Kapitel 1: Death- rewrite
In a vast space that was only water that looked like it had a piece of glass covering it. There sat on it as if it was solid was a boy. This boy looks no older the twelve. this boy was called Max. If you looked closely you would notice that the boy had no discernable fetus be looked like a hollow glass statue. you would think he is one until you see the movement of his chest that shows that he I alive and the slight heat that he gives of the body tempter that only the living have
-POV Max
''How did I get here?'' I pondered. The last thing I remember was that I was in a car with my family when I saw out of the corner of my a small flaming rock.
''I guess I died'' I said not expecting an answer.
''yes that you are!'' said an all-mighty voice from behind me. The voice almost killed me a second time because of how shocked I was before I sat down I went all over the place and saw no trace of people.
As I span around I saw a humongous being who was well over ten feet tall. he had a long jacket that went over his knees, boots that went past his knees, a face that looked like a clock, and a crown made of hourglasses. it had a pan that was at least five feet long in his hand as well.
''what the hell are you!'' I exclaimed in horror. I had never seen anything like this before I could tell it wasn't Homan because of its size.
''HAHAHA be honored for I am Death! And I have come to apologize!!!'' it roared
''Why though?'' I ask in puzzlement because I thought that everything has its time to die and mine was at this time I had no complaints it was quite nice here, yes a bit boring, but I was never hungry I could sleep whenever I won't and it was very comfy like always being in a pile of pillows but without the suffocating feeling.
'' You see I accidently killed you instead of the person who was destined to die that day. To spear you from the long expansion I am going to reincarnate/transmigrate you in a world of your choosing at any time in that world with three wishers. ok,'' the being Death said.
''Err .... that is a lot to take in but, ok it's not like I can do anything,'' I said with a face of exasperation. I did like this place but I died young I was only 12 I didn't even get to do anything I wanted to do as I was too young.
''Good, where do you want to go?'' Death said
''I would like to go to the world of The Beginning After The End'' I said excitedly l because that is my favourite novel. and it had fantasy elements but with a lot more advancements like the Domeson rings and especially the other continents.
''OK, and the wishes'' he said
'' For my first wish, I would like to be put in the Forest of Elshire at the same time Arthur is sent there by Sylvia. And can you make me the same age as Arthur'' I said I didn't want to start in a random location.
''ok, next'' he said
''For my second wish can have a perfect body that makes my talent and potential higher than even the most talented Asuras like a content improvement type of power'' I ask I wanted to because I had no chance against Asuras even Arther had to become half of one to stand a chance.
'' next' 'he said
''For my last wish I would like all the sword skills of the protagonist of the webcomic Legend of the Northern Blade'' I said he had one of my favorite fighting scenes it felt like the pagers were moving.
''Done'' was the last this I heard before the world went blank.
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Wöchentlicher Energiestatus
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Rangliste 
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Stein