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TheSuccessor
male LV 2I'm a person who likes writing and is a hobby of mine. I hope to become a famous author and I want to start it here. I have written four books and is looking forward to the fifth.
2020-08-06 Se unió United States
I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.
I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.
This story is nothing short of entertaining. It has some nice flow and progression. Good writing. Good development. And the world background is also present.
One of the strengths of first-person stories is that it really helps make the main character shine because of it. We get to see them develop and to grow along in the story. This is one I'm excited for.
Here's what you should do. If you can't figure out the others, just try to do the ones you know. For example, if you don't know what the rising action is, then just do your beginning. Write that beginning and soon enough, your brain will garner more ideas that will eventually lead to your rising action.
This book is quite good in my opinion. I love the way the author makes the MC so narcissistic in a way.
Something about new worlds being created just makes me excited to see the immersive world that is being introduced to me. It's very exciting, very interesting, and very intriguing.
RIP for them; wish them luck though.
I got to my locker 426, and I opened my locker. I saw that all my books were still there, and I sighed with relief. Sometimes some people know other people's codes, like Kirk, and they snatch my books for fun, as if it's just a normal thing to do to a normal person.
Spy Mage System
Fantasy · GMSJakers
Mhm, I see ya
"I'll be fine being alone in prom," I said, sighing. "It's not like I care anyways. We can always come back home, play video games, pretend I didn't waste my hours on something useless."
Spy Mage System
Fantasy · GMSJakers
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original The Heatherland: (Contest Version)
Peter and Micah are two orphans in an orphanage unsure of what their past was. One medicine reveals a bunch of visions, unraveling the answers of their past. They find out after a dangerous escape that they were trapped by Ikes, who wanted to keep them away from the actual world because of what they could hold. They could hold an artifact called the Heather Eye, an orb that would give them power to defeat their enemies. On their conquest, they face dangers, betrayal, and oppressors in every direction.10 Chs 0 Colecciones
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The Last Kind
4.6
A orbal that is a trouble-maker kid and has a crush on a popular girl named McKayla. As he finds himself in trouble by the teacher he finds out something more drastic. As he accidentally enters the human world, he finds an orb which greedy humans want to take for own selfish reasons. He has to face the dangers of both identity and death. Experience the fun and thrilling excitement in the story, the Last Kind.6 Chs 6 Colecciones
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Father?
4.65
"Will you save my father?" Owen is a fifteen year old boy with only his father which are settling in Las Vegas for now. Half of their family was burned in a wildfire and is lost in their family and themselves. Doxin and Jacques are very experienced detectives who are not much in communicative with each other. But then, one event changes their whole lives and actions. Exprience the excitement and thrill in the story, the bonds and the nerve-grasping words, and the adventure and danger in the story. Foreword by theSuccessor: Father was a very hard story to think about. I even still think to this day, but I'm more than glad to make this book. Please share, review, powerstone vote, and (not possible) you can even make a show out of it(although I don't plan you to do that). But, God bless and have a good day19 Chs 64 Colecciones
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How to Write An Action-Packed Book
Completado
Want to write someting that amazes and grabs readers. Makes them wonder and have feelings for your charcters? You will be able to do that once you read this.6 Chs 22 Colecciones
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War in The Mist
Completado
1931 Tyrant stands. He is in a camp where he works tirlessly with unjustice sincw his parents were killed. He, Glenn and Gwen escape the camp and find themselves being hunted. They decide to join the army, to annhilate his enemies. Tryrant becomes much stronger and finds himself in a fight for his life. He becomes badly injured but soon returns back home.19 Chs 12 Colecciones
I like the way the book is written. The development happens pretty gradually, allowing us to fully understand the world. Very nice job.
Spy Mage System
Fantasy · GMSJakers