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one of the best fan fictions I've read it hit me hard when it was dropped I felt sad but remembering the memories of the joys this fan fiction brought to me I was able to move on
can anyone recommend me some none harem fanfic novel I'm tired of reading them and it's hard to find no harem fanfic novel......................
Muy buena bro pero no debiste dejarla si seguías subiéndola seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes eran los mejores
dropped ..........................................................................................................................................
The author just doesn't understand anything, in one of the first chapters he threatens to kill 2 kids because he doesn't agree with their dream, and then with a single complaint change an entire schools uniform. Makes no sense the rest of the book either.
How is it so good. a bit sad that its dropped nether the LeSs its really good might be best i have seen in my life i dont know how this isnt a 5 star book
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why dropped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😩 da heck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well, this is the reason why didnt like harem type protag. tbh this ff is good on beginning, include awesome protag background until dxd canon. after that,meh protag more became goodie type protag with harem forced plot.(his parent and his friend telling to get harem continously) if author disregard harem seeker's review on his fanfic. maybe this ff became more likable since mc more focusing on multiverse journey.
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I liked it, it has a good plot and how the characters developed, or dear author, I would like to know if you are still taking more chapters or have it abandoned so as not to get excited
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Me:*notices harem tag added* Trash bin: NOOOOO, MY FOOD! Me:*notices hiatus in the title* well, Fuck. ( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )
The man is in DxD...but doesn't do anything in DxD ? What is this bullshit ??? WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!
I really like your story. Please stop showing the status so much. Once a chapter is good.iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiioioooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Ohh! Wow nice finally a dxd fanfic without harem keep up the good work. Everyone has their own openinon so hope the aurthor won’t mind the rude comments.
(HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM) (HAREM HAREM HAREM) (HAREM HAREM ) (HAREM) ......................................................................................
The Writing quality is decent. Still some flaws but a lot better than what u usually get at webnovel. The Story developement and character Design are kind of meh. The MC is a ******** simp and doest move on. No problem with Single Romance if the person is actually in the Story and not up far in the future. What makes it worse is that a simp lands in dxd. Interaction with other characters is so-so till now. The world building is ok. The System is a bit messy and seems a bit random at times. But u see the author tried to bring in structure and wants to keep a look out at the progress and the stats
Los primeros 35 capitulos fueron buenos pero los siguientes bajaron mucho la calidad del fanfic.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
orry, what? And where is the development of characters, where are the events of the Dxd universe. Where is anything? If you weren't going to develop the DxD universe, then why did you mention this universe at all?
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bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.
I'll try to warn other readers that want to start reading this and I hope there will be people that see my review before going through the mental anguish I went through. I couldn't read past chapter 9 because the mc is retarded af. The premise of the story is that the mc is a soldier that died in the arms of his best friend. His wish is to get strong enough to be able to return to his original world and kill the god that wants to wipe out humanity so he can be able to live with his wife and newborn son. He gets reincarnated into Issei which gives him huge potential because of Ddraig, but the idiot goes to school and stops to watch anime and spend time with his new "family". I find this incredibly stupid, he has no idea how time passes between worlds, his time limit is extremely vague since he needs to wait for 3 people to pick him up to return home and kill god and instead he wastes his time with school and unimportant people. I understand the need to relax from time to time but wasting a lot of time stupidly while not knowing how much time he has just rubs me wrong. So for whoever thinks the same, you have this warning, plus the author has a huge problem of showing the status too many damn times, it ended up thrice in one chapter
The story is very interesting with unique mc. The author combine few unique anime that other author rarely used, making it more interesting. However, some part of the story feel rough and rushed, like mc relationship with mc's new parent. Sure the mc is not the real issei, but can the mc atleast show some logical interaction with his new parent. Not just go bang and the boom
Yikes, DxD and no Harem is absurd. Even the Author of DxD said that the anime was fanservice and it was practically battles of harem characters so just because of this I give yoy 3.8 review. Now I'm not saying I hate the Novel it is just the way it is for me. Massive Harems are not good, I understand but DxD and only one girl. something just does 't add up. Now bite me if you want for this review! P.s. you are not thw only one I give this kinda of review when in DxD universe and only one girl. so don't feel down lol
Nada tiene sentido, nada va con la historia, solo fue al mundo DxD para tener el cuerpo de Issei, no pasa nada interesante, todo el tiempo se ha e más fuerte y ya
the story feels bland and its too confusing , a lot grammar mistakes , and why did you choose dxd ? 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
The novel has no bad potential. But I would like the author not to use a fender, which is little known in the future. For example, such as digimon. ATTENTION BEGINS SPOILER!!! Since during the arch of digimon I did not understand anything at all (maybe I am the only one)THE END OF SPOILERS!!!! It is also desirable that in the following arches paid more attention to feelings and relationships between characters (only large arches, not small (e.g. dmgimon, king of shamans, etc.). Now harem.... if the author believes that the harem is not needed, then do not do it. If you think there might be a harem in your novel, add it, but whatever it looks like is a pokemon collection. And those who say that DxD without harem is not DxD, then go to hell.
The status is all wrong he is supposed to grind status points all days but the autor forgets to change it, I thing the autor never played rol or and rpg if he doesn't understand the relation between stats. I personally don't recommend this to anyone before he makes a rewrite and do things right.
good potential novel that I stumble across today the. already love the start of the story.................................... .......... .....
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
one of the best fan fictions I've read it hit me hard when it was dropped I felt sad but remembering the memories of the joys this fan fiction brought to me I was able to move on
can anyone recommend me some none harem fanfic novel I'm tired of reading them and it's hard to find no harem fanfic novel......................
Muy buena bro pero no debiste dejarla si seguías subiéndola seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes eran los mejores
dropped ..........................................................................................................................................
The author just doesn't understand anything, in one of the first chapters he threatens to kill 2 kids because he doesn't agree with their dream, and then with a single complaint change an entire schools uniform. Makes no sense the rest of the book either.
How is it so good. a bit sad that its dropped nether the LeSs its really good might be best i have seen in my life i dont know how this isnt a 5 star book
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Spoiler enthüllen why dropped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😩 da heck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well, this is the reason why didnt like harem type protag. tbh this ff is good on beginning, include awesome protag background until dxd canon. after that,meh protag more became goodie type protag with harem forced plot.(his parent and his friend telling to get harem continously) if author disregard harem seeker's review on his fanfic. maybe this ff became more likable since mc more focusing on multiverse journey.
,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
I liked it, it has a good plot and how the characters developed, or dear author, I would like to know if you are still taking more chapters or have it abandoned so as not to get excited
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Me:*notices harem tag added* Trash bin: NOOOOO, MY FOOD! Me:*notices hiatus in the title* well, Fuck. ( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )( ╥ω╥ )
The man is in DxD...but doesn't do anything in DxD ? What is this bullshit ??? WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!WRY!
I really like your story. Please stop showing the status so much. Once a chapter is good.iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiioioooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Ohh! Wow nice finally a dxd fanfic without harem keep up the good work. Everyone has their own openinon so hope the aurthor won’t mind the rude comments.
(HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM) (HAREM HAREM HAREM) (HAREM HAREM ) (HAREM) ......................................................................................
The Writing quality is decent. Still some flaws but a lot better than what u usually get at webnovel. The Story developement and character Design are kind of meh. The MC is a ******** simp and doest move on. No problem with Single Romance if the person is actually in the Story and not up far in the future. What makes it worse is that a simp lands in dxd. Interaction with other characters is so-so till now. The world building is ok. The System is a bit messy and seems a bit random at times. But u see the author tried to bring in structure and wants to keep a look out at the progress and the stats
Los primeros 35 capitulos fueron buenos pero los siguientes bajaron mucho la calidad del fanfic.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
orry, what? And where is the development of characters, where are the events of the Dxd universe. Where is anything? If you weren't going to develop the DxD universe, then why did you mention this universe at all?
Spoiler enthüllen bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.bulshit story.
I'll try to warn other readers that want to start reading this and I hope there will be people that see my review before going through the mental anguish I went through. I couldn't read past chapter 9 because the mc is retarded af. The premise of the story is that the mc is a soldier that died in the arms of his best friend. His wish is to get strong enough to be able to return to his original world and kill the god that wants to wipe out humanity so he can be able to live with his wife and newborn son. He gets reincarnated into Issei which gives him huge potential because of Ddraig, but the idiot goes to school and stops to watch anime and spend time with his new "family". I find this incredibly stupid, he has no idea how time passes between worlds, his time limit is extremely vague since he needs to wait for 3 people to pick him up to return home and kill god and instead he wastes his time with school and unimportant people. I understand the need to relax from time to time but wasting a lot of time stupidly while not knowing how much time he has just rubs me wrong. So for whoever thinks the same, you have this warning, plus the author has a huge problem of showing the status too many damn times, it ended up thrice in one chapter
The story is very interesting with unique mc. The author combine few unique anime that other author rarely used, making it more interesting. However, some part of the story feel rough and rushed, like mc relationship with mc's new parent. Sure the mc is not the real issei, but can the mc atleast show some logical interaction with his new parent. Not just go bang and the boom
Yikes, DxD and no Harem is absurd. Even the Author of DxD said that the anime was fanservice and it was practically battles of harem characters so just because of this I give yoy 3.8 review. Now I'm not saying I hate the Novel it is just the way it is for me. Massive Harems are not good, I understand but DxD and only one girl. something just does 't add up. Now bite me if you want for this review! P.s. you are not thw only one I give this kinda of review when in DxD universe and only one girl. so don't feel down lol
Nada tiene sentido, nada va con la historia, solo fue al mundo DxD para tener el cuerpo de Issei, no pasa nada interesante, todo el tiempo se ha e más fuerte y ya
the story feels bland and its too confusing , a lot grammar mistakes , and why did you choose dxd ? 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
The novel has no bad potential. But I would like the author not to use a fender, which is little known in the future. For example, such as digimon. ATTENTION BEGINS SPOILER!!! Since during the arch of digimon I did not understand anything at all (maybe I am the only one)THE END OF SPOILERS!!!! It is also desirable that in the following arches paid more attention to feelings and relationships between characters (only large arches, not small (e.g. dmgimon, king of shamans, etc.). Now harem.... if the author believes that the harem is not needed, then do not do it. If you think there might be a harem in your novel, add it, but whatever it looks like is a pokemon collection. And those who say that DxD without harem is not DxD, then go to hell.
The status is all wrong he is supposed to grind status points all days but the autor forgets to change it, I thing the autor never played rol or and rpg if he doesn't understand the relation between stats. I personally don't recommend this to anyone before he makes a rewrite and do things right.
good potential novel that I stumble across today the. already love the start of the story.................................... .......... .....