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Strongest Swordsman In One Piece
4.15 (52 Bewertungen)
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Traveling to the world of one piece, El found that he had become a baby, and there was no such thing as Golden Finger.
But when he grew up, he found that he didn't need Golden Finger at all, because his own body was his own Golden Finger.
As soon as he was born, he awakened Observation Haki.
At the age of three, you can practice swordsmanship, and at the age of five, you can listen to the voice of all things.
If Charlotte Linlin is a "natural destroyer", then El is a "natural swordsman".
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Not that great. A lot of your typical Chinese style writing. 80% talking about how great the mc is or about his abilities. 20% about story. Tried reading as much as I could but it’s prett annoying just reading useless mc internal dialog or random junk that has no part of the story
Hopefully this gets translated fully. I’am interested in any one peice fanfiction that likes to explore swordsmenship. I pray that he doesn’t eat a devil fruit.
Only female crewmates: check Author being a virgin: check Creating an OP char which ruins the balance at the start: check Being a cringy edgelord who can't portray emotions: check Leaving a 1 star review: check
i just want to know did he abandoned other children from the opanage even when he've enough power to defeat every person in the opanage or was he the one in the opanage or the dean is so strong, so he 've no choice but to escape alone?
Writing quality: There are many mistakes and some things are in such a way written, which you normaly wouldn't write that way, so it is wierd. Story development: Cant say much about it, only read a few chapters but it was okay, not really good but not that bad either Character design: You don't learn much about him, his childhood was skipped, could have been done much better Update stability: Yeah idk about that so 5 stars Wolrd background: One Piece, nothing more to say about it
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It's worth reading and it doesn't get annoying. In fact, it's satisfying. Mm. There weren't many things left. MC had grown to the point of being the most powerful. Still, the translations stopped at Ch272; here, there are only 218.
Tentei muito ler essa história. Primeiro tem bastante erros gramaticais e não sou muito exigente. Mesmo assim dá de ler se ignorar bastante. Segundo o autor fala detalhes uniteis. Ele fala de mais sobre crianças. Sim são crianças não importa o quanto eles estão desenvolvidos fisicamente eles são crianças. Eu particularmente não gostei disso. Mas consegui continuar lendo pensando que a idade deles é o que eles aparentam ter. Agora o que me fez largar isso são capítulo sobre à akuma no mi favorita do MC. Primeiro tem bastante coisaa ilogicas com a munch-munch fruit mas dá de ignorar também essa coisa mórbida de synthèse de cadaveres. Agora o cara tem como ter um monte de frutas de diabo que pode escolher por essa habilidade. Ele parece um cara inteligente e escolhe a opção de flutuar. Considerando que sua esgrima é destrutiva o suficiente e ele não precisa de mais poder destrutivo isso pode fazer sentido. Senão fazer flutuar coisas com um toque não parece muito impressionante ao lado da fruta Rumble rumble (ele pode voar com relâmpago). Não entendo o motivo da escola dessa fruta. Agora usar a fruta para fazer météores pode parecer incrível mas é inútil contra um monte de inimigos possíveis. Luffy por exemplo, usuários das frutas logia outro exemplo. Fora isso temos também usuários de haki que podem resistir de certa forma. Agora se a questão é ser um trunfo estratégico, uma opção para ser uma ameaça ao mundo e causar dano em larga escala sem considerar as consequências isso é um bom fruto.
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where can I find the free next chapter? will you stop uploading chapters here?
great read. i really enjoy this fic. he's quite OP but still need go learn more
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The story is pretty interesting overall, but the mc turning into a tyrant after he killed hundreds of thousands of people is incomprehensible. And he wasn't really wearing a hypocritical mask before, that part just feels forced tbh, just to make the mc being more ruthless make sense. I would have preferred if he remained in his pirate hunter mentality but with a more domineering attitude instead of turning into a psychopath. You don't need to turn into a mass murderer to be a strong person, this just goes to show how immature the authors mindset is. Anyway that aside, overall its a good read where mc isn't too overpowered but he is strong enough with a combination of reasonable talent combinations, similar to Bigmoms physique but not the same and a more reasonable power, Redfields observation haki is good since in the end its actually an auxiliary power so it doesn't affect power levelling much, swordsmanship is developed decently since there are actually a lot of swordsmen, and the thing that prevents them from reaching the top is talent and physique where mc reaches the physique requirements earlier due to his bigmom type talent. His conquerors is just mutated to have murderous intent which is also not overpowered. His fruit development route is honestly more sensible than shiki since tbh shiki was nerfed af and would have been a bigger threat than whitehead if he had more imagination, since what limits fruit development is imagination, especially for paramecia as can be seen with Kuma who can reach the top with paws but the other people wasted it. I hope you can continue updating this.
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Ill give world bg and update stability a props. 5/5 But man. Writing quality or should I say the translation is poor. Very hard to read .Character development he's becoming a hypocrite. In an unlikable way.Even more so tge character design 👎👎. Ignoring the MC, the side characters feel too bland. Even then I had enjoyed reading it. But not. until ch 150 .
It's a nice translation i read mtl fics and i know what you are doing is not ez and i really appreciate it _____________________________