That last bit is more so a writing style.(Damp, putrid) I believe its also adressed too, the air is putrid with the smell of corpses, hence why he puts his mask over his nose.
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It's probably his first book, this is his trial and error phase. I believe most newbie authors start out like this, he has the spirit all he needs is to messup and messup until he eventually gets it right
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That was uncalled for bruh😭
"Whore's bastard! Watch where you're going!"
Fantasy · Guiltythree
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I'm sorry it came to this, thank you for sticking by me through Visceral Online. And I hope you will continue to support me through out my other projects. (of which I'm making a soccer book and crime filled fantasy)
I am sorry. But I can't lie to you or myself, If i force it. You're gonna see something I'm not passionate or proud about and its going to ruin the book even further.
No problems
Yeah, took a bit of inspo from the raphtalia slave scene
Hi guys, author here dropping a review of my work. While this is my most recent book and one I've thought about making for a long time, i can admit it does start slow. I believe in fleshing out the characters and introducing newer elements into the story in bits to not overwhelm the story or the readers. However, when it comes to its world and characters I can definitely say you're in for a ride, one you won't regret in the slightest. Happy reading, kind traveler. [img=recommend] (Comments and reviews are always appreciated and I will respond to every single one)
Hunt/Devour
Fantasy · Jeffery_XXVI