Inside my favorite novel

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CAESAR20

I give myself a five You know that no one can give himself less than that, and if someone does that, it means that he has low self-esteem, unless he admits his mistakes like me, but I have changed my effort and prefer to reward myself for it.to That's why I gave myself a five-star rating in everything

A good novel, as other reviews say, and by reading it I found that it is good, but just try to make the paragraphs smaller, as long paragraphs give people headaches.

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Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429

trash .. i mean literal trash ... I would have liked to explain my reasoning but this novel is not just worth it.. also the amount of bot/fake reviews is insane

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SuCiDe_shit

I don't know why there are so many 5 star reviews but it's not that good.... The narration is good but the language quality must be improved

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DeathlyRage

Poison Test: Moderate. Alright then, the first thing you may want to know is that the author writes in Arabic then translates to English. As the result the grammar is all over the place and some stuff are translated incorrectly (Ex: Leon asks the system to unlock the skill: "skill unlock system" or (someone asked the author if there is ntr which he responded 'no' then 'yes, a lot' to ntr'd). Story is pretty normal, nothing special so far. I may say that author did shot himself in the foot by locking at the chapter 20. Other than that, I see nothing else worse mentioning.

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anjana_maharjan

when will it update pleas [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Raf_Itech

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It's refreshing to read novels like this. I hope you continue doing what you're doing , but I have a question: Will the hero be difficult to beat?

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DaoistUU3J24

A system ?? Why the f*** do you need a system ? Isn’t enough that you steal the other hard work ? no you have to give the ‘side character’ a system with shop !!! That Pathetic drop

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The_Ruler_001

A five star rating you deserve this for writing such a good novel

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Favourite_Reader

What a great novel I'm really entranced by it too bad I can't pay for the locked chapters as I am too broke and too young . I can only support u with little power stones and little comments like this... sorry

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Favourite_Reader

This story is one of the best I have ever read good job Author

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CAESAR20

I know, I know, I know that I have spelling mistakes. I admit, I am not an expert in the English language, and the autocorrect makes it more difficult, but at least I make the rest of the novel better.

I still stand by what I said. The writer surprises readers with the logical extent of the novel. At least he did not remove from his MC a random person who suddenly became strong.

Good, very good in reality. I love these types of novels, and they exist in abundance, but unfortunately without any real quality. Just writing without planning. I liked your work. Please continue. It is of adequate quality.

Amazing, just the writer needs to improve his English and if we ignore that everything is fine Hhuuuiiuuihjyjyjujujukukimikikikikimimomokimololilililimililimomomomimmimimimim

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The writer still needs some language improvements. Other than that, everything is fine. The characters are good, the world is vast and well-crafted, and the plot is good.

Despite the grammatical and spelling problems, the novel has an elaborate plot and the characters that have appeared so far are also good, so I say just read this novel.

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Spideryou

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