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Una mierda de historia la peor que he viste un Mc Estúpido y débil teniendo el poder de niklaus que decepción jmas hagas una historia de este tipo porque haces pura mierda me da asco solo de verlo con un promedio de 4 estrella
I love this, hope it doesn't get forgotten by it's author, nice romance too. Mc is overly nerfed though, he literally got taken down by a shotgun he could have dodged, ron being the biggest mistake he ever made, that guy is apain in the ass…
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The intro is good the only problen was writing quality and it was not so bad that I could not understand it,I can read this pretty easily hopefully the author will start writing again
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You made the mc super weak. All his original powers and a normal fucking vampire with a shotgun hurts him. You ruined this story by making him so fucking weak.
The mc is just straight up dumb and does things for no reason and feels really unrealistic and the author is so worried about the mc being op that he ends up weak as shut its just very disappointing for what this could have been
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! DON'T DROP IT!!!
Great spin off of "Teen Wolf" series!!! Send me a reply or text through Discord if you ever need help I'm a self published writer and author. Keep up the great work!!!
Honestly, the story started off pretty good. The grammars and some spellings weren't proper but that doesn't really bother me as long as the story is good. However the disappointment struck when the lustful thoughts, also known as "harem-seeking" ideas of the author popped up immediately during the first time he goes to school. Honestly, I could still bear with that. However getting his butt kicked easily like that, then I'd say that the power given to him by some "Ancient One" who has some kind of favouritism for otakus was totally unworthy for him and only made the story even more f*cked up. You already nerfed his strength by making him not be able to control the hunters but the getting his *ss whooped part was very disappointing to say at least.
The story would be good if the author made the MC a bit more serious. The MC literally treats his second life as a game. And he is really impatient when he has no need to be impatient. When he made he first made his vampire, he keeps saying how he should be scouting for potential candidates, instead, he turns the first nearly dead guy he sees into a vampire when he knows absolutely nothing about him. The greatest part about the vampire is how he clearly holds no respect for his maker, and I'm sure you can already guess what happened. The vampire ends up doing some crazy evil ****, betrays his maker/MC for a woman and ends up making a lot of peoples lives worse. This was all due to the MC's recklessness, ignorance, carelessness, and stupid decisions even though he is clearly smart and a capable MC. It's like they purposefully make him have below -199 IQ (exaggeration) on certain chapters.
The fanfic has great character development as well as plot and love to read it more . I only have only one problem with it and that is the update rate is too low for me. Wish you, luck author,
I like it. I like it allot.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
"My wish came true,this trash novel finally got kicked out of the 100's hopefully it get erased out of existence."***goes back to church and pray's***"why did u make it harem and forced a villain,stupid author."***he says in a very gentle and nice voice***................................................................ .............I WANNA GIVE U A MINUS STAR'S !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh boy what a disappointing story. Please don't force your own facts that contradicts facts where you based your own fanfic. And a disappointing mc which is pathetically weak who's supposed to be OP. Making him a hybrid but forcing him to be weak makes no point in it. Goodluck to this novel.
I don't do reviews like this, this'll be my first. Teen Wolf FF? Yeet on out of here, holy sh*t. I'd rather see some hairy potter or some poorly written FF than this garbage.
Je dois dire que je suis un peu déçue c'est l'hybride immortel, il devrais montré qui est le patron pourtant tout ce que je vois c'est un loup alpha pathétique j'espère que ce serais mieux à l'avenir
This MC is the most weak ass character in literature history. Dont read . Dont read Cookie starts with C Let's think of other things That starts with C Oh, who cares about the other things?] C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me Oh, cookie, cookie, cookie starts with C C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me Oh, cookie, cookie, cookie starts with C
A good story the start is good and the development of the character grows from good to better, the grammar has also improved and with the new characters introduce in the story is making it more interesting than the original
Dont listen to dem pricks that giving the author bad reviews dem mans are just the novel is good still bulding as well....and F... u man u lot are entitled for opinion but say the truth than just bring down other people cause u feeling that just clearly stupid af
Awsomenstory really like it And the author really listens to the readers I hope to see much more content fron this awsome novel And author great work bro keep it up
None of it makes sense, Need to check grammar and spelling. If you want to co-write I would enjoy that, contact me through my novel. The Original Tribrid -A Teen Wolf fan fiction.
This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash
Hey author, really work on what powers the mc has, is his power like that of the true hybrid we all know and love from the originals series or is it a diluted verson that you want for the sake of the story?
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Honestly this story is a fucking disappointment. The author goes after an audience who wants an op originals hybrid, and you give us some weak ass punk who gets one upped by a newborn vampire. If you're the type to go for dumb mcs who dont think things through and basically create his own enemies. Well here you go. I mean c'mon, arent you supposed to know when your pact is near you, or atleast have some control your followers? Instead mc is just a fool. If he wanted an easy life then he should have stayed away from beacon hills. Mc hasn't even used his hybrid form yet and barely any of the powers. And when he does try they dont seem to work. Only werewolf form and the booties mostly. Which is a damn shame considering he should know hes not strong enough in just his regular werewolf form which was proven quite early in his first fight with an alpha. Cock mf should be more careful. Any normal person would be extremely careful if they were in a world where they knew they werent all powerful. So i guess that goes to show DUMB MC
A ruin story. This novel is soo good but its ruin when author decide to make his own (forced)villain even thought theres many more villain to come. Theres also the novel werwolf that he can make a conflict of, but noo he choice to for a villain too early on and even nurf a hybrid. I suspect he knows nothing of hybrids and just heard ot from somewhere.
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Una mierda de historia la peor que he viste un Mc Estúpido y débil teniendo el poder de niklaus que decepción jmas hagas una historia de este tipo porque haces pura mierda me da asco solo de verlo con un promedio de 4 estrella
I love this, hope it doesn't get forgotten by it's author, nice romance too. Mc is overly nerfed though, he literally got taken down by a shotgun he could have dodged, ron being the biggest mistake he ever made, that guy is apain in the ass…
Revelar spoiler The intro is good the only problen was writing quality and it was not so bad that I could not understand it,I can read this pretty easily hopefully the author will start writing again
Please update soon PLEASE 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
You made the mc super weak. All his original powers and a normal fucking vampire with a shotgun hurts him. You ruined this story by making him so fucking weak.
The mc is just straight up dumb and does things for no reason and feels really unrealistic and the author is so worried about the mc being op that he ends up weak as shut its just very disappointing for what this could have been
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! DON'T DROP IT!!!
Great spin off of "Teen Wolf" series!!! Send me a reply or text through Discord if you ever need help I'm a self published writer and author. Keep up the great work!!!
Honestly, the story started off pretty good. The grammars and some spellings weren't proper but that doesn't really bother me as long as the story is good. However the disappointment struck when the lustful thoughts, also known as "harem-seeking" ideas of the author popped up immediately during the first time he goes to school. Honestly, I could still bear with that. However getting his butt kicked easily like that, then I'd say that the power given to him by some "Ancient One" who has some kind of favouritism for otakus was totally unworthy for him and only made the story even more f*cked up. You already nerfed his strength by making him not be able to control the hunters but the getting his *ss whooped part was very disappointing to say at least.
The story would be good if the author made the MC a bit more serious. The MC literally treats his second life as a game. And he is really impatient when he has no need to be impatient. When he made he first made his vampire, he keeps saying how he should be scouting for potential candidates, instead, he turns the first nearly dead guy he sees into a vampire when he knows absolutely nothing about him. The greatest part about the vampire is how he clearly holds no respect for his maker, and I'm sure you can already guess what happened. The vampire ends up doing some crazy evil ****, betrays his maker/MC for a woman and ends up making a lot of peoples lives worse. This was all due to the MC's recklessness, ignorance, carelessness, and stupid decisions even though he is clearly smart and a capable MC. It's like they purposefully make him have below -199 IQ (exaggeration) on certain chapters.
The fanfic has great character development as well as plot and love to read it more . I only have only one problem with it and that is the update rate is too low for me. Wish you, luck author,
I like it. I like it allot.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
"My wish came true,this trash novel finally got kicked out of the 100's hopefully it get erased out of existence."***goes back to church and pray's***"why did u make it harem and forced a villain,stupid author."***he says in a very gentle and nice voice***................................................................ .............I WANNA GIVE U A MINUS STAR'S !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh boy what a disappointing story. Please don't force your own facts that contradicts facts where you based your own fanfic. And a disappointing mc which is pathetically weak who's supposed to be OP. Making him a hybrid but forcing him to be weak makes no point in it. Goodluck to this novel.
I don't do reviews like this, this'll be my first. Teen Wolf FF? Yeet on out of here, holy sh*t. I'd rather see some hairy potter or some poorly written FF than this garbage.
Je dois dire que je suis un peu déçue c'est l'hybride immortel, il devrais montré qui est le patron pourtant tout ce que je vois c'est un loup alpha pathétique j'espère que ce serais mieux à l'avenir
This MC is the most weak ass character in literature history. Dont read . Dont read Cookie starts with C Let's think of other things That starts with C Oh, who cares about the other things?] C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me Oh, cookie, cookie, cookie starts with C C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me C is for cookie, that's good enough for me Oh, cookie, cookie, cookie starts with C
A good story the start is good and the development of the character grows from good to better, the grammar has also improved and with the new characters introduce in the story is making it more interesting than the original
Dont listen to dem pricks that giving the author bad reviews dem mans are just the novel is good still bulding as well....and F... u man u lot are entitled for opinion but say the truth than just bring down other people cause u feeling that just clearly stupid af
Awsomenstory really like it And the author really listens to the readers I hope to see much more content fron this awsome novel And author great work bro keep it up
None of it makes sense, Need to check grammar and spelling. If you want to co-write I would enjoy that, contact me through my novel. The Original Tribrid -A Teen Wolf fan fiction.
This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash This novel is bad, mc is trash
Hey author, really work on what powers the mc has, is his power like that of the true hybrid we all know and love from the originals series or is it a diluted verson that you want for the sake of the story?
Revelar spoiler Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺ Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺ Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺ Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺ Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺ Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺ Im in love☺ im in love ☺im in love ☺
Honestly this story is a fucking disappointment. The author goes after an audience who wants an op originals hybrid, and you give us some weak ass punk who gets one upped by a newborn vampire. If you're the type to go for dumb mcs who dont think things through and basically create his own enemies. Well here you go. I mean c'mon, arent you supposed to know when your pact is near you, or atleast have some control your followers? Instead mc is just a fool. If he wanted an easy life then he should have stayed away from beacon hills. Mc hasn't even used his hybrid form yet and barely any of the powers. And when he does try they dont seem to work. Only werewolf form and the booties mostly. Which is a damn shame considering he should know hes not strong enough in just his regular werewolf form which was proven quite early in his first fight with an alpha. Cock mf should be more careful. Any normal person would be extremely careful if they were in a world where they knew they werent all powerful. So i guess that goes to show DUMB MC
A ruin story. This novel is soo good but its ruin when author decide to make his own (forced)villain even thought theres many more villain to come. Theres also the novel werwolf that he can make a conflict of, but noo he choice to for a villain too early on and even nurf a hybrid. I suspect he knows nothing of hybrids and just heard ot from somewhere.
Revelar spoiler
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