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Reincarnated as Issei with a Gamer System(DROPPED)
3.82 (103 Bewertungen)
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I will get back her no I'll get them all back , nothing will stop me , no one will get in my way , I'll do whatever it takes to get back to you. I'll use these abilities. I'll make sure to be strong as I can to save you all wait for me.....'Julia' .
(Please I'm not well versed in the gamer so there will be some hiccups here and there so please correct when I'm wrong)
/A.N: Don't Ask for a Harem!/
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DxD no harem [and Devil Peerage] is like Harry potter with no magic, Star Wars with no Force, X-Men with no mutants, One-piece with no oceans! The author of DxD would spit blood reading some of these portrayals of his art! I wont touch this trash! Oh well I do believe in freedom of speech but man could you do this story in Pokemon instead?
So a DXD story without harem is nice, but this author is strongly opinionated against perverts, harem and lust and is a proponent of the one true love concept and is forcing his opinion down your throat in a story which originally is predominantly about lust. I absolutely hate it when an author tries to force his point of view down my throat. The story is well written and would be fun to read but the author to me seems to try to push his agenda against common fanfic elements he dislikes in your face in a story which orginally is everything that she/he dislikes except for the fantasy elements.
Whyyyyy! Just why why why why why why why why why why why hy why why are you making a high school dxd fanfic without a Harem we are already used to those girls being with Mc and if they are not with MC, it just feel like Ntr. You could even make some original instead of this.
The author knows how to write, but there is no plot development. Day one: I am an ordinary person, day two: I became stronger than the average devil. Day three: digimon. Day four: a dungeon to rock me. Day five: I'm going to go to another universe ..... Sorry, what? And where is the development of characters, where are the events of the Dxd universe. Where is anything? If you weren't going to develop the DxD universe, then why did you mention this universe at all? Write a fanfic about Killer Reborn if you want. No, I'm not against traveling to other universes, but is this jammed into the main universe? Even his original world (Earth) was much better developed
You got stuck in the great trap of gamer fanfics, which is you’ve focused way too much on the gamer system and not enough on the actual story. You don’t need to fill your word count every chapter posting his stats.
Bullshit story DxD with no Harem whats the point of doing this fanfiction anyway if it has no harem. do this shit on MHA not DxD, this is sickening,blasphemous
Author, you didn't one of the review so I'm wondering what happen with his wife ? I don't want to start this story depending on it so could you please clarify ?
The writing quality is pretty good, and ledgable, but the plot leaves is all over the place. The speed of updates to the novel has a good pase.Why I think this is not good. First going to 3 diffrent places (DxD, some magic world with a dungeon, digital world) within the span of 20 something chapters makes the plot too confusing. Second the characters back story is just so confusing he wants revenge but the MC feels like he is lacking a personality with no character growth the character dose not feel genuine at all. Third this story is mainly driven by so many cliches; SPOILER: Issie mom becomes pregnant, 'THE WHITE KNIGHT' theme character, all girls are attracted to him, Batman esc. back story... It not bad to write with these cliches there is just no spacing in between plots ther needs to be more detial, and needs to be fleshed out more. Four if you are not writing a character that is not going to have a harem don't start him off in a world that is basically softcore p*** with fan service characters. Five everything seems too forced, and the MC feel fake and bland. To the author your writing is good and you do have talent, but what do I know I've never written a story anyways I digress you should keep your character in one world to start off with and have him interact with the main characters of said plot, and whenever there is down time in between the first world plot you should go to another or just finish off the entire world events before moving to the next world. These are just my thoughts, and you can take them with a grain of salt, but in my opinion you should rewrite right before you went to that dungeon world, and stay in DxD.
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I'll try to warn other readers that want to start reading this and I hope there will be people that see my review before going through the mental anguish I went through. I couldn't read past chapter 9 because the mc is retarded af. The premise of the story is that the mc is a soldier that died in the arms of his best friend. His wish is to get strong enough to be able to return to his original world and kill the god that wants to wipe out humanity so he can be able to live with his wife and newborn son. He gets reincarnated into Issei which gives him huge potential because of Ddraig, but the idiot goes to school and stops to watch anime and spend time with his new "family". I find this incredibly stupid, he has no idea how time passes between worlds, his time limit is extremely vague since he needs to wait for 3 people to pick him up to return home and kill god and instead he wastes his time with school and unimportant people. I understand the need to relax from time to time but wasting a lot of time stupidly while not knowing how much time he has just rubs me wrong. So for whoever thinks the same, you have this warning, plus the author has a huge problem of showing the status too many damn times, it ended up thrice in one chapter
Yikes, DxD and no Harem is absurd. Even the Author of DxD said that the anime was fanservice and it was practically battles of harem characters so just because of this I give yoy 3.8 review. Now I'm not saying I hate the Novel it is just the way it is for me. Massive Harems are not good, I understand but DxD and only one girl. something just does 't add up. Now bite me if you want for this review! P.s. you are not thw only one I give this kinda of review when in DxD universe and only one girl. so don't feel down lol
you copied and character and world then cut all strings from said character and its plot, using almost no elements from the world or characters to enhance the story. all he does is talk to a Digimon and look at his stats.
I read some chapters, but well I can't continue it. no harem to me just ruins the whole concept of dxd and you also took issei's place. it's a really good work.
Just Do this shit on MHA not DxD you stupid Fuck you’re using an anime with harem as a fanfiction and you’re not even adding harem bullshit author do this shit on MHA fanfic
-levelling is too fast i mean he only train for 1 month or something (correct me if i am wrong) -stat raising is to mess first of all in chapter 8 he can raise ability and he is using STAT point its suppose to raise stat not ability -stat point and levelling is too mess up please tell me how the suppose 144 stat point drop to 100 stat point when he is not even raising his stat at all -ability raising is mess up first of all martial art mastery is suppose to be passive instead of active and i mean there is a saying 'that fighting can make your progress faster than training' i mean his martial art mastery lvl 17 (or something at that level) still didnt raise after fighting a lot of zombie but when he is training it rose suddenly -theres no renewal taekwando on his ability after only martial art mastery so if he raise this to lvl 100 he can train all kind of martial art this is so mess up
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orry, what? And where is the development of characters, where are the events of the Dxd universe. Where is anything? If you weren't going to develop the DxD universe, then why did you mention this universe at all?
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If I want to say my opinion about the novel it's so so👿(when you use the dxd world background, you also have to make a harem🥰 to been loyal to the principal of the storyline to entertain your fan😎, not something like this novel😤) Also ,is author droppings his other work? Because there is not a single update for a long time🤨
wasted time ✌️ I'll change my rating & review if you improve. gggvjehsheshjehehwhehehehehebehhehehehehehehehdhgegehwhwhwhehegehehehehehe
good potential novel that I stumble across today the. already love the start of the story.................................... .......... .....