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tbate-The Northern Blade

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Autor: MadOtter

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this my first story so there will most likely be a bunch of bad grammar. the cover isn't my image so if the crater wont it down just contact me and i will take it down
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this story is about a man getting reincarnated in the beginning after the end with some wishes.

  1. MadOtter
    MadOtter Beigetragen 14
  2. CH3B_YT
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  3. Firefly180
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Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

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storyteller101

havent even read it yet but 5 stars just for containing northen blade in the title .....................................................................

1yr
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Lord_Azathoth

Go on 👍 Do you want power stones? There aren't that many chapters yet so most readers don't like to read fics with fewer chapters just make sure not to drop the fanfic alright, many will surely start to notice by then 🙏

1yr
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blue_flame_7322

I like it its pretty good the only thing that need some work is the grammar but all in all its pretty good 👍🏻

1yr
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Agoti
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Очень интересно читать,интересно будет дальше когда крупный масштаб начнется.Я когда начинал читать,то подумал что меч будет с духом как в "Легенда о Северном Клинке",хотя я потом подумал что это будет очень сильно

2mth
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KakaPants

plz dont drop, this has alot of potential and i havent seen much ff about murim martial arts so i like it alot. keep it up 👍🏽 (feedback and suggestions) grammar could use some work and me personally id like to see some longer chaps, maybe use the lords eyes like gojos six eyes and have the mc create some techniques like limitless, some kind of domain expansion where mc manipulates the targets perception of reality or something. overall i like it, it just needs some polishing and depth

1yr
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Shivam_Thakur_1883

just supporting cause I just want to read some tbate ff..... waiting for 30-40 chapter to releasee...............................................................

1yr
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