the longer chapters would be better
Just a quick question, do you guys prefer the chapters "short" like this or the longer versions? The issue with these short ones is that they don't progress the plot as much, I mean, this is just three thousand eight hundred words describing Thoth and Momonga meeting Enri and Nemu, barely any progress, let alone the rest of Carne Village and then Nigun (the dude from the Theocracy) meeting him too.
Anime & Comics · MarAuthor
Hearing the countdown disappear, I finally breathed a sigh of relief. Even though I was unwilling, I had no choice but to brace myself and say, "Ahem, my goal… is to make my sister pregnant with my child."
Anime & Comics · NarutoWriter
"Understood," Thoth replied, nodding his head respectfully before continuing. "If I may ask one more thing," he added without hesitation, "as a personal request—may I be directly subordinated to you rather than Miss Albedo?"
Anime & Comics · MarAuthor
interesting
"Not gonna lie, he's kinda… hot?" (...ok)
Video Games · AmbitiousTransltor
overall one the the best cyberpunk fanficts I've ever read, hope you continue this, it has great potential.10/10
Upgrades people, upgrades
Video Games · Nether_Ark
"Also in love with Momonga and respecting Genji."
Anime & Comics · Ahmed_Rahali
Chapter 1: The Labyrinth City Orario
Danmachi: Strongest Familia
Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker