Pluto28

Pluto28

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2022-02-17 Beigetreten Global
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Pluto28
Pluto28
1 months ago
Commented

just asking, is the mc gonna have other romantic interest or is it just takina? i kinda want to include esdeath

Pluto28
Pluto28
Pluto28
2 months ago
Posted

i hope the author uploads more chapters to...................

Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
Pluto28
Pluto28
2 months ago
Commented

+1 but please don't catch pokemon

Pluto28
Pluto28
2 months ago
Posted

a suggestion, can you please lessen mentioning the lines like "with a new intellect boosted ny stephen haking" it is repetitive and not necessary to be mentioned everytime you explain something

Pluto28
Pluto28
2 months ago
Posted

i was expecting great things at first but as the story goes on, it has hardly any development on the mc's character, he acts like an intelligent person with great plans but in reality it is not. Bis character development is very weak to say rhe least. Not a great story.

Pluto28
Pluto28
2 months ago
Commented

may i ask the name of patreon?

Pluto28
Pluto28
3 months ago
Posted

it was good in the first chapters but it went right in the sinkhole for the next chapters, read at your own risk, the story is not worth it considering its updating stability

Pluto28
Pluto28
3 months ago
Posted

i don't really get the gist of the story, he uses his genjutsu multiple times to ensure loyalty amongst his people and also uses it a lot of times to "persuade" various leaders that rome is their future so why bother be cautious with other city-states, settlements, and tribes if he can use his genjutsu towards the leader and to the people to make them loyal? Why bother with strategizing if he can use genjutsu? I don't quite get the logic behind this one

Pluto28
Pluto28
3 months ago
Commented

hopimg the best for you, my brother in Christ