Thanks for the chapters and add Sekirei.
Being greedy for harem I vote for: Zara, Tory, Sam, Devon, Moon, Yasmine. -Maybe you could add some stories with mature women too.
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3. Dragon: The word Dragon is, within the Multiverse of Runeterra , an umbrella term that refers to all the beings with reptilian morphology that come from the draconic lineage. Creatures that fall under this term can be split between Celestial Dragons or Terrestrial Dragons [Western Dragons GOT] by way of their origins. Examples: Aurelion Sol [Celestial Dragon] dragons which have celestial god powers and Shyvana [Draconic dragon warrior, she can transform into giant dragon in LOL game]. [Powers: You will not gain Celestial Dragon powers entirely only a fraction of that power, rather you will gain more draconic features and powers of dragons from Game Of Thrones and LOL ones like [Shyvana] You will be able to have dragon stamina meaning lots of lusful fun ;) , dragon fire[blast of dragon flames come out from your mouth, and many other draconic traits like draconic eyes, strength, speed, and a huge dragon D. You can also summon dragons but once you are a higher level! [Pics of Aurelion and Shyvana here]
Anime & Comics · DarkDemonZ
Thanks for the chapter
-Here's a deeper dive into the idea I wrote before: -Since you want to write about the MC growing in power, you could say that in terms of physical ability, strength, etc. he's only at the level of a normal space marine because he survived the experiments only thanks to being a natural perpetual and the strong physique of his planet's nobles, so to bring out his full potential he has to train and overcome challenges, while he could really stand out at the beginning for his knowledge and skills that as I wrote before you could bring to the maximum possible by having him train in everything. -I think I've already written it but it could make it seem like it belongs to a destroyed chapter, the one that participated in the experiments and that was in isolated space, so if you put it around the time of the second foundation you could also explain why when he goes to the imperium he won't be given resources except maybe a ship with its crew and no relics and the bare minimum equipment, so he will have to reconquer everything by himself and all this because the adeptus terra and the imperium in general think that his chapter is doomed and that with all the new chapters recently founded they have very few resources to distribute especially when they still have to recover from the Horus heresy. -This also applies to his influence, if you then also follow the idea of making him an inquisitor and having his Ordo or as they say his order, which could hunt both heretics and xenos that have daemons, he could be invested with the office of inquisitor or even just after killing the people who did the experiment and those who know what happened and then take for himself the symbol of the inquisition especially after taking the memories of the inquisitor, viato that I think there are hidden codes to not have false inquisitors around, so when he goes to earth he could be officially invested while practically everyone thinks he will be done for and for the short time that it will last he could be useful, so even there he will have to build his reputation, influence and power from nothing. -His construction of his power as I had already written would start completely from nothing when the isolated space would return connected to normal space. -For his chapter you could use the name "Black Templars" and the colors of black, silver and red, thanks to being trained by all the forces and organizations of the imperium he could transmit to his space marines when created all the knowledge to make them all-around in a decent way a bit like the ultramarines, although of course he would be the best in everything thanks to training and if you also put it to his super intelligence, this could also transmit it to his successor chapters that naturally will be loyal to him. -Of course if as I wrote in the experiment the Grey Knights are included he and his chapter would have all their skills and capabilities.
Did he eat a Hellhound?
Thanks for the chapter. -For Peter you could either have Laura die and resurrect her or have Peter kill another alpha. -How will he attract Derek? -You could have Laura go into a coma from the attack to attract him.
Thanks for the chapters. -Has it been decided harem or not harem? -Could you with the collar make him unlock the potential of an intelligence at the same level as Rick. -Will he get other powers like magic etc...? -Will you make him go to worlds of other stories? -I hope he will do all the adventures of the story even if as you said with him completely safe thanks to his intelligence and science, but he could become after ensuring his safety like Rick and play around like him and with him. -I hope it will be a harem with also Beth and Summer.
Thanks for the chapter
The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister
Book&Literature · HungryWolf2024