melody_lost_2002

melody_lost_2002

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melody_lost_2002
melody_lost_2002
2 years ago
Commented

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Meanwhile, Justine squinted her eyes as she tried to spot which one among Emilia's entourage was the Hawk Owl Eagle thing that she had to be so careful of. Of course, the term was quite a mouthful, and in her mind, Justine had already shortened it to HOE.

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

Fantasy · DustyDream

melody_lost_2002
melody_lost_2002
2 years ago
Commented

Jesus, another great line.

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Emilia smiled. "You made sure everything looks perfect, right? Remember, there's no room for flaws! My little angel's eyes are as sharp as those of a hawk that's been raised by eagles and taught by an owl!"

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

Fantasy · DustyDream

melody_lost_2002
melody_lost_2002
2 years ago
Replied to Ambinoggos

Ahh, yes. the popular unevidence speech by Qanon supporters.

Emilia chuckled proudly. "Fufu… this is the power of a good story, Cynthia. The hero's love triangle is a tantalizing and exciting story, and along with some 'evidence' sprinkled in, the people who want to believe it will just refuse to listen to whatever explanation is thrown their way."

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

Fantasy · DustyDream

melody_lost_2002
melody_lost_2002
2 years ago
Commented

NTR is something that corrupts your mind and is better to remain unknown if possible. It could destroy lives.

Of course, not everyone had 'good intentions'. Once the third boy had left, the first boy's friend grinned. "It's a category of interesting stories, but not everyone likes them. You should definitely check it out at least once, though. Here, I'll recommend you some…"

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

Fantasy · DustyDream

melody_lost_2002
melody_lost_2002
2 years ago
Commented

That's how conspiracy theories work, yes. The more you try to speak logic to them, the more they will think that even you are a part of this conspiracy.

Emilia chuckled proudly. "Fufu… this is the power of a good story, Cynthia. The hero's love triangle is a tantalizing and exciting story, and along with some 'evidence' sprinkled in, the people who want to believe it will just refuse to listen to whatever explanation is thrown their way."

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

The Villainess with a Heroine Harem

Fantasy · DustyDream

melody_lost_2002
melody_lost_2002
2 years ago
Posted

This is a new author but the author has talent when it comes to giving titles. The story is a slow burn until now and it looks like it has the potential to reach 100+ chapters. While the author is a little weak with his tenses, there are no obvious grammatical errors except that in my opinion. While the Author warned about unstable updates until now updates are pretty stable with a maximum gap of 1 day between updates. Story development and world development are going great so far too. World background is obviously 5/5 as it is a fanfic. I hope this novel gets the recognition that it deserves.