Zusammenfassung
Imagine the gripping tale of Jack, an ordinary teenager thrust into the abyss of an unknown experiment, grappling with unforeseen consequences. Unfairly ousted from his job amid a world embroiled in human conflict, he unknowingly faces a twist of fate – a captivity altering the very fabric of his existence.
Trapped in the aftermath of a failed experiment, Jack bears an unexpected curse, forcing him to confront and adapt to this newfound predicament. The evolving world demands resilience, and Jack, resolute in safeguarding those he holds dear, embarks on a transformative journey.
As he navigates this treacherous path, the world around him metamorphoses, mirroring the internal changes he undergoes. Jack's evolution transcends the physical; it's a journey of self-discovery and strength. His pursuit of greatness intertwines with unraveling the mysteries surrounding his enigmatic creator.
In a world rife with challenges, one of Jack's formidable tasks emerges – to become a powerful undead. Each encounter marks his growth, rewarding him with experience points. Jack embraces these challenges with infectious enthusiasm, leaving readers captivated by the intriguing twists and turns of his extraordinary journey.
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionRead what was free for a reference point: writing quality is good as far as grammar goes. Can use some editing to fix small mistakes and clarify things better. At times the same thing is repeated over and over adding no new details to further the story just the word count. World building is going slow but progressing but at the same time a lot of details are skipped or glossed over in my opinion. The main character has no developments yet as far as getting attached or invested in his adventure for answers. Wish he would have eaten someone by now or at least used his new skill. New story so it’s hard to speak about update stability but there isn’t over 50 chapters yet. Wish the writer luck with their story
This story is regularly updated, and there's no fear of starting a story only for the author to abandon it. Kindly invest in your collection.
Want some high quality story? then this if for you! it used high level vocabulary, making you look like a genius if you read this on public.so what are you waiting for! give it a try and atlest read the first three chapters to immerse yourself in.now let me now drop my ratings.{Writing quality} - [5/5] why? it's because of the used of the words.{Story Development} - [5/5] the Author really did give himself the Mc(Jack) a chance to grow.{Character Design} - [5/5] fantastique!👌 Best introduce of the character I ever read.{Updating Stability} - [5/5] based on what I seen on the comments and the latest update itself, it is safe to say that the Author Daily updating this novel.{World Background} - [5/5] like I said in the Character design, the Author really did an effort on writing the worldview. {Overall} - [5/5] Parfait! give up a good work Author!
The story is really good. And I love the development of Jack from a petite and feeble guy to who he is now
Amazing writing quality, reliable updates, great story development, I love Jack's character, and the world background is equally good. I like where this is going and can't wait to read more!
To start with, the story IS interesting it's just not a genre I have a real interest in. But in the end the world building is intriguing, if not as detailed as I would like to be able to grasp everything happening. Another negative point is the grammar and spelling. The spelling errors aren't too many to become annoying but there are moments where it's off putting. The same with that last paragraph at the end of the first chapter which is odd and doesn't fit with the start of the story. In addition while It's not a big thing, but the "add to Library" thing at the end of each chapter is also off-putting and normally the recurring request wouldn't be the problem, but it's not put with the author notes/thought so I was admittedly confused at it's appearance at the end of the chapters the first few times. The story is interesting and otherwise well written save for some description details. but has a few of drawbacks that may need to be double checked.
The pacing is great, and the character explainations are very well done, although it may need a bit of development in explaining the scenes, but thats just me, Overall a solid Read and has alot of potential! looking forward to more!
i got bored in chapter 1. it has one of the messiest introduction I've read. intros should be introduction not some kind of info dump that makes the readers confused . making the words more fancy doesn't really fascinate me(idk about you guys) instead for me it just makes it more untidy because you don't deliver the point of the story, and it's just chapter 1 but the words used makes it more confusing because the story just started. I can't make a picture of what you're trying to deliver in this chapter. anyway that's my honest review . toodles ✌️
the grammar is spotless and your writing style is easy to read. 👍 but what I like most is Jack's character development. we see the go from the weak dude he was, to where he is now, and I hope to see him grow much more powerful. 🤞🤞 looking forward to seeing more!!
The writing quality is👏👏... I love the way the author went too much on every detail of the character's expression during the conversation, even their body language was written there...this made my brain capture the scene easier. Well done.
Great beginning. The only problem that I have is the chapter length. I think that they can be longer. Overall, its's a good book.
Your book screams interesting 😁 seriously I think it's gonna be a hit Quite strong though.... I like strong❤️and the plot, characters and setting is quite the eyesight
Autor Alexcj
a counter because author put soo many of his reviews.