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Qilin Guardian Douluo
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This story is a combination fan fic of Bleach and Douluo Dalu - soul land that follows a boy named Wu Yu who gains the memories of another version of him from the bleach world.
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I read 2 chapters, and am already bored. First and foremost, the Mc is acting as a big shot when he is not. People are getting stupid. A child of age 6 is convincing his father to kill another 6 year old child. A child is as cliche as it sounds making every villain dialogue and behaviour that a teenage villain should have. And that is in the 2nd chapter, I don’t want to read more.
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Such an awesome amazing novel fan-fiction was hidden for so long. It's a nice character and new addition to the book. Can't wait for more. Please more chapters and faster release.😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
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Volumen 1
- 1 Spirit Awakening Ceremony 5 years ago
- 2 Sinister Plan 5 years ago
- 3 Wu Ji And The Spirit Academy 5 years ago
- 4 The Grandmaster 5 years ago
- 5 Huang Da and Huang Bo 5 years ago
- 6 Gold! 5 years ago
- 7 The Door To Becoming A Spirit Master 5 years ago
- 8 Monstrous Spirit 5 years ago
- 9 Master And Disciple 5 years ago
- 10 Azure Serpentine/Aquatic Battle Armor 5 years ago
- 11 Spirit Abilities 5 years ago
- 12 Intense Training 5 years ago
- 13 Spirit Forest 5 years ago
- 14 Electric Thunder Bull 5 years ago
- 15 Shocking Stampede 5 years ago
- 16 Dai Mubai 5 years ago
- 17 Shrek/Great Spirit Arena 5 years ago
- 18 Blazing Fire, Scorching Heat 5 years ago
- 19 Escape 5 years ago
The story is good, but I do have some doubts about the MCs characteristics and the way he behaves. Shinigamis move in squads and teams. So how could he be sold lonely and just talk with his Zanpakuto? How could he be so emotional? He's a shinigami, and god knows how old he is. So how can he break into tears by just talking with Grandmaster, slip while talking and so on. The amount of OCs. Even writing about one character is nerve wracking. Creating its past, merging it into the story, developing his future and so on. You have already introduced around 4 characters including the MC who are OC and might play an important role in future. I don't have problems with OCs but most of the authors can't just handle them and usually abandon them by killing them off or just relegating them into the background or side characters with no life. Anyway, that's it for now.