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What can you do system?

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In a desperate situation, after a near-death experience, the lead accidentally gains the system out of nowhere without any warning. From then on the story of his life completely turns upside down and his worldview started to change slowly with time. There are many unforeseen obstacles but he gradually overcomes these difficulties with the help of his system and wits.

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    Rank -- Power- Rangliste
    Stone -- Power- Stein

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    50points

    I will say it's not the worst story I have ever read, but it is not something to go out of your way and binge read either. Let's start with the good points: it is over 100 chapters of free content, it does have culture content, it does have a system, it does have kinks. What it does poorly: the culture content is all the same with just different names, the characters are given little to no details or personality, the system is hardly used due to Mc hypocritical personality, the kinks are not well played into and fall off at the side. Overall it's not the worst thing I have read, but it could use some work.

    4mth
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    DreuxX
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    I recommend reading this if you're bored enough, it's like a cheap Chinese novel but with +18 content. The story or plot is practically nonexistent, and the writing could use some improvement by adding more details. There's little to no character development, especially with the protagonist, who lacks any coherent thoughts and has a terrible personality for a person. All of this could be improved by adding more details or reading another novel to understand how to create a story better.

    1yr
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    Jordzfml_7

    honestly i'm still early into the book so i can't give a very detailed review but from what i've read so far , the book isn't bad . the writing and plot can use a little improvement but it's a decent book if you're just bored and looking for something to read 👍

    4mth
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