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I’m gonna conquer the multiverse but before that.......
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Let me enjoy life first!
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Good writing quality, although a few oddities in the writing could be noticed. For now I can't say about updates. Story development, it's too soon for an objective judgement, but it feels good. Same for character design. World Background, you could have described Heaven more extensively. I will make another review at chapter 30.