/ Outros / Warhammer: Dark Knights

Warhammer: Dark Knights Original

Warhammer: Dark Knights

Outros 32 Kapitel 128.3K Ansichten
Autor: DaRkAGL

Zu wenig Bewertungen

Über Inhaltsverzeichnis Reviews

Zusammenfassung

Our protagonist is reincarnated as a noble's offspring, with his family currently holding the title of Duke. Just as Richard is thinking that he can finally live a carefree life, he discovers that he's actually the youngest child.

"Even as the youngest, I should at least get the title of Viscount, right? If not, I could just work for my eldest brother. At the very least, the work shouldn't be too hard, so my life should be pretty smooth."

Of course, it would be better if our protagonist didn't look behind him and see the twelve-leg spider that staring at him.

General Audiences

Wöchentlicher Energiestatus

Das könnte Ihnen auch gefallen

3Rezensionen

  • Qualität des Schreibens
  • Veröffentlichungsstabilität
  • Geschichtenentwicklung
  • Charakter-Design
  • Welthintergrund

Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen

Schreiben Sie eine Rezension
_VOIDLESS_

You need to improve on your spellings and grammar I have a suggestion you can use if you're serious about improving. Use chatgpt to fine tune your drafts and read on what it has improved on then you the author rewrite it to make it more human, but if you just post chatgpt work without refining it, it will become inhumane to read and you will be getting 1 stars from then on.

4mth
0 Antworten anzeigen
Imperial_Fox

Dude, your killing you own ff by writing it in a second perspective, write it either in a 1st or 3rd POV if you want it to reach more people

3d
0 Antworten anzeigen
TentaPriest

This is like a hidden gem... Its a pretty good story. However, the writing could use some improvement. My brother, try using ChatGPT or any other ai tool to help you out. Anyways, don't drop! Keep going! I like it!

img
1mth
0 Antworten anzeigen
Schreiben Sie eine Rezension Lese-Status: C0
Fehler beim Posten. Bitte versuchen Sie es erneut
  • Qualität des Schreibens
  • Veröffentlichungsstabilität
  • Geschichtenentwicklung
  • Charakter-Design
  • Welthintergrund

Die Gesamtpunktzahl 0.0

Rezension erfolgreich gepostet! Lesen Sie mehr Rezensionen

Autor DaRkAGL