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- Qualität des Schreibens
- Veröffentlichungsstabilität
- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
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Premise has potential it's just the execution which needs work. more descriptions, character sheets, flesh out the characters a bit more and don't make mc a beta like he was in that second chapter. keep writing and you'll find your groove and your audience.
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Premise has potential it's just the execution which needs work. more descriptions, character sheets, flesh out the characters a bit more and don't make mc a beta like he was in that second chapter. keep writing and you'll find your groove and your audience.
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Anyway ask anything you want I will answer them. make sure to comment and review on novels.
Interesting so far.