BonVoyage

BonVoyage

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Persona is good game. So now I am writing about it.

2024-01-24 Beigetreten United States
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BonVoyage
BonVoyage
23 days ago
Replied to ViolinSaxEnjoyer

Working on it rn! Got hella sick these past two days and just been vomiting and feeling like crap, so I haven't finished it yet

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
1 months ago
Replied to Cahara

Yeah, I always do lol. Once I upload the next chap I'll delete this chap and the previous announcement.

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
1 months ago
Replied to koa_the_kid

Shhh, he don't know that yet lol!

"Eldritch?!" Mona snapped, peering out from his hiding spot. "I am not eldritch!"

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Video Games · BonVoyage

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
1 months ago
Replied to Drojam

Heresy! Our goblin queen is always useful!

"I… I didn't think I would hit it…" She admitted, somewhat unsure, as she put the gun down. "I just aimed and… it worked?"

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Video Games · BonVoyage

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
1 months ago
Replied to Drojam

Actually really close lol, january 20th 2025, the day I actually got around to writing the chap lol

In the sterile, metallic halls of a massive spaceship, the rhythmic clank, clank, clank of metal feet echoed through the corridors. A singular robot, designated J-12025, moved with mechanical precision, its bright, unblinking sensors scanning its surroundings as it carried out its singular purpose: to build, maintain, and expand the ship.

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

Video Games · BonVoyage

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
1 months ago
Replied to TheDiamondArk231

I currently don't have the backup chaps to open it, since the last chap I have written is the last chap I uploaded. I would like to open it again relatively soon, but I would need about about 60-80 free hours to write all the chaps I need to (it takes be about 1.5 to 2 hours per 1k words when accounting for editing and revising and stuff, so 1.5hrs x 8k words x 5 chaps = 60hr) It is something I am hoping to open back up since it does help me a lot, but well, time ya know?

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
1 months ago
Replied to Mohamed_Mansour_4224

You're gonna have to read to find out, I actually think I came up with a really good explanation as to how it happened. Also, he's not a true hero yet. he has a Heroes egg. But still, I feel like I wrote a really good explanation as to the process

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
2 months ago
Replied to BeardedBullfrog

It's a matter of translation, they are both correct. I defaulted to the one the wiki used though

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"Yeah? If you want, you can start heading back to Englassia. It will take me a few months at least to deal with all the stuff I need to, but I should be able to head there somewhat soon." Rimuru offered.

I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

Anime & Comics · BonVoyage

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
2 months ago
Replied to Weeby_

If you are on phone, it might just have the previous chap version cache'd on it, so it won't show the changes for a while until you cycle through the cache stored chaps with newer chaps. If you check on pc they are all gone

BonVoyage
BonVoyage
2 months ago
Replied to Infinite_01

I fixed up a repeated paragraph, so the comments got messed up and I don't know what you're nodding to, but I agree lol

  • I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version) original

    I am Rimuru Tempest (Another Version)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 MAGIC HAREM KINGDOMBUILDING

    4.71

    The rewritten version of the story. Contains content from Manga and light novels. — — — After accidentally being struck by lightning, and dealing with an overworked god, our protagonist is thrown into the body of Rimuru. He wants to find a comfortable way of living, have some beautiful girls, and not have to deal with the pain of managing a kingdom. After using his dragon brother's name in vain he becomes known as the Prophet, a fortune teller that can see the future. Gaining the devotion of his followers, he will continue to deal with the repercussions of his new name as he builds the Tempest Empire. — — — Pa treon.com/BonVoyageFF Also, I opened a discord https://discord.gg/WTgN9J3YgK.

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  • Persona: The Phantom Masquerade. original

    Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.

    Video Games ACTION ADVENTURE ROMANCE REINCARNATION HAREM SUPERPOWERS SLICEOFLIFE UNPRINCIPLED PERSONA

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    After making a bet with the owner of the Velvet Room. The God of Control decides to cheat by changing the soul of the Trickster who is supposed to defeat him. Placing another soul into the protagonist of Persona 5 Royal. Follow Ren Amamiya, the impostor, as he slowly begins to spread his influence. All in an act to bring entertainment to those who are watching his actions. And maybe, in order to do something more, hiding his actions in plain sight to those who observe him. With the assistance of his persona, Tartuffe. he will be able to see through the masks that humanity wears. Gaining a deeper insight into those around him. ~Now, onto the part where the author talks about the story~ To those familiar with Persona 5, my goal for this story is to create a new version of what happens in the game rather than basically rewrite everything. That includes the way the confidants develop, as well as the way the story progresses. For those unfamiliar, I also try to explain everything in a way that you will be able to follow along even if you have never played Persona 5, though I highly recommend the game to anyone who hasn't played or watched a playthrough of it. Yes, it will have the harem and the R18 in the future. However, unlike novels that are 90% lemon, and he gets the girls two chapters after meeting them, the story and romance will progress at an actually reasonable pace. So, the relationships with each person will develop naturally as they do in the game. Lastly, I want to talk about the three pillars of this story, which are the confidants, the Metaverse, and the mix of both. For the last one, I mean chapters in which one of the confidants is developed while also learning more about the Metaverse and the mystery surrounding it. Throughout the story, I will try to weave the three of them as best as I can in order to capture the appeal of the game. Anyways, that's it. Hopefully, you all enjoy the story. --- --- --- Also, I opened a discord https://discord.gg/WTgN9J3YgK. Pretty barebones at the moment cuz it's brand new. But feel free to drop by.

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