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Waking up, I found myself with memories of a life as Sasuke Uchiha. I just graduated from the Ninja Academy, and with my knowledge and new power, I would be the strongest.
Beginning chapters under rewrite due to skipping over important stuff.
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Escribe una reseñaAt first character was bland (still is) basically it's the same character but then there was the bullsh*tery that started from the chunnin exam and characters other than the character that was supposed to be different was different and completely OOC without making any sense and it destroyed it, maybe if it had gone like the original without any of that sh*t my rating would have been higher
Dude I love this story there's not many stories about Sasuke especially a reincarnated as Sasuke so this is a big surprise for me I just hope you continue this story since it's one of my new favorite stories. also hopefully you can get better at school I hope to hear or read soon the next chapter is going to come out.
The writing quality is top notch, the character are well developed but i would like to see a more interesting sasuke. Anyways this is a good story to read if like sasuke.
This Story is bullshit. Learning Lighting Chakra Mode right after Graduation without knowing any Lightingjutsus or manipulation . Perfect Chakra Control. Some Carbon Manipulayion inside the body to strengthen it (that's not how the body works). And Hinata falls in love with him after spending some time together... Total Bullshit.
Pretty good but the main character is very Bland and robotic _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Gonna help a fellow author here. And from someone who has read a lot of hate, don't drop your novel all these guys never wrote anything in their lives, and continue your novel even if it's just to spit on their triggered faces. A question of mine. Will it have multiverse travel here?
In the beginning, the story was good, but since the beginning of the Chunin exam, the story began to change, and the interaction between the characters became forced. I think I prefer the normal Sasuke.
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Ngl, the author needs to elaborate about questionable things at the end of his chapters. For example why the main character has perfect chakra control and can so easily recreate the Lightning Cloak. I mean I understand why, but clearly everyone else is struggling to put two and two together. They'll ask dumbass questions like "How does he have perfect chakra control" As if the author didn't explain that twice in the first chapter. The mental capacity of Gold-Fish I tell ya. I like the story so far though. :)))
I'm leaving this, the reasons are simply that the thought of Sasuke and Hinata together somehow disgusts me but I would have no problems if it were another character, but it's just my opinion
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Really cliché, it's a story of an MC being Sasuke fucking cliché, the pairing with Hinata is incredibly forced and has no basis in anything, that totally ruins the story for me, honestly a waste to read this. And not to be resentful, the MC is simply a cliché MC that kills for its objectives that falls in love with any type and that seems cold, it doesn't have any development neither background, neither the history in if same, and the world in which this is not really something exceptional neither anything, it is alone Naruto, where there are most of Fanfics.
Honestly the story makes no sense hinata's life was never bad enough for her to leave the village hanabi deeply cared for her sister and hinata deeply loved her family so it makes no sense plus her all of a sudden liking sasuke after interacting once makes no sense plus her massive change of personality from liking naruto does naruto just ignore her do all the scenes of encouragement from naruto never happen she liked naruto for 8 years then just stops weird sasuke has knowledge of the story but chooses to walk to the same path of murdering his brother and following the general storyline of not giving a **** naruto staying the same after sasuke's massive change in personality also makes no sense the story develops like sasuke has no idea of what's going to happen yet clearly knows the whole story but the worst part of this story is still hinata
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The Romance with hinata if you can even call it that ruined it for me. Hinata has been in love with naruto since she was basically a kid and then because you made Sasuke spend some time with her she loved him enough to become a missing nin. Wtf.....