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This book keeps getting better and better so please keep writing this book and please Keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon thank you
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
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the story is really good , it has a lot of potential ,but please update the chapaters::::::::::"""""""$$$$$$$$$$$$@/*66'5*:/"/'*""!:"::"(""::(
La historia va muy buena, el MC es inteligente y sacó bastante provecho de todo, me gustaría que se consiguiera a la princesa sirena en los próximos caps
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The story has good prospects. It’s a quite well written story. An MC on quite the power trip determined to bitch slap anyone and everyone. Everything was going so smoohly till chapter 11 where the hentai fest started. If the story went down a little less *** oriented path, it would be golden.
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The story is good but I feel that there are too many *** scenes as I came to read to story not about *** stories so I hope that it would be toned down abit soon but overall its quite good
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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awesome book untill chapter 11 and onwards as it turns into a **** fest I don't mind the occasional mention or scene of *** but this is just damn it ruined it for me as I had enjoyed your book but all to their own as I know some people will live it but it is not for me
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This is a good story that has a lot of potential. The wishes the mc asks for are smart ones that have a lot of room for growth, power, versatility & utility. As of chapter 5 its still foundation building which for the future but that makes sense. Since he is aware of all the dangers in this world and isnt blinded to it just because he has power now.
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This book keeps getting better and better so please keep writing this book and please Keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon thank you
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
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should continue with the story. xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxxx
the story is really good , it has a lot of potential ,but please update the chapaters::::::::::"""""""$$$$$$$$$$$$@/*66'5*:/"/'*""!:"::"(""::(
La historia va muy buena, el MC es inteligente y sacó bastante provecho de todo, me gustaría que se consiguiera a la princesa sirena en los próximos caps
Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool :)
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
The story has good prospects. It’s a quite well written story. An MC on quite the power trip determined to bitch slap anyone and everyone. Everything was going so smoohly till chapter 11 where the hentai fest started. If the story went down a little less *** oriented path, it would be golden.
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOOD GOOD GOOD
The story is good but I feel that there are too many *** scenes as I came to read to story not about *** stories so I hope that it would be toned down abit soon but overall its quite good
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
good good good good good good good good good good good more 👍💪😊😊👌 good good good good good good good good good good good more 👍💪😊😊👌
awesome book untill chapter 11 and onwards as it turns into a **** fest I don't mind the occasional mention or scene of *** but this is just damn it ruined it for me as I had enjoyed your book but all to their own as I know some people will live it but it is not for me
One of the best one piece fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it Like it
This is a good story that has a lot of potential. The wishes the mc asks for are smart ones that have a lot of room for growth, power, versatility & utility. As of chapter 5 its still foundation building which for the future but that makes sense. Since he is aware of all the dangers in this world and isnt blinded to it just because he has power now.
Interesting fan-fic....👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😁👏👏😁😁
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