work with and Sasuke getting mad at Kurapika for being "a rip of Uchiha" even though Kurapika came first would be fun to work with.
I know a lot of people like this story, but it's so hard for me to try to get a chapter done that it's hurting the story in the long run. I think I've given proof that I can improve a story a lot with Marvel's Osmosian, so let me know what you guys think. If you really want me to keep the story going, I can try to keep writing chapters for it. If you have another idea you'd like to put forward, I'm happy to hear what it is as well.
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