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To be honest, the start of this fanfic was not bad but it gets horrible and horrible later on. Too many useless infodumps and lack of plot progression makes it harder and harder to read.
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it will be better if he became high human elf witch can provide both benefits of high human and high elf
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This story is not enjoyable at all and I sometimes questions whether or not the author has a brain that can think or has ever even read DanMachi The MC is already one of the strongest people in Orario by like the 30th chapter and he is one of the best when it comes to magic, crafting, item creation, etc. All the characters he interacts with are girls and he legit flirts with all of them as a 13 year old kid. The characters other than the MC are so one-dimensional that its boring. There is no other POV in this story besides the MC so we don't see the reactions to his level up(1 month) or anything of the sort. Some characters like Ryuu and Hephaestus are so out of character when around the MC that it is honestly ridiculous. Also the story is just repeating itself. Wake up>train>Guild>Dungeon> Hostess Fertility> Status Check> Repeat. SO BORING. I don't recommend reading this unless you want to lose braincells and want to start disliking DanMachi
This has been a great story except for the major plot hole next to the fact he can flirt with everyone and even elves who disdain said stuff typically. With how the stats were for each level up by the time he became level 3 he'd be stronger then most level 10s if you take the average stats of each top tier adventurer when leveling. The stats should've capped at 1500 as most people forget the falna is based on the basis of a average level that you're at which is why bell could skip through levels despite taking it easy since his actions were judged against the average of his level.
Muy general, ya muy op el personaje al principio , no hay dificultad para desalojar al personaje, osea tenes habilidades muy rota, no hay nada bueno aqui
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the book start off bad with the broken stats and him shrugging off the trauma, but it get so much worse with all the horrible betrayal of the characters. its so forces that it made me right a review for the first time in months to put it simply I regret touching this garbage.
Despite the god tier first chapter the story is really boring. Mc is a Gary Stu who is perfect with no flaws,is charming that everyone loves,his personality is just nonexistent he was 16 and he became a 13 year old but instead of acting his actual age he acts like a hype active child who's only goal is to get woman and be cringe Another thing that is terrible about the story is how it treats its female characters like seriously every time mc talks to a woman they always mention how cute,handsome,charming (keep in mind he's 13)he is ALL THE TIME no one has a character besides sucking this guy off and a gimmick.
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The MC lacks wisdom, self preservation, foresight and true intelligence till at least chapter 70. Who would fricking curse himself, without knowing what it brings to not further his growth, but to get some stackable boost? The extra pool of resources is nice, but he can craft these as items. It ruins the read when the MC is self harming by sheer stupidity. I don´t know if the writer enjoys the egdelord stuff, but WHY a vampire curse? It´s Danmachi. Leave the edgelord stuff out of it. For hte most part the story develops fine and the characters while shallow are "rightish" enough. But the MC is just so cringe enducingly stupid in his aproach to strengthen himself and problem solving, that it almost physically hurt me to read it. If you love stupid MCs and egdelord stuff go ahead, clean writng and regular updates get 5 stars, background 4, charcter design and story 3. That is my take at chapter 70 when I couldn´t go on, because I loathe the MC and his stupidity. (cannot say it too often)
Scrolling down all they way to the bottom of the The review, i found so many 5 star spam. Sooo.. yeah, i don't like seeing that, since i'm a petty MF, i'll just put this review here. to balance things out, as they say.
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La historia es buena y todo sería buena que agas así historia de danmachi ya que casi no hay historia de danmachi y eso que hay trailer de danmachi
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Leí hasta el capitulo 82 y la dejé, desde el principio me aburrió un poco que coqueteara con todas las chicas que se cruzara, pero lo seguí leyendo porque no era como esos protagonistas que tratan mal a cualquiera que no les interesa, el MC es amistoso en general y eso me gustó. La historia iba bien hasta que subió de nivel, después de eso el 90% de los capítulos fueron sobre habilidades o artefactos que creó y me aburrió. También te centraste demasiado en el MC e ignoraste por completo al desarrollo de los otros personajes. Su personalidad desde mi punto de vista es bastante infantil y no mostró señal de madurar, aunque esto no es una critica sino mas una preferencia, Entiendo que sea una historia de harem que no se centra en el romance pero las chicas apenas tienen personalidad propia y solo se enamoran fácilmente del MC por cualquier cosa que hace. Por ultimo me pareció que la historia se sentía vacía en cierto sentido, llegó a Orario y empezó a volverse mas fuerte y así siguió toda la historia. Por ahí sea algo que solo yo sentí pero me pareció que algo faltaba, como un objetivo final, viaje a otro mundo o algo así.
Revelar spoiler To be honest, the start of this fanfic was not bad but it gets horrible and horrible later on. Too many useless infodumps and lack of plot progression makes it harder and harder to read.
Scrolling down all they way to the bottom of the The review, i found so many 5 star spam. Sooo.. yeah, i don't like seeing that, since i'm a petty MF, i'll just put this review here. to balance things out, as they say.
it will be better if he became high human elf witch can provide both benefits of high human and high elf
"immortality . . . and a harem of beauties to enjoy them with." I lost all desire to start reading.................................................................
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Revelar spoiler This story is not enjoyable at all and I sometimes questions whether or not the author has a brain that can think or has ever even read DanMachi The MC is already one of the strongest people in Orario by like the 30th chapter and he is one of the best when it comes to magic, crafting, item creation, etc. All the characters he interacts with are girls and he legit flirts with all of them as a 13 year old kid. The characters other than the MC are so one-dimensional that its boring. There is no other POV in this story besides the MC so we don't see the reactions to his level up(1 month) or anything of the sort. Some characters like Ryuu and Hephaestus are so out of character when around the MC that it is honestly ridiculous. Also the story is just repeating itself. Wake up>train>Guild>Dungeon> Hostess Fertility> Status Check> Repeat. SO BORING. I don't recommend reading this unless you want to lose braincells and want to start disliking DanMachi
This has been a great story except for the major plot hole next to the fact he can flirt with everyone and even elves who disdain said stuff typically. With how the stats were for each level up by the time he became level 3 he'd be stronger then most level 10s if you take the average stats of each top tier adventurer when leveling. The stats should've capped at 1500 as most people forget the falna is based on the basis of a average level that you're at which is why bell could skip through levels despite taking it easy since his actions were judged against the average of his level.
Muy general, ya muy op el personaje al principio , no hay dificultad para desalojar al personaje, osea tenes habilidades muy rota, no hay nada bueno aqui
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the book start off bad with the broken stats and him shrugging off the trauma, but it get so much worse with all the horrible betrayal of the characters. its so forces that it made me right a review for the first time in months to put it simply I regret touching this garbage.
Despite the god tier first chapter the story is really boring. Mc is a Gary Stu who is perfect with no flaws,is charming that everyone loves,his personality is just nonexistent he was 16 and he became a 13 year old but instead of acting his actual age he acts like a hype active child who's only goal is to get woman and be cringe Another thing that is terrible about the story is how it treats its female characters like seriously every time mc talks to a woman they always mention how cute,handsome,charming (keep in mind he's 13)he is ALL THE TIME no one has a character besides sucking this guy off and a gimmick.
Revelar spoiler Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
very good 🤠🤠🤠🤠 just need more chapter I LOVE IT 🤩[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] everything is sss rank
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The MC lacks wisdom, self preservation, foresight and true intelligence till at least chapter 70. Who would fricking curse himself, without knowing what it brings to not further his growth, but to get some stackable boost? The extra pool of resources is nice, but he can craft these as items. It ruins the read when the MC is self harming by sheer stupidity. I don´t know if the writer enjoys the egdelord stuff, but WHY a vampire curse? It´s Danmachi. Leave the edgelord stuff out of it. For hte most part the story develops fine and the characters while shallow are "rightish" enough. But the MC is just so cringe enducingly stupid in his aproach to strengthen himself and problem solving, that it almost physically hurt me to read it. If you love stupid MCs and egdelord stuff go ahead, clean writng and regular updates get 5 stars, background 4, charcter design and story 3. That is my take at chapter 70 when I couldn´t go on, because I loathe the MC and his stupidity. (cannot say it too often)
Scrolling down all they way to the bottom of the The review, i found so many 5 star spam. Sooo.. yeah, i don't like seeing that, since i'm a petty MF, i'll just put this review here. to balance things out, as they say.
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Revelar spoiler La historia es buena y todo sería buena que agas así historia de danmachi ya que casi no hay historia de danmachi y eso que hay trailer de danmachi
Cringe "God gives me wishes" story. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Leí hasta el capitulo 82 y la dejé, desde el principio me aburrió un poco que coqueteara con todas las chicas que se cruzara, pero lo seguí leyendo porque no era como esos protagonistas que tratan mal a cualquiera que no les interesa, el MC es amistoso en general y eso me gustó. La historia iba bien hasta que subió de nivel, después de eso el 90% de los capítulos fueron sobre habilidades o artefactos que creó y me aburrió. También te centraste demasiado en el MC e ignoraste por completo al desarrollo de los otros personajes. Su personalidad desde mi punto de vista es bastante infantil y no mostró señal de madurar, aunque esto no es una critica sino mas una preferencia, Entiendo que sea una historia de harem que no se centra en el romance pero las chicas apenas tienen personalidad propia y solo se enamoran fácilmente del MC por cualquier cosa que hace. Por ultimo me pareció que la historia se sentía vacía en cierto sentido, llegó a Orario y empezó a volverse mas fuerte y así siguió toda la historia. Por ahí sea algo que solo yo sentí pero me pareció que algo faltaba, como un objetivo final, viaje a otro mundo o algo así.
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