AnikaSilverheart

I love the story but I didn't see much emotion from the character design which like chapter one I love how the character interacts with his death. I would read this story so the author don't give up keep up the good work

I love it! I love it! the author has passed my commends that I liked, and they passed with world building making and character personality. I will giving this author 5 stars. Now I don't usually read this time of story but it got me interested and wanting more. keep up the good work Author

The only thing the author needs to work on is the character's personality and I feel no emotions coming from this story so the author please add emotions where it screams out Hi to me, I WANT to see the emotions that draw me into the story. other than that keep good work and don't give up

I love the story so far and I would like to read more of the story, I did get lost in the story which is good but I got so lost I didn't get the character's personality which I want to see more of. It was sad that the character got beaten up for just by passing another character. I would like to tell the author to keep up the good work on the world-building.

I like the character's personalities because they jump right out of the story which is good in view. I like how the character interacts with the other characters. good work Author

The ending of the synopsis motivated me to read more! Good grammar, formatting, and descriptions as well, look forward to what happens next- I like how the main character jinxed himself

Love the story but needs to have more emotions in the characters as they interact with each other. The world-building is so good keep up the good work. Never give up

I love the story very much and it drew me in without realizing it. Funny to see the character using it in front of his father and he just took it with grace for his father.

I love Love the story usually I get emotional as I read the stories but this story drew me in immediately with the background, world-building, and the character's interactions with one another.

this story is not my style of story I will enjoy but I love how you put the characters interact with each other. The world-building is quite interesting. Keep up the good work