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There is some broken English here and there, but because it is good and funny, i think is okay. sadly it has not been updated in a entire year :s
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This novel is really good. I really recommend it even if there are no update. I really hope that the autor restart the novel. +++++++++++++++++++++++
Really like the story some bad grammar but it's fine. Needs to continue with the story. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
It is a really good book but I just wish you posted more chaps author, have you given up on this amazing novel? ----------------------------------------------
This not novel Sadist ..... this novel Fucking Comedy :v ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Pros: Everything is great! I got 0 Story problems. Cons: My only problem is the grammar. --- I need 140 words so Yup... `1234567890-=qwertyuiop[]\asdfghjkl;'zxcvbnm,./
OMG Awesome this novel is fucking hilarious but now updates became slow, its worth waiting for updates, too funny must read 140 characters.............................................................................................................
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
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The character development is really good for the ones that were introduced so far. The story as a hole has a nica fresh feeling of something new that wasn't poorly executed. I can also appreciate a content creator who is not afraid to develop the story as a hole the way he envisioned instead of following the common consensus that the story should be PG, especially in this case where the hole premise is for a more mature audience.
Didn't expect this to be a hidden gem. It's a pretty good story with a unique system. But it's grammatical mistakes doesn't allow usual readers to enjoy it. Only one who have comprehended the "the dao of MTL" and reached a high realm in it like my humble self can enjoy reading this work. . . And ooh yes there are H-scenes....... You can Thank me later.
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Hey guys the author here I giving myself an full mark because well everyone does and I don’t want to fall behind the times and to those people that read this lousy novel thank you for not stopping reading my novel even tought my English suck and it really does I meant you just have to read this review to know that
Buy grammerly, or even just Microsoft word spell check, I can accept bad Grammer, words with extra letters and replaced letters I cant, just buy a spell check, like 4$, there's even some free ones online
Just continue this is reallu go goddddddddddffffffffffffffffffff reallyyyyyyyyyyyy gooood yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy use please dont stop at midway like ither novels i meatb thar really suck i think you cant understand that fucking pain, right?
Chapter 7 : TRANSFORMATION ULQUIORRA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No joke : blem with the orthographe please correct it soon ***************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
It’s very good I just hope you don’t drop it I want more please.. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue 😊😊👍🏼👏🏼
This book is amazing. I was dubious when I first saw it, but now I'm convinced. It's funny, interesting and an overall great read. In the beginning there are a few grammar issues, but they aren't atrocious, and the book is still legible and funny. I reccomend this book, and hope anyone who reads it enjoys it!
Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example, Char A says "..." Char B "...." Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
There is some broken English here and there, but because it is good and funny, i think is okay. sadly it has not been updated in a entire year :s
Can you please post chapters? Please Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please PleasePlease Please Please Please Please Please Please Please
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Do it for the crownkgejgenegnwtbegnrgnhendhmdhnhemrhnrhjyebghfvrvrgrnehndh db db vd dvnhrnrhnrjmhrngebwhetbsgjegjwtj elegant kw weeks s gf tea did
This novel is really good. I really recommend it even if there are no update. I really hope that the autor restart the novel. +++++++++++++++++++++++
Really like the story some bad grammar but it's fine. Needs to continue with the story. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
It is a really good book but I just wish you posted more chaps author, have you given up on this amazing novel? ----------------------------------------------
This not novel Sadist ..... this novel Fucking Comedy :v ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Pros: Everything is great! I got 0 Story problems. Cons: My only problem is the grammar. --- I need 140 words so Yup... `1234567890-=qwertyuiop[]\asdfghjkl;'zxcvbnm,./
OMG Awesome this novel is fucking hilarious but now updates became slow, its worth waiting for updates, too funny must read 140 characters.............................................................................................................
thx----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....still no update uhhh. Hiatus? Sick? If it's just about type novel with handphone, i think it's still easy because i usually type my novel with my handphone. Uhhh....i think just drop this novel...
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
Nnnnnnnñnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnñnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnñnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnñnnnjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
The character development is really good for the ones that were introduced so far. The story as a hole has a nica fresh feeling of something new that wasn't poorly executed. I can also appreciate a content creator who is not afraid to develop the story as a hole the way he envisioned instead of following the common consensus that the story should be PG, especially in this case where the hole premise is for a more mature audience.
Didn't expect this to be a hidden gem. It's a pretty good story with a unique system. But it's grammatical mistakes doesn't allow usual readers to enjoy it. Only one who have comprehended the "the dao of MTL" and reached a high realm in it like my humble self can enjoy reading this work. . . And ooh yes there are H-scenes....... You can Thank me later.
Need *** sence ilke bdsm mode or torture or bondage. Need more *** sence Need more *** sence Need more *** sence Need more *** sence Need more *** sence Need more *** sence Need more *** sence
Jxjdkskxjxjsnnxjxjdkdndbdjdmsththfbdvtby3brbwybryrybehehy3h3yjywnuendhndhrhnhrnduhnsd dgbywbvrbtbthtbtbtbfbybgai f g tjnd uen6brnyr d jf jd rj rjntjntmrnjrjrjrudhxjxbdndhduudjdjdjxjdhdjdje
You can understand this review by name dont you? Hahahahahaahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahhahah😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Hey guys the author here I giving myself an full mark because well everyone does and I don’t want to fall behind the times and to those people that read this lousy novel thank you for not stopping reading my novel even tought my English suck and it really does I meant you just have to read this review to know that
Buy grammerly, or even just Microsoft word spell check, I can accept bad Grammer, words with extra letters and replaced letters I cant, just buy a spell check, like 4$, there's even some free ones online
Just continue this is reallu go goddddddddddffffffffffffffffffff reallyyyyyyyyyyyy gooood yaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy use please dont stop at midway like ither novels i meatb thar really suck i think you cant understand that fucking pain, right?
Chapter 7 : TRANSFORMATION ULQUIORRA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No joke : blem with the orthographe please correct it soon ***************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
It’s very good I just hope you don’t drop it I want more please.. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I’m really enjoying the story so far. I haven’t heard of a sadistic system so far so this is originally for me. I like the take your doing with the story and can’t wait for more. The only bad said for me as a fluent English speaker is that the grammar is pretty bad. As long as the improve upon that or get someone to proof read then it should be all good. Best wishes from a new fan and hope to see the story continue 😊😊👍🏼👏🏼
This book is amazing. I was dubious when I first saw it, but now I'm convinced. It's funny, interesting and an overall great read. In the beginning there are a few grammar issues, but they aren't atrocious, and the book is still legible and funny. I reccomend this book, and hope anyone who reads it enjoys it!
Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example, Char A says "..." Char B "...." Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.