man u ruined my mood literally on this why nerf the mc randomly plus a random villian with this much plot armour comparable to main characters sigh disappointed
Wowww as expected of you just like your other works this one got me hooked up in the first chapter hope you continue this very nice no grammar problem till now as I have seen good luck (:
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Ace_of_your_heart
1 years ago
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Just for the sypnosis it looks like a good plus you removing those things I hate in other novels you deserve this lol keep up the hard work 🫡
(This is a rewrite of my first novel embracing the shadows because I was not able to connect to the story I decided to stop it if I cannot connect with it how will the readers even though most of the things will be the same I will change things that I didn't like, Atleast give it a try)
Daemon is a normal boy who always tries hard in his studies for the recognition of his peers but fails to do so, even though he didn't have friends to play with and was often bullied for his long hair he never complained. Because he was not truly alone as there was one girl always with him and he thought everything would change with time.
But the reality is cruel to everyone one day everything changed for him as he started to hear a voice in his head whispering how this world is cruel and you need power to control it.
After some incidents which lead him to compel towards the darker side, he succumbed to the darkness within and let his other side out.
How he will live a double life solving the mysteries of this world and the voice in his mind.
How will his life change as the darkness engulf him? Let's find out.
Even though the story is based in India for my Convenience I will change names because This is a story based on alternate earth and there will be many changes, not the same earth
(I am a newby author and I hope you give me an honest response I am willing to correct my mistakes so write a review, English is not my first language just so you know)
(I am writing this novel on my phone of course because I don't have money for buying a laptop.)
( patreon.com/Piyush_eternal )
(This is my Patreon account new to that too so tell me if anything is important for the time being. I will appreciate your support )
I am rewriting this novel as I did not get satisfaction in writing this. The other book's name is "Whisper's of my soul" please read it and tell me if there is anything to improve your support means much to me.
Synopsis: In "Embracing the Shadows," follow the harrowing tale of Daemon, once an innocent and compassionate boy who finds himself on an unexpected path towards darkness. As he navigates through the complexities of his inner turmoil, Daemon begins to transform into a sociopathic figure, his journey leading him deeper into the darker realms of humanity.
Driven by a relentless pursuit of his ambitions, Daemon embarks on a double life, skillfully concealing his sinister endeavours behind a façade of being a model student and exemplary citizen. Unbeknownst to the world around him, he becomes adept at manipulating situations and people to achieve his clandestine objectives.
As Daemon grapples with the acceptance of his inner demon, the boundary between his true self and the persona he portrays becomes increasingly blurred. Struggling with the duality of his existence, he must confront the terrifying possibility of becoming an abomination to society.
"Embracing the Shadows" is a gripping exploration of human nature's darker side and the choices one makes when faced with inner conflict. Prepare to be captivated by Daemon's enthralling descent into the abyss, a cautionary tale that delves deep into the consequences of one's actions and the relentless pursuit of power.
Even though the story is based in India for my Convenience I will change names because This is a story based on alternate earth and there will be many changes, not the same earth
(I am a newby author and I don't expect a good response but I hope you give me an honest response I am willing to correct my mistakes so write a review, English is not my first language so you know)
( I am writing this novel on my phone of course because I don't have money for buying a laptop even then there will only be few grammar mistakes)
( patreon.com/Piyush_eternal )
(this is my Patreon account new to that too so tell me if anything is important for the time being I will compile some chapters on that if you like you can support me there also)
I wanted to ask is the mc op?
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