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I hope I never lose you

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Lyra moves away from her home for a change. A place where the memories doesn't hunt her , or a place that finally gives her hope.

She is excited for her college but what happens when she meets her childhood crush after six years apart and falls in love with him this time.

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clydieM

The characters was great. I love how you made this story. The narration is good.

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Honeylife_

The story is good, chapters are interesting and the characters and funny I really loved the house drama at the first chapter. keep going author!!

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Aaliyah_Stark_

Wow, I loved the theme and genre. Its so beautifully written as I read through the first chapters. The characters are great and well written synopsis that increases the curiosity. It's amazing and you're so natural with writing. Keep going forward. you're doing great. Looking forward for more .

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NorthStar

Thanks Author for this story. I’m up till chapter 20 but would like to post my review still. 1. Quite a unique writing style to deliver the feelings in the begining on Mason. Conversations that internalised her thoughts and perception of others and how she felt towards cole thereafter. So the ability to draw the characters and thoughts are vividly described through conversations 2. The slow built up of the story is good in terms of how Ly and cole feels about each other and him bringing her back to his place on the first date to know his family - interesting way to let her know him better - good choice. 3. The curiosity and tension when Mason and Ly bumped into Mason in the lift or when Ly had to choose between Cole and trivia in the game leaving Cole feeling left out and him translating that into his actions for her eg holding her hands tighter is portrayed effectively All in all easy read - enjoyed the little things that happen - day in a life surrounding Ly and Cole - look foward to seeing how they will go on from here. Keep up the good work, there are some typo in spacing and punctuations in earlier chapter (small matter that can be corrected) but other than that good read! 👍

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shortcke

Thank you aryanastan. i have edit some of the symbols and commas in chapter 1 . Hope i won't make any mistake again. It's kinda hard writing because english is not my first language .

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Aryna_Stan

Awesome book!!! Honestly, I love the wittiness of the MC and her fun friends. A relatable and very light read, filled with angst and romantic flops, awesome work Author. Would definitely recommend.

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shortcke

This is shortcke .Hope you like my book , I'll be updating on daily basis. please enjoy, vote and comment .Its my first book and it means a lot to me.

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Xia_Xia89

I read the first few chapters and I have to say your way of writing is unique. I like the way u portrayed the texting style, it's kinda clean to read. It's a nice book with potential and I hope it do well in the future. Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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An excellent book. The book is just fabulous. Describing it will only undermine your experience. The author is also a very responsive and good person, so this book experience will just be peerless. Love the book author san. Never give up.

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this is realy awesome.. .....absolutely fantastic......from my side its highly recommended novel.............good work by author...............

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The plot is awesome, story's updated regularly and best of all is the character development. LOVE THIS STORY AUTHOR! Keep it up and give us more quality content.

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Miss is doing great ... Keep it up ....all the best ... Really love reading your stories ...it's creative and really entertaining to read....

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Pacesetter

First love hardly dies and the embers are still there. The female lead has been through a lot and is ready for a new beginning by leaving her past life. But she meets up with her crush that brings back past memories.

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Really good, I love the romance part of the novel. keep it up as you are! Really good.

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it's very interesting to read .... Everytime I finish reading a chapter I can't wait for the next ... The author is doing a really great job

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shaeshang

Firstly, hat off to the author. This is an interesting story that I've ever read. I'm not into a love story genre but yours is exceptional. It's a fun story. The characters are fun especially the MC. I'm still in chapter 10 but I can't help but write the review because it's so good. Fighting

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San_Kyz

“The writing was captivating,” “The characters were believable and I cared about them,” “The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.” Specific praise helps browsing readers get a better sense of why your book is so good.❤ Waitin For next Episode💓

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Chapter 97: Epilogue 4 years ago

Volumen 1

  1. 1
    1Annoying, useless ,lazy 4 years ago
  2. 2
    2 Mason 4 years ago
  3. 3
    3 Gunpoint in your head 4 years ago
  4. 4
    4 Do you like me? 4 years ago
  5. 5
    5 Yay me! 4 years ago
  6. 6
    6 Foggy grey eyes looking in mine 4 years ago
  7. 7
    7 I like your dad 4 years ago
  8. 8
    8 Why is he staring at you? 4 years ago
  9. 9
    9 Barbie and ken 4 years ago
  10. 10
    10 Happy with other guys 4 years ago
  11. 11
    11 I'll pick you up 4 years ago
  12. 12
    12 Is he your son? 4 years ago
  13. 13
    13 I am glad it's you 4 years ago
  14. 14
    14 He's your ex-boyfriend? 4 years ago
  15. 15
    15 Do you always talk to yourself? 4 years ago
  16. 16
    16 I am just lonely 4 years ago
  17. 17
    17 Get back together? 4 years ago
  18. 18
    18 Totally swoon 4 years ago
  19. 19
    19 How many times do I have to apologise? 4 years ago
  20. 20
    20 It's Liam 4 years ago
  21. 21
    21 You're just jealous 4 years ago
  22. 22
    22 I have to say this 4 years ago
  23. 23
    23 Murder Rachel? 4 years ago
  24. 24
    24 Can't lose you 4 years ago
  25. 25
    25 You're lying the whole time? 4 years ago
  26. 26
    26 The gifts not for you 4 years ago
  27. 27
    27 Stuck with me 4 years ago
  28. 28
    28 Spare the girl 4 years ago
  29. 29
    29 Too late 4 years ago
  30. 30
    30 I need you here 4 years ago
  31. 31
    31 Dare me to come up to your room 4 years ago
  32. 32
    32 you're crazy if you think I'll date her 4 years ago
  33. 33
    33 I wish I could be his forever 4 years ago
  34. 34
    34 Are you that desperate? 4 years ago
  35. 35
    35 I'll love to be your wife 4 years ago
  36. 36
    36 Don't you see? she likes you 4 years ago
  37. 37
    37 I can't do this anymore 4 years ago
  38. 38
    38 You need to come here 4 years ago
  39. 39
    39 Don't make this hard for me 4 years ago
  40. 40
    40 I'll see you soon 4 years ago
  41. 41
    41 Don't set me up for another blind date Five years later, 4 years ago
  42. 42
    42 I love you 4 years ago
  43. 43
    43 we'll buy a ring tonight 4 years ago
  44. 44
    44 It's a girl! 4 years ago
  45. 45
    45 Mr toothache 4 years ago
  46. 46
    46 Are you sure? 4 years ago
  47. 47
    47 Ex- psycho 4 years ago
  48. 48
    48 Do you like her when she was young? 4 years ago
  49. 49
    49 It's for your good 4 years ago
  50. 50
    50 Why can't you understand me? 4 years ago
  51. 51
    51 Whatever happens happen 4 years ago
  52. 52
    52 I guess we won't be visiting you then 4 years ago
  53. 53
    53 I wish I could chew her 4 years ago
  54. 54
    54 Suspicious 4 years ago
  55. 55
    55 Behold! I say unto you 4 years ago
  56. 56
    56 A stab in my heart 4 years ago
  57. 57
    57 why do you leave me? 4 years ago
  58. 58
    58 Hangover morning 4 years ago
  59. 59
    59 Suspicion confirmed 4 years ago
  60. 60
    60 Busted 4 years ago
  61. 61
    61 Wishful love 4 years ago
  62. 62
    62 Hoping He'll come running 4 years ago
  63. 63
    63 Princess with her daddy 4 years ago
  64. 64
    64 Can Cole be my husband? 4 years ago
  65. 65
    65 The unexpected daughter 4 years ago
  66. 66
    66 I hope I never lose you 4 years ago
  67. 67
    67 The discussion 4 years ago
  68. 68
    68 wildflowers 4 years ago
  69. 69
    69 The anger 4 years ago
  70. 70
    70 Cinderella on a mission 4 years ago
  71. 71
    71 Fall 4 years ago
  72. 72
    72 Indi 4 years ago
  73. 73
    73 Don't come back 4 years ago
  74. 74
    74 Catfight 4 years ago
  75. 75
    75 Fireworks 4 years ago
  76. 76
    76 Wedding bells 4 years ago
  77. 77
    77 Steps to torture 4 years ago
  78. 78
    78 Cole 4 years ago
  79. 79
    79 Heartbreak and cries 4 years ago
  80. 80
    80 Lyra 4 years ago
  81. 81
    81 argument 4 years ago
  82. 82
    82 Haunted 4 years ago
  83. 83
    83 Confession 4 years ago
  84. 84
    84 Torn 4 years ago
  85. 85
    85 Drama 4 years ago
  86. 86
    86 Jealousy 4 years ago
  87. 87
    87 Golden couple 4 years ago
  88. 88
    88 Big mouth Anthony 4 years ago
  89. 89
    89 Sexy time 4 years ago
  90. 90
    90 Sorry 4 years ago
  91. 91
    91 Dinner with Anderson 4 years ago
  92. 92
    92 House hunting 4 years ago
  93. 93
    93 The curse 4 years ago
  94. 94
    94 Missing 4 years ago
  95. 95
    95 Escape 4 years ago
  96. 96
    96 The arrival 4 years ago
  97. 97
    Epilogue 4 years ago
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