This has potential keep up the good work
ch 0 1 3. Receiving Falna, Black space???
Anime & Comics · Caribbean_Sage
Arishem is a celestial, the human like beings he created are the eternals. Otherwise nice chapter.
ch 35 chapter 35...Getting Attention
Anime & Comics · MynameJeff
I need like 100 chapters stat
ch 10 CHAPTER 10
Movies · CORNBRINGER
Just sort out the grammar issues and you have a great story.
ch 0 3 Training
Movies · owais
Give us at least 20 chapters to show some character and story development before you put a lock on it
ch 0 5 The School Wants to Expel Me?
Fantasy · Big Yeeeaaar
was the Peter Parker / drake bell comment supposed to be a superhero movie reference. if it was... nice.
ch 12 Chapter 3 Part 4
Anime & Comics · Pineappl3
the bashing might ruin the theme of innocence you have going with the main character
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Book&Literature · BrownAmerican
just write more chapters... problem solved...
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Book&Literature · BrownAmerican
hope this guy hasn't just abandoned the orphanage
ch 0 1 The Extraction System Activated
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
I like the innocence to everything. hopefully he doesn't change much as a person.
ch 31 Negotiations
Games · MyLittleBrother
yeh Gara is such a good character rip
ch 54 [Trouble in Paradise! Part-2]
Anime & Comics · Version_401
yeh following the mc doesn't make sense
ch 11 Kill or be Killed
Fantasy · Adam_A
Get those chapters out
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Second chance: The Witcher
Book&Literature · gumballs6