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I'm just an 'Ordinary' Human (Marvel fanfic)

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A guy gets hit by a truck and sent to a fantasy world with less power than your average peasant. (Un)fortunately, he discovered his secret power of Immortality at the hands of the current destroy-the-world inclined Demon Lord and becomes experimental subject #1.

After hundreds of years, the Demon Lord is killed and the job of destruction was handed to him. Being not terribly favorably inclined to this fantasy world, he wreaks havoc on the world...

Killing sacred beasts, massacring cities with an army of undead, headhunting servants of God, plaguing a whole continent with a deadly virus.

But he was still unsatisfied.

During an experiment, he accidentally killed himself trying to open a gateway to a new world. And wakes up from his coma in his original world. Except, it isn't his world, exactly. Now there is a man in a metal suit, a 90-years old buff dude with a shield, a muscle head demi-god and other weirdos who formed a team called the ‘Avengers’.

None of that matters though, because he is so over all that drama. This life is going to be carefree. Or at least, that's the plan.


P.S. The cover picture is not mine, it is only borrowed. If the owner (redflowers) claims it, I will obediently replace it.

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PG87Mertens

I won't break traditions and shamelessly give myself a stellar review. So, here's a few things to consider: 1. If you like OP Mc's and a semi anti-hero Mc, then this might be for you. 2. If you like characters like Deadpool, then this might be for you. 3. I will be using the Earth 616 setting, so there's a lot of things that are in this novel that wasn't in the movies. Just search it in the marvel wiki if you doubt something. 4. I will try to keep the updates consistent as much as possible, so please don't worry. 5. LASTLY AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, PLEASE DON'T SPAM THE REVIEW SECTION. PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU. DON'T SPAM IT. I accept critiques and constructive criticisms, just don't spam it. That's all, thank you. I hope you follow me on this journey.

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Asmodai216

Summary: 3 stars overall. The story has a cool premise, a solid writing style, and a well thought out power system. The only problem is that the Main Character is pretty much railroaded, and poorly at that, into the canon MCU without making any real changes. This, predictably, makes for fairly unsatisfying reading, at least in my case. If you dislike an author that blatantly makes the MC act out of character just to push events towards canon outcomes, this isn't for you. Writing Quality: 4 stars, it isn't a masterpiece of literature, but the story is pretty damn well written. There aren't any of the blatant grammar issues that run rampant through most of the stories on the site. Stability of Updates: 4 stars, it isn't quite daily, but it is frequent. Honestly, as long as I get around 5000 or so words a week, I'll call that 5 stars. Story Development: 1 star, this is where the author starts to tank. It's basically a rehash of all the marvel movies in chronological order, the only difference is, the scenes aren't as well written, and there's a random OC that has zero impact on the plot. Literally nothing changes, at least for the first 20 chapters. Character Design: 1 star, I might be a little critical here, but the MC just plain sucks. He had a cool premise, but he fell into the same trap that those MCs that are described as "Genius with an IQ of 300" fall into. He didn't match his background with his actions. That is to say, when you describe someone as a Demon Lord who lived for 2,000 years ceaselessly slaughtering humanity, you expect there to be some character traits. The MC fails to react in anyway that his background would indicate he should. Just like those garbage "genius" MCs end up being complete idiots because the authors themselves are too stupid to write an intelligent character. The MC, Finn, is an absolute failure of a Demon Lord. He claims to want to protect his new life and live it quietly, but immediately throws it away to save the life of some worthless human girl. Said human girl then blackmails him into being her assistant, and Finn just sort of shrugs and goes along with it. The worst part about all this is that he's completely apathetic to the plight of normal humans, when they get attacked by Hammer Drones for example, he would be perfectly happy to let them all blow up, and doesn't interfere until the girl that's BLACKMAILING him decides to run into the fray under the assumption that our MC will protect her, which he does. The MC ends up being portrayed as a typical beta-male Japanese light novel protagonist. Now I get that in Japanese culture, things are different. Being assertive, or god forbid rude, is not exactly acceptable there, and it helps explain why some Japanese protagonists are so damn pathetic. That isn't the case here, our protagonist was an American who took advantage of his mother's kindness, before being enslaved and then tortured for years, before spending centuries going on a killing spree. Our protagonist was portrayed as a selfish, bitter man who took out his hatred for the world on literally everyone. Despite that portrayal, the MC somehow reverts to that classic, 14 year old Japanese Isekai protagonist, in spite of being a 2,000 year old genocidal maniac. It doesn't make any damn sense, and the "explanation" given for his behavior is pitiful. World Background: 5 stars, the power system the MC is set up with is actually well put together, there are no real flaws from what I've observed. The MCU was portrayed pretty damn accurately as well, I couldn't find a single blaring issue with any canon facts, or anything else of that nature.

5yr
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SirPugsilus

Mc is a babysitter for ditzy girl who atracts death. His 2000 years of life is a lie and isnt reflected in his actions and is easily cowed into doing things. Most probably going to get more frustrating going forward to read.

5yr
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BoneDaddySuccubi

Had great potential, i was excited to read the novel based on the synopsis and approved the 1st chapter however later on you changed his personality in the next chapter. It would make sense if he changed a little bit but it's basically a new character and his actions do not align with that of a previous demon lord. He could of easily let the women die and been rid of his problems etc. Sadly its turning into a forced relationship ruining the story. Cba, im gonna go and try to find a decent novel to read.

5yr
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Arimas

I absolutely want more chapters. It was just great. Start is good. Plot is good. Grammar is good. Although there are few flaws, the author said it is intentional and it will be revealed in the future chapters so I guess I will wait for more. Kudos to the author! **: please don't mind the haters and continue writing, for those who love it including me.

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Democratis

Ok, so the basic idea of the story is quite nice (MC who becomes OP demon lord then goes to MCU universe), but that background and the MC's personality pretty much sink this immediately. So he apparently massacred pretty much entire civilizations for no real reason, yet a random girl sees him using his power and blackmails him into working for her. His entire reaction was 'wow i can't do **** now, (completely ignoring I have god powers and thousands of years of experience) guess im stuck doing whatever she wants'. He then pretty much adds nothing to the main MCU plot but at the same time he is being both a horrible human being (he watches random people die/get injured no problem) and a complete beta male (the person who is blackmailing him is about to get killed - which he actually has nothing to do with - yet he saves her for .... no reason). Good premise, decent grammar, it's the MCU universe so you don't really need to explain the world background, but the backstory of the MC + his personality ruin 99% of this story

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5yr
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TrueImmortalDevil

... first of all: Mc is a beta male ... Second: Mc got powers but just wants to live a normal life ... Third: Mc got threatening thoughts, but in reality begs someone to delete a photo ... i mean come on ... you couse just zap the camera ...

5yr
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patrickbateman1

At first, I thought it would be a cool lazy mc who doesn't care about anything, but it turns out I was wrong. He ends up working for this annoying women and doing everything she says. She tells him to save people and he does it. Shes annoying ash. The mc is a demon lord who lived for 2000 years and has all these magical powers yet he cant buy his own xbox. Mcs a beta loser but the author tries to make him an alpha.

4yr
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SageOfSins

FUCKIMG KILL THAT MOTHERFUCKING ANNOYING LITTLE BITCH!!!! **** for God sake what the **** are you writing you can't be that desperate to have romance in your story that you are contradicting every single point of view from MC priorities and history to annoying every readers to get annoyed by that little bitchy pet. God knows why you discontinue the story... Thank God it is discontinued.

5yr
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FraulC
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The beginning was good, bit then the stupid blackmail. I mean he was a demon lord for crying out loud. He didn't even think to use the environment as a medium for his magic if it could not affect her directly? Oh well. I tried to read it because it's a marvel fan fic. Best of luck.

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ShardOfSlaanesh

Came back to review again after reading far ahead in the story. One thing I can say about the novel: IT WAS AWESOME. The author is a genius writer. High quality story, very few grammatical errors, and fairly average chapters. For an author whose English is not his primary language, I can say that this is very well-written. (The author is a Filipino, he told me in a forum.) This story is a fan-fiction of the marvel universe through the view of a man who gets so OP in a magical world. The story is very fleshed out and I would say that after the first volume, the story gets really good. On the first volume, the author only told the starting movies of Marvel (Iron man, Thor, Hulk). Its okay except the MC doesn't really do anything. In the second volume, the MC now starts his own adventure. (I wont spoil so read it yourself) The story quickly became one of my top reads and the reason being the lovable and cute Lynn. I love their current relationship right now, so I wish that there would be no harem. (Harem lovers please stay away) Overall: Its one of those stories I found before going to bed and stayed up until 4 AM. READ IT

5yr
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Dioseethis

I really think that his personality is right. He's a guy who only goes with the flow. When he reincarnated as a human slave, he just go with it. Then he became a monster slave, he just go with it. Then he became the previous demon king's lab rat, he just go with it. then he became the next demon lord, he just go with it. He never truly bother with stuff unless he's really bored. That's the only reason he tried to travel to a another world. He's bored. When he woke up from his coma, he just go with it. Literally all his life he just go with it. So to the people who says he's a wimp, he's not. He just go with it. I'm starting to think he's motto is "Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming."

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Kentchuppp

The only thing thats keeping me from giving this a 5 is that the author needs to update more chapters (lol that sounded greedy but yeah) as the 1 chapter a day is killing meee arghhhh. I mean im not asking muchjust 2 chapter per day would be nice hehe but still thank you author for this wonderful piece of fan fic 🐸.

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lSeele
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This MCU fan-fic is fantastic, the MC is op, he is a passive type go with the flow, just doing his thing playing games and getting drag by the death magnet heroine who just want an interview or a photo of a hero, well if you find the mc personally is like that because he is a slave, a lab rat, and a demon king who live long enough to get bored on his life and i hope the author release more chapters and i hope there is a harem but i like the the adventure and interaction of mc and the heroine just the two of them its kinda like a rom-com.

5yr
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FalseHope99

for your own good, i wouldn't recommend this to any of yall, simply because when you know that its dropped i guarantee that a whole lot of yall gonna cry oit blood. Simply put, this fanfic is a masterpiece, well planned, an OC OP main, a yandere for a former demon lord general, a wholesome naive girl who drags the main here and there for adventures, and a progressing story where new things keep getting introduce in the fanfic. MOST of all, the grammar is perfect, to me atleast. i almost broke down when i couldn't find anymore chapter anywhere else,and the author who seems to intend on writing the story is nowhere to be found, so i guess RIP author :(((

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ryanryan

Love the story and I’m sad that you haven’t updated.

4yr
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CGV_5264

To all of you who hate lynn, she is used as an obvious way to continue the story. shes half plot convince and half character, shes very important. without her the author would have a harder time advancing the plot, thus making it mor boring to read.

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Flaashii

i reaaallllyyy like your fic with how op the mc is and how laidback he is like it , i don't like storys where the mc is a pussy or is a fucking edgelord or something like that i like those where the mc is strong but laidback or lazy haha :D hope you update it comment if you are making more chapters !!!! we need more dude .

5yr
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alomari949

Came for copper stayed for gold. Realy love the novel and hope the author doesn't drop it in the middle just like that. Good luck. Ugh need 140 characters so...

5yr
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darren123

loving it so far only crit is the slow******ww delivery of episodes you dident drop this without telling us did you? be a shame if you have as its just starting to get good

5yr
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