Harry Potter and the darkness

What's wrong with psycho , crazy and evil mc? They have rights to have good ending too ! They need equality like those good mc too :( Villain have rights to winning too !

LV 4

Hidase

Aww yiss evil mc . Start the fourth reich and kill those mudblood please. Let the pureblood wizard and witches reign above all hhahahahahaha *evil laugh*

LV 4

AidoneusCorvinus

It's really great very interesting premise the character isn't a sex crazed idiot that thinks with his dick all in all pretty great I just wish he had more of an established ultimate goal

LV 4

HPMan

Meh, just another crazy kid with a dark past. Our MC wanna say something. "I wanna POWER, I wanna be a king of this world! I want to be OP Marty Stew without any purpose or motivation! Just make me like another bull*hit fan-fic.

LV 13

Sondre

A unique and refreshing take on both supernatural and harry potter fandom. A character who does not want to settle for being a mere villain, he will be the end game boss. There are some good character interaction and the story is progressing, though a bit slower than I would prefer, as I don't like reading about younglings for extended periods, but it is written well, so it does not bother me much. There is a lot of potential and I am curious as to how he will affect cannon.

LV 14

WattersAntone

I love the story so far, i'm not a writer or a critic but I know a good story when I see one especially how you have your own story mesh well with the main Harry Potter storyline and it doesn't seem forced and your character doesn't change who he is and sticks to his personality well, thats really all I can tell you and I hope you finish this because I hate to see it get dropped when i've come to enjoy the fan-fic.

LV 10

Blade_Maximus

I can only say BRILLIANT!!! Nice story author you. You open up a new world to me.. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 5

messe

Absolutely great! Hope it isn't dropped by author.

LV 4

DragonslayerKnight

I truly hope that you continue with this writing style and story. This is defined article of art is astonishing I'm usually a cynic and harshly critical critic but you are truly divine. I bow to your skills.

LV 13

LaurentCross

I love it awesome mc 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

LV 4

Khaled_Sellami

one of the best fan fics out there and I hate the fact that you've to write 140 characters and it seems no matter how much I write it still ain't enough

LV 5

JigSnap

Awesome MC, he doesn't care about killing people at all. he just does whatever he wants >.< Villain MC ftw, please don't drop! Don't drop! Don't drop!

LV 5

Majeh7

after reading this novel I have high hopes for it to be in the top 10 keep up the great work and don't listing to haters.................................................................

LV 11

Demiurge_Ohara

I hope you give him an ability to travel The Supernatural World , I mean... 2 darkness would make Chuck/God really confused but he won't disturbed him because he sealed or lock himself L.O.L XD

LV 4

Kira_Chiya

that's amaizing mix of the ideas 😮😮😮 lucifer - harry potter - supernatural i really like the story so much😍😍........................... ............

LV 3

Chili_Dog

Great story, smooth and credible implementing of Supernatural lore into the HP world. Keep it dark. ---------------------------------------

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LUCIFER_20

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LV 13

Space_Fox

Just hope the author doesnt abandon the story like manybother fanfixt author do :) @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@1@@@1@@1@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

LV 5

Rix

This book is amazing!!! I’m so drawn into the story that I feel like I enter a new world with every word! Thank you author and keep up the amazing work! 👍