well , I was stacking chaps , but noticed that the story ended . Nice work author :3
tftc
After I finish with this training arc, I'm definitely going to abuse the hell out of this power to develop my technologies and tamper with the biology of my precious bastioneers.
Horror · Shin_Ou
tftc
yea . it's pretty good tbh I'd say the story is pretty unique and I would read just for it alone .
Narcy this chapter : "I can fix her"
The moment my arms encircled her, I felt her entire body stiffen. Her floating hands twitched violently, as though torn between lashing out and retreating entirely. Her spiraling hair stilled, cascading around her like a frozen waterfall.
Horror · Shin_Ou
narcy: unleashed talk no jutsu *very effective
The moment my arms encircled her, I felt her entire body stiffen. Her floating hands twitched violently, as though torn between lashing out and retreating entirely. Her spiraling hair stilled, cascading around her like a frozen waterfall.
Horror · Shin_Ou
I did quit reading this shortly after making that comment . 10 chaps is just taste testing uk . as for why i tried it , I like villain genre or even anti hero/villain kind of novels , just need some plot , not recurring ones with recurring cliche, so yea dropped .I'm not discouraging anyone since for a first timer , this could be interesting but not for me ig
[Cravenford Emily's affection: -150-> -120]
Fantasy · RashCore
ngl this whole body swapping arc was a bad idea . forced drama , it's not even MCs body , no depth in character especially the villain Amara . i may have skipped 1 or 2 chapters but it didn't have anything going on .
Before Amara could retort, Villain-Amara began to fade, her form dissolving into golden particles. Her last words echoed in the empty space: "Try not to screw everything up. Or do. It's your thing."
· LuLU888000
tftc :3
Mythos Of Narcissus: Reborn As An NPC In A Horror VRMMO
Horror · Shin_Ou