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naruto é o meu anime preferido e got é a minha série preferida combinação perfeita,história muito interessante e criativa, personagem OP de verdade.Edwin Baratheon o redemoinho, a perdição dos deuses, o rei dos sete reinos
I'm just at the first chapter but I'm already to excited,you are already doing justice to my favorite series
Really enjoyed the book, well written, and not too lengthy, not necessary that you be well-versed in Naruto.
4-2-2-5-3, writing had minor mistskes sometimes but it's great overall. Story is a bit bland for my taste, just your usual OP MC walking along the park like it's nothing. No tension or whatsoever, just MC who seems to also know everything with no rhyme or reason. Updates are 5 stars, completed. World Backgroud is a bit farfetched for my taste. Character Design, it's just horrible.
It was a good story I don’t know about update stability because I read it after the story was completed. The pacing was a bit too fast. It could’ve been about 60 chapters with decent pacing. The stage just felt a little rushed but it was an amazing story all around.
it's an absolute good fiction plus a quick read and I am waiting for ur next story fanfiction [img=update][img=Loving it]
I first read this on wattpad and absolutely loved it!! And I just had to read it again. This fan-fic is a must read 100%. I will say that it's a bit fast paced in my opinion, but other then that it's an amazing fan-fic.
one of the best ff that I've read in a while, there are definitely mistakes here and there but that might just be because I still think that Naruto should've stayed single or something but all in all it's a masterpiece. I wish it had more chaps ya know.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]
I loved the story there was a great tempo and it allowed me to just get drawn in to the story
well, what can I write about this work started for health finished for the repose. ..........................................................................
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The story was great!! A darken hero who fights for the common people and stick it to everyone who deserves it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It hit all the main points. The story flowed. The whole thing was completed. All together this story is absolutely fantastic. Congratulations on the win
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I honestly think this is really good and although Naruto's character is so different, it's very understandable considering what happened before his death and being born in the cruel and vicious world of GOT
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More. And I hope please a good ending. Dont make him insane or killed. Edwyn should marry dany and become king.......................................
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Hope he kills those in dorne and then become king. Hope jon won't become a problem. Nice story......................................................
So.. this is the autor's review... seems to be something of a trend on webnovel. Anyway, the update stability is trash so 1 star for that. I have put a lot of thought and effort in building the characters and have researched in an effort to improve my writing. Although, I do admit that I could have done better with the world background as the only source of my information was the tv series and some excerpts here and there. Overall, I believe that this fanfic is the best one out of the three that I have on my account. I don't count the shortest as it only has a few chapters. Hope you all enjoy reading it and have fun.. possibly as much as I had while writing it.
naruto é o meu anime preferido e got é a minha série preferida combinação perfeita,história muito interessante e criativa, personagem OP de verdade.Edwin Baratheon o redemoinho, a perdição dos deuses, o rei dos sete reinos
I'm just at the first chapter but I'm already to excited,you are already doing justice to my favorite series
Really enjoyed the book, well written, and not too lengthy, not necessary that you be well-versed in Naruto.
4-2-2-5-3, writing had minor mistskes sometimes but it's great overall. Story is a bit bland for my taste, just your usual OP MC walking along the park like it's nothing. No tension or whatsoever, just MC who seems to also know everything with no rhyme or reason. Updates are 5 stars, completed. World Backgroud is a bit farfetched for my taste. Character Design, it's just horrible.
It was a good story I don’t know about update stability because I read it after the story was completed. The pacing was a bit too fast. It could’ve been about 60 chapters with decent pacing. The stage just felt a little rushed but it was an amazing story all around.
it's an absolute good fiction plus a quick read and I am waiting for ur next story fanfiction [img=update][img=Loving it]
I first read this on wattpad and absolutely loved it!! And I just had to read it again. This fan-fic is a must read 100%. I will say that it's a bit fast paced in my opinion, but other then that it's an amazing fan-fic.
one of the best ff that I've read in a while, there are definitely mistakes here and there but that might just be because I still think that Naruto should've stayed single or something but all in all it's a masterpiece. I wish it had more chaps ya know.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]
I loved the story there was a great tempo and it allowed me to just get drawn in to the story
well, what can I write about this work started for health finished for the repose. ..........................................................................
Fanfic muito boa, gostei muito. Fanfic muito boa, gostei muito. Fanfic muito boa, gostei muito. Fanfic muito boa, gostei muito. Fanfic muito boa, gostei muito
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Best of what I've read. ....,....................... .................................... ................... ...............................
The story was great!! A darken hero who fights for the common people and stick it to everyone who deserves it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It hit all the main points. The story flowed. The whole thing was completed. All together this story is absolutely fantastic. Congratulations on the win
Me gustó me lo leí completo en 2 días muy bueno y lo mejor corto y completo jajajajajjjjjajjja no me importa lo que. Otros digan fue un final bueno rápido y conciso jajaja buena fanfict autor bendiciones espero leer otras obras tuyas...
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Revelar spoiler I honestly think this is really good and although Naruto's character is so different, it's very understandable considering what happened before his death and being born in the cruel and vicious world of GOT
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More. And I hope please a good ending. Dont make him insane or killed. Edwyn should marry dany and become king.......................................
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Hope he kills those in dorne and then become king. Hope jon won't become a problem. Nice story......................................................
So.. this is the autor's review... seems to be something of a trend on webnovel. Anyway, the update stability is trash so 1 star for that. I have put a lot of thought and effort in building the characters and have researched in an effort to improve my writing. Although, I do admit that I could have done better with the world background as the only source of my information was the tv series and some excerpts here and there. Overall, I believe that this fanfic is the best one out of the three that I have on my account. I don't count the shortest as it only has a few chapters. Hope you all enjoy reading it and have fun.. possibly as much as I had while writing it.