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A guy in the car, who was enjoying a little too much with his sexy cousin gets transmigated by angry truck kun when it crushed the car with smoking front.......... now in the treacherous world of pirates becomes smoker the first good marine of the show. see as he raises in ranks and becomes the white chaser of sea and skirts.
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just another transmigration as smoker. there will be some au stuff.
no experience so I am just gonna wing it.
Mc will become op since I am not a big fan of getting pumped down by others.
no system or other bullshit.
Mc is cool guy.

my plans with the story.
▪︎ write a decent paced story
▪︎ I will explore all the ideas around smoker's devil fruit and other logia abilities.
▪︎ there will be some r18 stuff too because I don't feel like living in a world without sex. (although they will just be there like at start of chapter. no special chapters or something. just part of the story.)
▪︎ Mc is not a goody two shoes so except him to do whatever he feel like. he doesn't have many morals either. not outright evil but something which can make you question like is it really alright?

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Wöchentlicher Energiestatus

Rank -- Power- Rangliste
Stone -- Power- Stein

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Victor_7740

Interesting so far.

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SERBMADHAUS

Premise has potential it's just the execution which needs work. more descriptions, character sheets, flesh out the characters a bit more and don't make mc a beta like he was in that second chapter. keep writing and you'll find your groove and your audience.

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gaurav_Kumar_1424

Anyway ask anything you want I will answer them. make sure to comment and review on novels.

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