110Reseñas
4.41
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
It was pretty good at first, but everything from the Hogwarts Express onwards is absolute trash worse than Malfoy.
came back after a month by mistake and forgot to read my comment and continue reading, i read 10+ more chapters and ughhh it still so bad.
8 year old MC starts a pill refinement competition with his rival in a birthday party...oops its poting brewing competition. WITHOUT WAND?! 8 year old kids!!! Potions need wand to brew and magic is taugh after wizards get their wand after 10yr old. Author turned this into cliche wuxia novel. Yikes
thought it would be bad since I hate Ron but it is a very good novel and the Mc isn't a edge lord or a smart Mc or a phsyvo he's chill and cool. ●//^//●
good,,....,..,..................................................................bhayankar.........................tabadtod.....................
Revelar spoiler
En mis años leyendo novelas y ff nunca me encontré con tal de que me haga bostezar y suspirar de aburrimiento de lo obvio y barato que es, Lo cual es sorprendente en sí mismo... Lo más seguro sea por mis propias expectativas sobre una novela sobre Ron lo cual atrae mucho tengo que admitir, me emocionó mucho la idea. Pero cuando leí en el cap que el MC tenía un pasado 'trágico' ya estaba suspirando ya que con mis años de lector ya sabía lo que me esperaba.. La clásica receta de los 4 años aprendiendo todo lo que se tiene que aprender y ser un experto en lo que haces y el clásico cliché dónde sé ignora lo anormal y se lo toma como 'genio'.
I never thought that I would actually find an intelligent Ronald Wesley,rather than a dumb and silly one.I loved the way author writes creatively.Waiting for more. I never thought that I would actually find an intelligent Ronald Wesley,rather than a dumb and silly one.I loved the way author writes creatively.Waiting for more.
MC is a liar and manipulator, honestly he is the worst kind of protagonist he has, in his old life he was just an ordinary guy but he was reborn and really thinks that makes him better than everyone else, he has the advantage of knowing some years in the future and that is why he thinks he is more talented, intelligent and more important than everyone, a totally unbearable protagonist, if he were a king, a billionaire or some famous person in his old life, his arrogance would be fair, but he was just an ordinary random man , arrogant, liar, bad character and boring, I think he should be reborn as drako
Gracias por escribir esta historia espero con ansias es siguiente capitulo de esto por que solo he leído uno similar y me gustó 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORING.
i think this book novel ha a lot of potential im still confused to wether the author dropped it or not though so don't be expecting more chapters because i the he may have dropped
I love this story.. Ron was my favorite character out of the golden triangle... He just seemed so human compared to the other two... In the books, they had their own flaws as well but in the movies they made hermione out to be a Mary Sue and gave her several important lines that were of other characters in the n the books and made Ron out to be a little see and comic relief... I hated the movies.... I can understand why ur mc thinks that Ron is going useless though if he's only seen the movies.... Anyway, keep up the good work and I hope you can release chapters a little faster from here on out.... I
First of all make daphne his lover and Hermione's his sister like........ Plzzz update ssoonn .........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Revelar spoiler
This is great. No words, I just want you to continue this masterpiece...........................why 140..........limit............ But damn this is a good fic. I absolute hate Ron, but your fic made me change my opinion. Damn it!!! I still hate OG Ron. He s*cks.
Revelar spoiler
DUDE PLEASE DONT DROP THIS NOVEL AND CONTINUE WRITING IT,ITS REALLY A GOOD ONE AND WILL BE A PITY TO DROP IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥
Amazing story! Usually when you read fanfiction on this platform you have to laugh and cry because the stories are horrendous. I liked this one because of the character interactions and just how hilarious the SI is. I found that I couldn’t put it down and I’m glad I’m reading this.
NiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNicenicenicenicenice
It's a good story honestly just give it a go. You may get discouraged by the first few chapters if you're too much in details like how he get some magic as an infant or the drug thing ( which I find kinda funny lol) I mean that's what a fanfic is about ( think outside the box ) but other than that it gets better. So yeah try it out!
Ron Wesley, the drug lord! Sums up this novel. It’s a fresh feel. Never think anyone will write a HP fanfic doing drugs. Lmao!! Druggy theme...I suppose that’s as dark as it gets.
I like the book but its just not for me. The MC is to manipulative to others its like he doesnt have any real freinds.................... . ....
Revelar spoiler 
I like the story so far but I've been waiting for an update for over a month. Has this been dropped?
well this is stupid, dropped at chapter 4 because of author made a super baby, a 5 month old baby that can read that was pure stupidity and the parents didn't even teach him and there only reaction "is my childs a genius" really?? and they didn't think maybe the child was possesed specially it was in hp where possession and ghost is real, stupid author with there stupid baby
............................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Okay so, I admit I am on the second chapter, however as a Harry potter fan I can't stand one particular thing you keep hounding on. Blimey, the fanfic is about being Ron! You make him sound like **** or something, but if you read the books you would quickly find he isn't even that bad. The movies while good, did not bring out his character at all, it's quite shallow in general and he was over shadowed, even some of his smartest lines where taken by Hermione. Sorry it just messes with me because the author hasn't even tried to read the book and they keep calling him a useless little cunt. Now I love this book because the grammar and punctuation are good compared to other books other than that, well I have to keep reading.
It was pretty good at first, but everything from the Hogwarts Express onwards is absolute trash worse than Malfoy.
came back after a month by mistake and forgot to read my comment and continue reading, i read 10+ more chapters and ughhh it still so bad.
8 year old MC starts a pill refinement competition with his rival in a birthday party...oops its poting brewing competition. WITHOUT WAND?! 8 year old kids!!! Potions need wand to brew and magic is taugh after wizards get their wand after 10yr old. Author turned this into cliche wuxia novel. Yikes
thought it would be bad since I hate Ron but it is a very good novel and the Mc isn't a edge lord or a smart Mc or a phsyvo he's chill and cool. ●//^//●
good,,....,..,..................................................................bhayankar.........................tabadtod.....................
Revelar spoiler En mis años leyendo novelas y ff nunca me encontré con tal de que me haga bostezar y suspirar de aburrimiento de lo obvio y barato que es, Lo cual es sorprendente en sí mismo... Lo más seguro sea por mis propias expectativas sobre una novela sobre Ron lo cual atrae mucho tengo que admitir, me emocionó mucho la idea. Pero cuando leí en el cap que el MC tenía un pasado 'trágico' ya estaba suspirando ya que con mis años de lector ya sabía lo que me esperaba.. La clásica receta de los 4 años aprendiendo todo lo que se tiene que aprender y ser un experto en lo que haces y el clásico cliché dónde sé ignora lo anormal y se lo toma como 'genio'.
I never thought that I would actually find an intelligent Ronald Wesley,rather than a dumb and silly one.I loved the way author writes creatively.Waiting for more. I never thought that I would actually find an intelligent Ronald Wesley,rather than a dumb and silly one.I loved the way author writes creatively.Waiting for more.
MC is a liar and manipulator, honestly he is the worst kind of protagonist he has, in his old life he was just an ordinary guy but he was reborn and really thinks that makes him better than everyone else, he has the advantage of knowing some years in the future and that is why he thinks he is more talented, intelligent and more important than everyone, a totally unbearable protagonist, if he were a king, a billionaire or some famous person in his old life, his arrogance would be fair, but he was just an ordinary random man , arrogant, liar, bad character and boring, I think he should be reborn as drako
Gracias por escribir esta historia espero con ansias es siguiente capitulo de esto por que solo he leído uno similar y me gustó 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORING.
i think this book novel ha a lot of potential im still confused to wether the author dropped it or not though so don't be expecting more chapters because i the he may have dropped
I love this story.. Ron was my favorite character out of the golden triangle... He just seemed so human compared to the other two... In the books, they had their own flaws as well but in the movies they made hermione out to be a Mary Sue and gave her several important lines that were of other characters in the n the books and made Ron out to be a little see and comic relief... I hated the movies.... I can understand why ur mc thinks that Ron is going useless though if he's only seen the movies.... Anyway, keep up the good work and I hope you can release chapters a little faster from here on out.... I
First of all make daphne his lover and Hermione's his sister like........ Plzzz update ssoonn .........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Revelar spoiler This is great. No words, I just want you to continue this masterpiece...........................why 140..........limit............ But damn this is a good fic. I absolute hate Ron, but your fic made me change my opinion. Damn it!!! I still hate OG Ron. He s*cks.
Revelar spoiler DUDE PLEASE DONT DROP THIS NOVEL AND CONTINUE WRITING IT,ITS REALLY A GOOD ONE AND WILL BE A PITY TO DROP IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥
Amazing story! Usually when you read fanfiction on this platform you have to laugh and cry because the stories are horrendous. I liked this one because of the character interactions and just how hilarious the SI is. I found that I couldn’t put it down and I’m glad I’m reading this.
NiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNiceniceniceniceniceNicenicenicenicenice
It's a good story honestly just give it a go. You may get discouraged by the first few chapters if you're too much in details like how he get some magic as an infant or the drug thing ( which I find kinda funny lol) I mean that's what a fanfic is about ( think outside the box ) but other than that it gets better. So yeah try it out!
Ron Wesley, the drug lord! Sums up this novel. It’s a fresh feel. Never think anyone will write a HP fanfic doing drugs. Lmao!! Druggy theme...I suppose that’s as dark as it gets.
I like the book but its just not for me. The MC is to manipulative to others its like he doesnt have any real freinds.................... . ....
Revelar spoiler I like the story so far but I've been waiting for an update for over a month. Has this been dropped?
well this is stupid, dropped at chapter 4 because of author made a super baby, a 5 month old baby that can read that was pure stupidity and the parents didn't even teach him and there only reaction "is my childs a genius" really?? and they didn't think maybe the child was possesed specially it was in hp where possession and ghost is real, stupid author with there stupid baby
............................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Okay so, I admit I am on the second chapter, however as a Harry potter fan I can't stand one particular thing you keep hounding on. Blimey, the fanfic is about being Ron! You make him sound like **** or something, but if you read the books you would quickly find he isn't even that bad. The movies while good, did not bring out his character at all, it's quite shallow in general and he was over shadowed, even some of his smartest lines where taken by Hermione. Sorry it just messes with me because the author hasn't even tried to read the book and they keep calling him a useless little cunt. Now I love this book because the grammar and punctuation are good compared to other books other than that, well I have to keep reading.
loved this story so sad the writer stopped updating.