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Struggling as a Villain

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Autor: RashCore

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Zusammenfassung

Dying after getting bitten by a zombie, the main character finds himself in the world of fantasy.

Reincarnating as the mid-rank villain, he decided to live differently and avoid the main cast. After all who would like to live as an arrogant brat only to die like a dog?

However, just as he resolved to live a better life,

[Ding!]

[This world is not the same as the host knows. Because of the tragic ends, the God of Fortune has reversed the time and has allowed the main heroines to retain their memories.]

Yeah, he is done for.

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Additional tags: Possessive characters, no Yaoi, no Yuri, no ntr.

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A/N:- The main character would be overpowered but not to the point where he could defeat his enemies with a snap of his fingers.

This novel would be more focused on character development, slice of life, and romance.

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Geschenke

Geschenk -- Geschenk erhalten

    Wöchentlicher Energiestatus

    Rank -- Power- Rangliste
    Stone -- Power- Stein

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    THEENDERMAN

    This story is one of the best I've seen in all with great character dev and good plot with the perfect cliffhangers

    5mth
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    Rayyer
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    this just like every other brain rot content same generic mc,plot,character etc to fit all the self insert wish fulfillment fantasy here

    4mth
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    SOULONFLAME

    Read till ch 17 The novel is great with very few plot holes that can be used as plot devices later. The Mc seems great, not wimpy and has personality There are yanderes The original world is also significant to the story Almost everything is great, except: Having only 17 free ch is a wasted opportunity, a huuuge waste I really want to read more but I would need to use my hard earned FP but I am not that invested in the story yet(cuz only 17 ch duh) I would rather spend those FP on novels that I am already following I wanted to read more but... :(

    5mth
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    RashCore

    So, I thought why not? What can you expect from this story? Good interaction. Good Character Development. Okay-ish battles. Good romance+ eventual smut. And a load of Slice of Life. If you have any questions regarding the story, ask here.

    6mth
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    DT_Ade
    LV 13 Badge

    Review up to chapter 71 The idea of the regression of heroines and the idea of the parallel / future world mean that history and future development can have many mysteries and ways to follow. The descriptions of the characters of the 3 heroines, of the mother (sister?)and Lilia are well made and make it clear what kind of people they are and how they would behave. The newcomer (Amelia) as well as Ethan and the fourth heroine are still to be discovered while the main problem concerns the main character. Richard is flat: he knows that heroines may suspect him but being carried away by events makes him weak despite the fact that he continues to train to become stronger. Unlike them, he knows that they know the future and knows all their future characters, strengths and weaknesses as well as all their secrets so he can make patterns put them in their place. Right now he looks like just someone who doesn't want to be helpless but isn't determined enough to take his new life in hand. The fact that you don't take full advantage of the system is also unnerving ... The system can help him in everything, even to become a demon King from what he says, so why not use it in his training? Furthermore, when he finishes the missions, despite doing it for his sister, he does not rush to redeem his reward but also keeps days waiting and it has also happened that he has not used the Stat after the end of the mission. The functionality of reading Emily's thoughts has never been used or she could have found out what the other 3 heroines were plotting. However, the real problem with the novel at the moment is people's scale of strength: it is totally busted. Various sentences and various situations so far have led to total confusion ... I give examples: 1) Eleonor is told that the Duchess is an entity close to divinity beyond rank. From such an entity I expect his perception to be out of scale so that Eleonor does not even dare to "control" it but instead is not even discovered; 2) Lilia's mother is an adventurous S-Rank and Lilia herself is stronger than she ... Although the adventurers ranking is not the same as the wizards, how are they classified? Based on the ether in their nuclei? Or based on certain tests in the 4 fundamentals? According to Eleonor's words at the moment they have 1/10 of their previous strength however Elizabeth did not think she had problems manipulating the mind of Lilia's mother and Lilia herself so this implies that their "Skills" of past life make them be stronger than an S-Rank despite having 1/10 of their past ether. It seems to me really too confused. I understand that the proficiency in the bases as well as the knowledge of higher spells can make them better in their own rank or even in 1/2 higher however I believe that well-defined walls must be imposed in the levels of force that cannot be overtaken otherwise even if characters like Bellarine are described as the strongest if an Elizabeth is enough to control her, she looks like a joke. However there is a lot of tasty food on this table if the author manages to organize the dishes it could be a great meal, good luck Chef.

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    4mth
    1 Antworten anzeigen
    FIPEN
    LV 2 Badge

    Author, could you add some beautiful pictures on this page so readers don’t have to keep going back and forth between chapters just to view them? Also, could you share the Discord invite link for this novel so we can hang out? You have a unique story, but one thing I’d like to see improved is how you switch between the two worlds. The sections about the sister and the MC feel a bit disjointed. Overall, I enjoy the novel and don’t want to leave a bad review. I just hope to see some improvements and even better chapters moving forward.

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    4mth
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    Kary_KD
    LV 13 Badge

    Definitely a banger novel, read till 18 chapters and safe to say i found a masterpiece, author don't drop and please be consistent with the update, I really like the story, the mc and his interaction with other characters.

    5mth
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    Berry_Smoothie

    The book is great, undated are stable but wish there was more chapters, and it’s a enjoyable read. 👍

    6mth
    2 Antworten anzeigen
    jayjay_123

    Garbage and not for me…goodluck to everyone else though

    3mth
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    Xilt
    LV 3 Badge

    the power scale was a mesh, mc not using the system to the fullest was also stupid. also too many changes pov that it become confusing to understand.

    3mth
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    Holden_Makok

    Thank goodness this app has limited free days. The story is better then I thought it would be, going forward, i will continue reading and will start purchasing chapters.

    5mth
    3 Antworten anzeigen
    LeafPanda

    To be honest, I liked your other novel but this one is something I'm disgusted with. I don't know why people like this novel, it's beyond my understanding.

    27d
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    JxstASyko

    So far I’m hooked. I haven’t reached that far into story but the mystery between both of the worlds is piquing my curiosity and let’s not forget the yandere mother in his current world and yandere sister in original. Keep up the good work

    5mth
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    AnotherMadKat

    <<CONTAIN SPOILERS>> Good--> The Protagonist's personality has been consistent throughout the novel. Although he is quite immature and extremely easy-going and extremely kind to everyone, there is a certain side of ruthlessness in him when it matters. So I guess that's the benefit you get from this novel. The world-building is fine. Good world-building, good history. Rankings are also good. Overall, it's a good novel. . Bad---> But what I would say is, the system given to the main character just disappears for tens of chapters. Except for the first few chapters, where the mc uses the system with a brain, I loved those chaps. He could help his sister, who was on earth with his system... i liked that. The development of the main character in terms of strength is unclear.....like.super unclear. The benefits of the system itself is quite unclear..except for the first few chaps. You can remove the entire system concept and the novel would be no different in the later parts. . For example, there is this one power the system gives.... to look into the minds of the heroines (op right??), and the main character does not use it at all.... like fucking at all!!! And just before a major incident where a whole group of people targets the MC, like basically a day before that major incident, MC suddenly remembers he got some power like this, and looks into the mind of a minor heroine, and well, the next day he is ready for the major incident. There are inconsistencies like that, inconsistencies in strength, inconsistencies in the use of the system. And the other thing I would say is, this novel contains a whole lot of overcoming obstacles through friendship and love. You know the One Piece type shit? This novel contains a fuckload of it. I'll give you an example. The woman who did not accept the love of the main character in his first life, ends up being one of his women later. . This woman, throughout like 150 chapters, was in love with the protagonist.... like the real protoganist of this world. She broke up the engagement with MC in the first few chaps too.... . So basically, this woman was in love with the protagonist in the initial timeline, fought the MC, and the MC died because of this woman. In this timeline, aka in the current story progress, this woman, throughout the novel, somehow forgets his love for the protagonist, and ends up being the main character's woman.... tf??? Another spoiler would be, the main character's grandmother attacks him, trying to kill him, because she owes some guy a favor, right? MC forgives her cuz her picture has been framed by his motner's bedside. Can you fucking believe it? . I don't know about you, but this is kind of a deal breaker for me, because it's fucking bullshit, right? . The whole lot of enemies, traitors, ends up being....through friendship, tears, and Naruto-like conversation, turn to the main character's camp. Other than that, it's an overall good novel. If the MC had a scheming side, this novel would be in ranking.

    12d
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    Eldeel
    LV 15 Badge

    One of the few books I really enjoyed in a long time. I initially assume it’s a generic transmigration story. But the author really did good job of adding all the elements of the story together. Another good thing is unlike most “extra” story the mc does not act weak and hide his strengths. We finally have a strong and confident mc. The story progresses at a decent pace and is finally coming to a well written ending. The story has it all, well liked and memorable characters, good premise, world building and good writing quality. I know this might seems odd but this is one of the books I feel like I would want to read again just because it was such a good experience. I highly recomend this book.

    19d
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    Admiral_Alex

    Really good transmigration story with an interesting premise. Bellarine is best girl btw.

    3mth
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    DaoistS69MXM

    Yandere supremacy 😤 Five stars all the way!

    4mth
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    samuel_fernandes_3408

    If I had money, I would definitely read all the chapters of this delight. **********************************************************************************

    5mth
    0 Antworten anzeigen
    RosoviyR

    It's a good book, but 15 chapters are too few to read, so I don't think it's possible to make a review .................................................

    5mth
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    DaoistZ9kkTa

    The book has potential i must say so I'd recommend it to y'all to read. I know WB has done a number on us with the poison we've read but try this book. I was also hesitant but I gave it a try and I'm enjoying it right now. I usually dislike giving book reviews but for this one it definitely has potential to be very good if the author is consistent with what he has shown so far. For writing quality it's one of if not the best I've seen on Webnovel so a 5. For the story development, so far it's looking good and we are looking to see what the author plans to do so a 4, character design is great, the relations between the characters in the story allows you the reader to immerse yourself in the story without making the story feel bland, it's realistic enough and you can see that thought and creativity were put behind the dialogues and interactions, so that's a 5. World background I give a 3 cos so far there hasn't been any real expansion on the world in general and how things work, from culture to the food, to even the currency and the continents and races and what not but I'm sure it will be properly expanded on in the academy arc so a 3 for now. Lastly my issue is the updates it's a bit inconsistent but manageable, though i hope there will be consistency in updates pretty soon cos for a book to survive on Webnovel consistent updates is a must, else this book won't survive and it has a good potential so i wanna see this book become quite renowned, hence overall the book rating is a 4 for now and subject to a possible edited review if the book goes far and doesn't get dropped.

    6mth
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