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Deatiled description... check! A spiral of emotions... check! myriad of events... check! lovable and relatable characters... check! This work is really great! Kudos to the author!
Hello north, I would have preferred you separate paragraphs more because it appears kinda bulky when you read it in the app. The story hits right through my kokoro as always and sometimes I am intrigued about your views about love and life. I would have liked to talk more with you in discord but I am under MGS currently. The way you write is full of longing and nostalgia and it made me wanna find my soulmate. Wherever he is in this life, I hope God destroys all his fake relationships so that he could meet me faster. 😭😭
It's a serene, beautiful yet captivating story about love...the author makes the boys' struggle against fate across different lifetimes feel real even though it is a very out-worldly concept... Great and relatable characters...beautifully sculpted. The first few chapters are a little confusing on what is going on, probably because of the long paragraphs. Story's a hidden gem...waiting to be read.
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Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading
wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up
A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck
I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.
This is really nice to read, even though I'm halfway through it. The writing style is easy to understand, love it! keep up the good work, author!
A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.
Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople
An interesting tale of how destiny and fate binds the MC in a never ending and sad. There were times where it was hard to grasp what the author was trying to depict due to lengthy sentences. However, the story has a good flow and an interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.
It is an interesting story, but personally I would like to see more descriptive writing about the image of the character. How can I imagine what the character Is like and the setting too needs to be detailed. Other than that this story is nice and really look forward to reading more of it.
This was a really interesting read. I love the character designs the setting of the story. I dreaded every time I finished a chapter because I knew I only had a few more left but I couldn't stop at all. I absolutely loved it and will definitely be looking forward to the future updates! Good luck.
It's obvious from the very first chapter that this author is passionate about what they do. The writing is very imaginative and descriptive. The storyline is captivating and yet it's heartbreaking to follow the journey of the two main characters. It's a beautiful love story and sucked me right in. To the author: Keep up the good work!
Wow. This is just a fascinating story! The surrounding and the characters are described very well. For some reason it gives me Harry Potter vibes and I’m here for it. Maybe it’s just be, but yeah it gives me such a spiritual and magical vibe, almost mysterious. I recommend this book to anyone who loves fiction, fantasy and spiritual beings!
this is really serious like OwO like gives a lot for me to imagine, as I was reading this, i'm like 'girl, we gotta keep waiting for the next update'
Though there are some writing grammar and punctuation errors, this story is so full of emotions and love. The 2 MCs are interesting and would love to learn more about their pasts. I love the concept of soul bonding/reincarnation so this story got it. Well done author!!
Every story that comes in my way makes me feel the heartache! I tried watching and reading this kind of dramas, and I'm so in love with how it goes, and I technically cried in every single line! In this novel, you might want to check this heavy drama coming in your way! 💕 HIGHLY RECOMMENEDED❤
The characters are expressed nicely. The story is really interesting. Their feelings for each other and the way they care for each other I loved that. Author keep it up.....
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Interesting characters with equally intriguing backstories. Would love to learn more about them as time passes by! Beautifully written to convey emotions, and I see a lot of potential in this work!
I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim! I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim! I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim!
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The story is good... I like how you write their emotions because you can see that... They are like true people...Keep up the good work!!!👍👍
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The narrative is well crafted, although it leaves the reader with much to imagine. The characters however, despite being fictional displays real emotions. The story so far is serious minded and intellectual.its a good work. Few punctuation errors and fewer dialogues. I look forward to more chapters.
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I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!
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Hello north, I would have preferred you separate paragraphs more because it appears kinda bulky when you read it in the app. The story hits right through my kokoro as always and sometimes I am intrigued about your views about love and life. I would have liked to talk more with you in discord but I am under MGS currently. The way you write is full of longing and nostalgia and it made me wanna find my soulmate. Wherever he is in this life, I hope God destroys all his fake relationships so that he could meet me faster. 😭😭
It's a serene, beautiful yet captivating story about love...the author makes the boys' struggle against fate across different lifetimes feel real even though it is a very out-worldly concept... Great and relatable characters...beautifully sculpted. The first few chapters are a little confusing on what is going on, probably because of the long paragraphs. Story's a hidden gem...waiting to be read.
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Revelar spoiler Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading
wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up
A good read actually. But the descriptive department seems to be lacking. What I mean is that you really express yourselves and. I do feel the emotions of the characters. But the world background is what you need to describe the best. Anyways, continue working hard. Grammatical errors are also seen however just a bot of proofreading and you're done! Also, try increasing your vocab! Goodluck
I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.
This is really nice to read, even though I'm halfway through it. The writing style is easy to understand, love it! keep up the good work, author!
A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.
Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople
An interesting tale of how destiny and fate binds the MC in a never ending and sad. There were times where it was hard to grasp what the author was trying to depict due to lengthy sentences. However, the story has a good flow and an interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.
It is an interesting story, but personally I would like to see more descriptive writing about the image of the character. How can I imagine what the character Is like and the setting too needs to be detailed. Other than that this story is nice and really look forward to reading more of it.
This was a really interesting read. I love the character designs the setting of the story. I dreaded every time I finished a chapter because I knew I only had a few more left but I couldn't stop at all. I absolutely loved it and will definitely be looking forward to the future updates! Good luck.
It's obvious from the very first chapter that this author is passionate about what they do. The writing is very imaginative and descriptive. The storyline is captivating and yet it's heartbreaking to follow the journey of the two main characters. It's a beautiful love story and sucked me right in. To the author: Keep up the good work!
Wow. This is just a fascinating story! The surrounding and the characters are described very well. For some reason it gives me Harry Potter vibes and I’m here for it. Maybe it’s just be, but yeah it gives me such a spiritual and magical vibe, almost mysterious. I recommend this book to anyone who loves fiction, fantasy and spiritual beings!
this is really serious like OwO like gives a lot for me to imagine, as I was reading this, i'm like 'girl, we gotta keep waiting for the next update'
Though there are some writing grammar and punctuation errors, this story is so full of emotions and love. The 2 MCs are interesting and would love to learn more about their pasts. I love the concept of soul bonding/reincarnation so this story got it. Well done author!!
Every story that comes in my way makes me feel the heartache! I tried watching and reading this kind of dramas, and I'm so in love with how it goes, and I technically cried in every single line! In this novel, you might want to check this heavy drama coming in your way! 💕 HIGHLY RECOMMENEDED❤
The characters are expressed nicely. The story is really interesting. Their feelings for each other and the way they care for each other I loved that. Author keep it up.....
Revelar spoiler Interesting characters with equally intriguing backstories. Would love to learn more about them as time passes by! Beautifully written to convey emotions, and I see a lot of potential in this work!
I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim! I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim! I love your story... my heart melted. Hope that you'll write more chapters author-nim!
Revelar spoiler The story is good... I like how you write their emotions because you can see that... They are like true people...Keep up the good work!!!👍👍
Revelar spoiler The narrative is well crafted, although it leaves the reader with much to imagine. The characters however, despite being fictional displays real emotions. The story so far is serious minded and intellectual.its a good work. Few punctuation errors and fewer dialogues. I look forward to more chapters.
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I felt the longing and the message of the novel was delivered smoothly to me. Every word hits different and it's so deep. It moves my heart in agony. For the technicalities, separate some paragraphs and don't miss the punctuations. Great start author!