ValentinL

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2019-04-30 Beigetreten France
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ValentinL
ValentinL
1 years ago
Posted

just finished reading last published chapter up to date : chapter 59.Very good fan fiction, the flow was neither too fast or too slow to my licking, the power level is at the same time the focus of the story and isn't at the same time : the mc doesn't struggle that much while we are not sure exactly how strong he is however it wasn't a problem till now. Little foreshadowing of romance here and there. The writing quality is a tad lacking but that is absolutly more than readable.An enjoyable read overall

ValentinL
ValentinL
1 years ago
Commented

quiet

"..." - Both of them go quite for a moment

Lightning Human in MHA

Lightning Human in MHA

Anime & Comics · Digital_Ink

ValentinL
ValentinL
1 years ago
Commented

Not the first time I see this mistake thus I'm allowing myself : you meant "quiet" I believe not "quite".

Todoroki was quite. He didn't respond, well not by words. His will and intentions were clear as day to Aska. He was agitated and Aska was glad he got under his skin. Though Aska wasn't sure why Todoroki was mad. 'Is it the fact that he said he'll lose, or is it just the mention of his father. Oh who cares anyway'

Lightning Human in MHA

Lightning Human in MHA

Anime & Comics · Digital_Ink

ValentinL
ValentinL
1 years ago
Commented

I was not expecting this kind of reference here, pleasantly surprised!

The scene reminded Han Cai of the character of Raskolnikov in "Crime and Punishment," who was driven to murder because of his desperation and poverty. Han Cai saw the same desperation in the eyes of the young man who had just taken a life. He realized that poverty and desperation could drive even the best of people to do unthinkable things.

Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System

Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System

Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick

ValentinL
ValentinL
1 years ago
Commented

keep entertaining us please, your are doing just great

ValentinL
ValentinL
ValentinL
2 years ago
Commented

xp

ValentinL
ValentinL
2 years ago
Commented

Elsword fan passing by

ValentinL
ValentinL
2 years ago
Replied to GifflarGod

it certainly means unique, take a guess ;)

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ValentinL
ValentinL
3 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter, you are making a wonderfull job so trust yourself a little bit more!