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Synopsis: A story about a young underground firebender levelling up to achieve his dreams.
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write after read a three chapter and this enough to give 5 star. Shame about the harem tag. Its pretty good so far though so i will give you a glowing review.
Pro Plenty of original content, not just another summary of the show with superficial elements added to it. Con Mc is genuinely unlikeable
I came from your other novel on avatar, I see potential in this one especially with it being one of the few Legend of Korra fanfics. Good luck with writing and take my stone and collection!
A decent ff but there are so many grammar mistakes that makes the FF worse than it should be. Maybe proofread it or something or use Grammary. But anyway, hope it improves
Is the idea bad? no. it's quite good actually I never saw any avatar: legend of korra fanfiction before so that's cool to see, but the problem is that the pacing is just too fast. I remember I read this at chapter 5 and everything seemed okay but it's just that I feel like the MC is getting way too powerful way too quickly for it to be a week to strong (30chps is too short IMO). I know persons might not see it as a problem but I do. Also, the relationships seem forced because the fall in love way too quickly and there was not enough time to see how they fell in love. What it seems to me is that the author had a well thought out love story and then he chopped out some pieces to be able to put out more chapters faster. Now it feels more like "hey there's a hot guy, wow our chemistry is perfect even though it's our first time meeting. let's have s*x", you know? I know there hasn't been any lemon scenes yet but I'm just saying it feels like ever since the MC met his two team mates, it went down hill. Maybe because it's a harem but yeah, the author let me down.
webnovel is forcing readers to use their app so author post your story on another page so we can continue reading your story please. webnovel is forcing readers to use their app so author post your story on another page so we can continue reading your story please.
If I could give it 10 stars I would give it to this Fic. Amazing Fic, hurts that cuts the interesting scenes, but still, a genius.[img=actualizar]
Almost a perfect fanfic. The only issues are the grammatical errors but that’s it. The author should really remove the harem as the story is not a harem. I will admit the story does drop a little at the end, but it’s still a great story nonetheless. The relationship between Our mc, Asami, and Korra is a fun and interesting one. It’s not a harem, just a threesome. There should probably also be a Yuri tag considering Asami and Korra are still a thing. Love the story. Best legend of Korra fanfic I’ve read.
This fanfic is amazing in its own way and while it's fast paced and have high speed gaining of power I don't mind that. the problem here as far as I can see is the stagnation of character development which was acquired by all characters due to the various hardships that they faced I feel they aren't as mature as they should and the story is becoming stale . The second major problem is the lack of innovation in the story I don't say change everything but at least try something unexpected every once in a while .
Well, i have read all your novels, So im jumping in this ship!... Add Rl8 tags pls XD!!! we must have lemons![img=update][img=update][img=update]
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A truly enjoyable journey to read in commute. Was afraid of the harem, but the throuple ended up working well enough. I would definitely recommend to anyone looking for LOK fanfics.
A very good fanfiction in Avatar Korra AU. I very much enjoyed reading this story since the plot was good all the way till the end. The grammar didn't have too much problems, which is something I consider a must when reading... And although the MC was a manipulative little ba*ta*d, he at least stayed true to himself till the end and wasn't a hypocrite at all. All in all, highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
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Can you pass the link in the comments? I can't copy it like that. I really like your story by the way, even if we don't speak the same language
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J'ai beaucoup aimé. Il est dommage qu'on est pas la même unité monétaire. C'est la première fan foc qui m'a pleinement satisfait. Bon travail.
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It's so hard to find a good Legend of Korra fanfic nowadays. I have really enjoyed the story so far and really hope you don't drop it. Thanks for an awesome fanfic!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
knowing the author's other works I would say it will be fantastic, Blazuki has the best avatar fanfics in my opinion, the others like One piece and TDG are also good I just hope he doesn't end up giving up on the current works that he's doing at most put in temporary hiatus...