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Beyond the Eternity

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Autor: ImmortalClown

4.68 (21 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

Only I can stop the fall of humanity.

It was the dream of every reader to travel to the world of their favourite novel even if it was a fleeting thought.

But that was impossible. A work of friction will simply remain a story. But it was different for our MC.

He suddenly found himself in the world of his favourite webnovel. The genre of his life completely changed.

The new world was a world filled with destruction and death was lingering at every corner.

He was the last reader and he must survive in this forsaken world.


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Discord: https://discord.com/invite/AZg6sfPBnS

Character Illustrations will be available on discord.

In addition...

Powerstones = PS

200PS = 1 Extra Chapter

400PS = 2 Extra Chapters

600PS = 3 Extra Chapters

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Geschenk -- Geschenk erhalten

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    Rank -- Power- Rangliste
    Stone -- Power- Stein

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    ImmortalClown

    Hello, dear readers. This is the Author and here is my review for this story. Of course, it is a biased review since I'm the one that wrote it. But still, isn't every author like this? Anyways, I'm here to give a few points about my novel. Firstly, the novel was inspired by ORV so don't be surprised if the beginning of the novel or characters may seem similar. However, it does have its own storyline and development. Secondly, The MC is a successful writer that has written many stories but he is rather introverted and views the world like a novel. He is very manipulative and some can even call him 'Heartless'. Even so, it is not completely true. He is smart but he can be outsmarted as well. He has a golden finger but does not completely rely on it to survive. After all, nobody likes reading a story where the MC can solve everything. Thirdly, it's a progressive story so the plot and development will evolve the more you read and the further you read, you'll be cursed by the urge to know more. I know people might not like it but I'll urge you to read it to the end. I'll like it if you're active in the comment section and let me know your thoughts about the story. Please be nice since I'm also human too. And please don't say I'm Han Sooyoung. Thank you for reading this shameless review and may the story bless you.

    1mth
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    ImmortalClown

    I'm going to be shameless and give myself a five star review. However, this novel is the revised version of the original. Sorry for doing so suddenly. If you have any questions, then I'll try my best to answer them as much as I can. Also, this will be no harem. In fact, this story won't focus on romance. The main theme of this story is tragedy so please be prepared.

    2mth
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    Dummydraedon

    I like this story a lot so far, tho it gives ORV vibes, I'm curious to see how you make this story your own! Awesome stuff

    1mth
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    ryuk9PE

    while the setting might seem similar to ORV the characters interaction and their mentality make it different which makes this story more interesting and enjoyable

    23d
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    Danespl

    Gonna be certain. It's a great book to read. sending my love to the MC by the way.

    1mth
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    Cyclode

    overall best writing I've seen and liked it. keep it up buddy👍💯💯💯😁

    1d
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    Yoru_Unagi

    it was a shame I only got to read a few chapters and everything got locked, everything was just getting so good! anyways great novel would recommend

    20d
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    YwPancake

    As a fan of orv reading this is really comforting, the characters looks and names are a bit similar but the story itself is original !

    1mth
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    CIGAP
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    Currently leaving this at 3 stars on average, as I will explain. The writing quality is quite decent. I notice a few areas where it could be improved upon, but I also have seen much worse, and the errors are ignorable and don't impact the quality of reading. The writing is definitely enjoyable and feels clean and smooth. The dialogue also fits naturally, although certain aspects of it feel a little stiff. As to the story itself, it is quite good, but as many may have noticed, I believe there are many similarities to the popular web series Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint (ORV). While I see the attempts at divergence from said story, as well as attempts to make originality, I believe there is not enough uniqueness to rate the story, characters and world building any higher than 3 stars. This is due to the fact that ORV's story is quite well done, and so using many of its aspects would definitely generate a good story, but using so many aspects borders a copy/plagarism. As of chapter 37, I have noticed a significant increase in uniqueness, but I still believe certain characters and scenes are too similar for my liking. Ultimately, I would still recommend the story as I believe there is an honest effort to generating a proper and unique novel.

    1mth
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    ahmedIprahim

    أليست هذه رواية وجهة نظر القارئ يعلم كل شئ نفس الرواية مع اختلافات بسيطة جدا حتى الاسم الذي يخص بطل الرواية يعتبر نفس الاسم لم تغير شيئا من مقدمة الكتاب غير اختلاف المكان فقط روايتك كانت ف المستشفى اما الرواية الاصليه كانت ف القطار والرجل الذي يقتل الجميع والالقاب وكل شئ

    1mth
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    FlameDragonKing

    What a good story. I can't wait to see the end. 👌

    2mth
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    Favy2007

    I felt creeps while reading It was like I could really feel the MC pain and I found visualise it Kudos Author Hoping for this to get contracted soon

    2mth
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    Zeera_Jay

    Giving this five stars because the world building itself is phenomenal, a good book that will hook you from the very start.

    2mth
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    Andrew_8401

    I will say from the start that I personally like this story. The story gives off the ORV vibe but if you read it you will realise that it actually goes in a different direction and I congratulate the author for that. The characters are depicted good in the story giving unique personality to all of them as well as the world building. Overall the story is interesting and I hope others will find it as well. As for improvements, they will come with writing experience so I'll let the author find and improve what he thinks it can be improved

    2mth
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    DokkkaebiKing

    Good Job Author! I really enjoyed this story. This story gave off ORV vibes. I can't wait for the new chapters.

    2mth
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    AnikaSilverheart

    I love it! I love it! the author has passed my commends that I liked, and they passed with world building making and character personality. I will giving this author 5 stars. Now I don't usually read this time of story but it got me interested and wanting more. keep up the good work Author

    2mth
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    DawsonSmallson

    okay I'm gonna be honest. I only read to the first chapter but honestly. the first chapter is a kicker. wow that cliffhanger was phenomenal. I need more to read. I'm sticking to this for a while. I really liked this! if I could give it 10 stars I would. wow. amazing job.

    2mth
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    OrbitAround

    So author just decided to rewrite, it was boring when I read it in my second run but I was excited to catch up to the last chapters when I read it. In this rewrite, the writing quality was still good just like the previous one, I noticed a change prologue at the start. Well, hope he doesn't rewrite more than this. The story was interesting enough for me to keep reading, and so was the world-building. I'm sure he had the plan for his rewriting, thanks author-nim!

    2mth
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    ClueWrite

    This novel, inspired by ORV, is incredibly structured and organized, making it easy to follow. Each character is deeply developed, with detailed actions, thoughts, and appearances. Although I haven't read ORV before, this story has caught my interest, and now I must give it a try. Whether you're a fan of ORV or not, I highly recommend "Beyond The Eternity."

    1mth
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    Captain_Sadistic

    At first I thought it would be something like ORV but looks like I was wrong. It's a good story. looking forward for more of it.

    2mth
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